MaNan SS:- Baked with Love CHAPTER 11 UPDATED 13/01 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Awesome
Amazing
Superb update
Hahahahaha navni rockd fab5 shockd
Nandini strong hi achi lgti hai roti huyi nhi...
Aapne suspense bna diya muje lgta hai fab5 honge ya fir mank...
Lovd it
Thnks for pm me
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Hi dear...
That was an amazing update...

Nandini Rocks... Fab 5 have finally met their match... it was hilarious.

You have ended on a cliff hanger... update soon... the suspense is killing...

Thanks for the PM...

Love Shrut


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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Ahhh Frizz seriously yaar fir se ni 😔
I don't know jldi update krooo plz...
n yeah that nandini's ans and navya's idea Rock yaar...
hehehehe lol so funny moment 🤣
yeah yeah we know Eifill tower hi hoga 😛
Update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Thanku all for your love and care and i am sseing there new readers too i hope they will like the story too and yeah silent readers! plss yaar ek comment tak dedoge na toh me next day hi laammbaa wala update dene ko tayaar hu par comment dedo

Chapter 5

I was shocked to see That Effiel Tower standng there in front of me but with whom he was shocked me more

Mary ma i whispered. I saw Manik supporting her and a thick stream of blood flowing from her forehead

" Anndar laao " i told and moved aside from the door . He came in and placed Mary ma on the sofa while i removed the over coat and hat

I went and brought the first aid box with me. I came and started cleaning the wound on her forehead quitely. " Baccha yeh he Manik yeh hi muhe waha se laya tha" she told me pointing towards Manik

" Ha me janti hu isse yeh mere hi college me padhta he" i replied and bandaged her forehead. I got up to go when she held my hand ," Me jaanti hu meri galti he mujhe aise bahar nahi jaana chahiye tha, I am sorry bacha " she told saddly

I went from there and brought her warm milk which she drank with the painkillers. " Sorry" she again told and that's it my patience flew away from that calm body of mine

" Mujhe ap pe gussa nahi he Mary ma mujhe gussa un logo pe he jinhone apke sath aisa kiya! Kyu Mary ma kyu? Woh sirf apko dard aur dard dete he fir kyu ap wapis jati he unke pass, agar aaj apko kuch hpjata tha toh mera kya hota tha apne kabhi socha he! Mera kon he yaha apke sivaye boliye na!" I screamed as tears fell down my eyes

" ab ap kyu nahi bolti he Mary ma, unhone apko apke hi ghar ae nikal diya ! Fir jab ap mere sath khush thi toh woh fir aye aur unhone apko sab ke samne mock kiya aur dard diya , aur aaj bhi unhone wohi kiya na!" I asked shaking her shoulders as tears fell from her eyes too

" Bass bohot kar liya unhone aur bohot seh liys mene apka beta he na woh ab toh usne humari shanti dekhi he ab gussa bhi dekhega " i told and hugged Mary ma

" aap yahi rahiye me aati hu Mary ma " i replied and went towards Manik who was seeing me with billion Questions in his eyes but i choose to ignore

I went out and he followed me ," kaha ja rahi ho tum ?" He asked . " tumse koi matlab nahi samjhe" i replied and continued walking

He caught my hand and dragged me towards his and opened the back door and tried to push me inside but i protested and caught hold of his collar

" kya chaiye tumhe? Mujhe akela kyu nahi chod dete plss" i asked him as tears feel down my eyes . " kyuki jinse tum badla lene ja rahi ho woh tumhare sath bhi waisa kar sakte he" he replied

" toh kya karu chup chap sehti rahu kya ! Har mahine Mary ma unse milne jaati he aur woh haar baar aisa karte he aaj toh me unhe nahi chodungi" i repkied angrily

" par me tumhari help zarur kar sakta hu " he replied with a mischievous smile over hia face. " Tum meri madat kyu karoge? " i asked eyeing him suspiciously.

" kyuki mujhe logo ko pareshan karne me maza ata he daats it" he replied i knew it wasn't that reason ," sacch sacch batao kya baat he" i again asked

" okay i accept my defeat unki ek chipku si beti he... Pooja aur jab hum unke baju me rehte the tabh woh mujhpe line marti thi toh i use to ignore her par ussne toh mujhe pure school ke samne propose kar diya so it was embarrassing so now i want my revenge" he replied

" haaa haa ek ladki ne tumhe ha haaa haaa ha ha pro...propose kiya ha ha ha" i laughed loudly catching my stomach. " what's so funny girl ?" He asked angrily

" nothing chalo hum late ho rahe he... " i replied and started walking when he again caught my hand and pushed in the seat beside him " gadi showpiece nahi he jo chalke jaige" he replied and sat and drove off


****** The Pawars ******

He sropped and we sneaked behind the house. I went around and saw an open window. I called Manik and asked him too pick me up but he denied

" kyu?" I asked him. " me andar kaise aaunga?" He asked." uffo duffer me andar jake aage ka darwaza khol dungi na idiot " i replied hitting his head

" point he yaar" he told and picked me and placed me on the window silling." god yaha se kudungi toh agar perfect landing nahi hui toh handiya tutt jaingi" i thought

When suddenly i felt a push on my back anThuddd! i fell down right on my legs proprely. I reached the front door and unlocked it and Manik came in .

We went and saw all the members were glued to the Tv. I walked past the kitchen and saw all things nicely kep on the dinning table. I smiled mischievously and went around and found the chilli powder bottle

I went and mixed it to all the food including the dsserts but Manik literally ate half of that stupid dessert bhukad !

I went and brought some chillies and cut them into halfes and added them to water and stirred and removed it. I saw the wayer and it looked normal i wanted to check and saw Manik

I went towards him and gave him water. He drank a sip and soon i saw his eyes turning red i ran immediately and brought sugar and stuffed it into his mouth

I could sense that he was giving me glares but i was just trying to gulp down my giggles which threatened to come out of my vocal cord

We were about to ho out when i saw that Albert that idiot who was flirting with me and he was coming towards us.

But before i could speak something Manik pulled on his shoulders and rushed up the stairs and we both were passing a room when i heard the music

Gulabi aankhe ,
Jo meri dekhi,
deewana har dil hogaya,
sambhalo khudko oo mere yaaro,
Sambhalna mushkil ho gaya


I stopped Manik got of and peeped in and saw a girl wrapped in a towel her hair tied in a top knot with some stupid face pack over her face and was dancing on that song seeing Maniks photo stuck on the mirror

...wait a min Manik pic ? What the heck is that doing there? I pulled Manik by collar and asked him to peep in but he refused and whispered," yehi pooja hai "

I smiled and saw a mud pot around and picked both hand full of mud and saw in her room she was in the washroom i went in and saw there were so many face packs, masks, scrub and what not but i went and added but in all and mixed well and left

Manik saw that and gave me a hi-5 but suddenly we heard footsteps

I pulled Manik and ran in the atic but the footsteps were coming from there to i saw around and pulled a blanket over us and pushed him down .

I was over him when i realised how close he was to me . I could smell the faint smell of his cologne. He smirked and wrapped his hands around my waist and came close to my ears and whispered huskily

" don't you dare move or we will be caught " and blew air in my ears making me shiver. When suddenly we heard some voices outside and immediately hide my face in his chest and snuggled close to Manik

Soon those voices faded away i slowly parted away from Manik and saw him he was just looking in my eyes with such strong passion that i felt my limbs becoming jelly

He brought his face close to mine , so close that i could feel his hot breathe fanning my face . He touched his nose with mine snd was so close to mine lips...


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Meri timing badi buri he aur yeh baat me manti hu paar kya karu tum logo ko pareshan karne me bada maza aata he. Actually no i am a writer guys so i have to keep you all in suspense so as to make you stick to the story

Love,

Frizz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
The part was sooo damn good..
Manik and nandini both were on a mission.. I liked it a lot..
And the funny thing was manik's reason to help nandini..
They both have a really good patnership..
And the pranks they played.. hahaha
Waiting to see its outcome..
And the last part.. hayeee maar dala.. romantic romantic..
Please update next soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Awesome
Amazing
Superb update
Donno mission pr nikle hai hahahaha
Manik ko revenge lena tha propose krne ka
Nandini ne water chck manik pr kiya hahahaha
Manik araam se desert khaa rha hai bhukaddd
Face pcks mein mud mix kr diya wahh wahhh nandu...bht bdia kaam kiya...gulabi ankhein jo teri dekhi hehehehe
Lovd it
Thnks for pm me
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
hehehe
Love it when they together did the pranks.
Cant wait to see the results.
Damn funny. 🤣
Thanks for the update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
HAHAHA 🤣 DAMN AWESOME YAAR MJAA HI AA GYA BUT FIR SE SUSPENSE OHH GOD NOT ALL TYM YAAR. . CHL KOI NI UPDATE EK DUM EXPRESS ME DENA YAAR... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Omg this story is so awesome.
I am so happy i read this.
Its so different from that rona dhona nd seperation.
This manan is so cool.
And what navya did with cabir for calling him madhubala...i laughed so much that i had tears in my eyes.
I loved all the pranks nd specially manan's equation.
When nandini called manik eiffel tower nd asked him how much complan did he drink I was actually ROFLing.
U are damn good yaar.
Please give regular updates nd pm me too from the next time. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
awesome update...
loved it so much...
it was amazing...the revenge plan of manan...hilarious...chilli and mud...
can't wait to see everyone's reaction...
is it gonna be another kiss-miss...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

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