MaNan SS:- Baked with Love CHAPTER 11 UPDATED 13/01

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Hi guys i am Claudine Nadar aka Frizz sis of Angela many of u know us as the writers of Are u mine forever which is discountiued so here its actually a crazy idea but i hope u all will like it.Now by the heading it shows that its a Bakers story

Character Sketch

Hi guys i am Nandini Murthy i am a colleges student of space and the owner of Pure Bliss its my own cake shop where i cook cakes and all other items and sell for a living as i have got a scholarship from Space College its my First Day today i hope it will be good.

Hi guys ... i am Manik Malhotra the handsome hunk of Space College i am very good actually by my heart but and this side of mine is only available to my loved ones ( except Neyonika Malhotra )for all others i am Monster Manik hehehe ... nice name na don't know some stupid commoner gave me but its cool


Index

Chapter 1=Page 1

Chapter 2= Page 3

Chapter 3=Page 4

Chapter 4=Page 5

Chapter 5=Page 7

Chapter 6=Page 8

Chapter 7=Page 10

Chapter 8=Page 14

Chapter 9=Page 17

Chapter 10=Page 19

Chapter 11=Page 24



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Frizz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So here goes the chapter 1

Chapter 1

[FONT=Aria]I immediately woke up with a jerk omg ! Nandu its your first day at college and you are late gayi tu beta gayi yehi he teri kismat me daat khana ab uthja lazy bones warna daat ke saath saath detention bhi miljaiga

I immediately took a shower and came and changed into a nicely pressed white kurti and black leggings and went down and saw there was Aunt Mary dusting away the dust from the tables and chairs

She immediately saw me and passes a smile and came towards me and place her hand over my head and told ," may God tumhe protect kare baccha,aaj tumhara pehla din he na college me me dua karungi Jesus Christ se ki woh tumhari smile ko kabhi mitne na de chalo abhi breakfast karlo bohot bakwas kar liya humne

I immediately wrapped my hands around her shoulder and spoke ," yeh bakwass nahi hai bass mere liye bohot bohot sara pyar he Mary ma aur mujhe yeh bohot accha lagta he jab aap aisa karte ho kyuki woh mujhe aisi feeling deta he ki mere liye he koi iss duniya me qarna mera toh aapke siway koi nahi he i told sadly

She immediately turned around and smacked my arm and told ," firse kabhi aisa baat karega na toh kabhi baat nahi karega tumse hum samjhe na aur bohot log he jo tumse pyar karte he samjhe ab college jao warna pehle din late ho jaoge " and stuffed a toast and my tiffin in my hand which i took and rushed out

" God iss innocent soul ke sath aisa kyu kiya ? Abhi me dua karta he ki ap usse koi aisa do jo usse apni jaan se bhi zyada pyar kare " telling this Mary resumed in her work of taking care of the shop in absence of Nandini

Space college

Yess! My dream college oh how i use to wish to study here and look today i am here going to study my favourite subject Music

I entered the college and was roaming around trying to locate where i had to go when suddenly i heard some noises like someone screaming for help

I was trying to locate from where the voice was coming from when i saw a group of 5 Students hovering around a garbage bin like bees but mischief was what i could say written over their faces

They were 2 Girls there 1 looked like a fashion model while the other one totally opposite tomboyish type and there were 3 boys also there one who was a bit short in hieght with purpule headphones around his head and the othere one with the height of an Effiel tower and yeah there was another boy to who wore a cap but he not at all participated in what the other 4s were doing instead he was just very much busy in his guitar

When they all started moving away and that Effiel Tower hung a guitar which was laying on a bench over his back and the 5 Of them rushed off

I came out and went towards that dustbin when i again heard those loud screams coming from inside the dustbin this time i went more closer and saw it was tied up with a small hanky and jute ropes so that it stays intact

When suddenly whoever was inside started banging on the doors freaking me out of my skin. I could her muffeled voices like " kholo # yeh kholo hume bohot daar lag raha he"
Now i was sure there someone inside it

I removed out my Swiss Knife and started cutting open the ropes and removed them and threw it away and opened the hanky when suddenly the flap flew open and a human figure covered with hay,leaves,grass and wet mud stood in front of me with all the leaves and grass shattered over the ground because of it so blast full exit from the dustbin


That person came out and sat on the bench nearby and started removing the Hay ,mud,leaves and grass stuck over her i could hear her sniffing silently as her shoulders kept raising and falling again and again

Sat besideher and helped her in doing so.Soon we both managed to remove all the things stuck over her. I brought some water and she wiped her face. I saw her and what came into my mind was she is so cute and adoraable


"Thanks" she muttered with a quivering voice and and shaky hands

" I am Nandini Murthy whats yours?" I asked with a ray of hope in my heart that she will open up and i may be able to become friends with her

Navya...my name is Navya Naveli she told in a gloomy voice

I kept my hand over her shoulders and told ," hey why are getting so upset now? I saved you na come on now go in the washroom and become fresh and come" and saying this i dragged her towards the washroom

She soon came out and was looking nice i must say she was cute sa adorable baby

I saw her and she told me that we must head towards the canteen i agreed and we both were about to enter when something struck me and i pulled her before we enter into a corner

" Navya i know i have saved you but pls don't tell anyone ki mene tumhe waha se bahar nikala warna woh..." but Navya cut me in the middle and told," hum pagal dikte he kya jo unhe yeh baat bolenge aur ha pehle tum aandar jao fir hum aate he warna unhe shak ho jaiga "

" hmm tum thik kehrahi ho ...chalo fir me chalti hu tum aa jana thik he" and saying this i entered the canteen

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Pheww! Now this was a long chapter and i hope you all will like it[/FONT]


Love,

Frizz

NOTE:-buddy me for pms and pls comments length lamba warna chapter chotu sa
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nyc start
cont soon
hope nandu does not get into trouble
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The chapter was soo mesmerising..
Nandini is soo cute.. and she owes a bakery shop woooww..
The way she described navya.. cute sa adorable baby :-)
Now wanna see how fab5 and navni come face to face..
And specially how manan cross their paths
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome character sketch and Chpt 1...
loved it...glad as always nandu saves the day...
awesome bond between mary aunty and nandu...its so pure...want to know more about nandu's background and family...
can't wait for the official intro of FAB5 especially manik...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Promo

[SIZE=3]"Hey you get lost from here this is our seat ok yaha sirf hum baithte he ok!" And by sign language told me to piss off

But that behavior of his pissed me off and i stood up and literally screamed over him "Kyu? Me kyu jau yaha se tum jao na aur ha rahi baat iss seat ki toh iss pe tumhara naam nahi likha he jo tum muuh uthaye chale aaye samhe!... when i heard Navyas voice

Nandini chalo yaha se yeh unki fixed seat he woh yaha humesha baithte he samjhi ab chalo and she started dragging me away with her

ek min...tum toh wahi ho na jisse humne kuch minto pehle dustbin me band kiya tha? asked that Eiffel Tower

nahi...na...nahi toh koi galat faimi hogai he tumhe saying this Navya started walking ahead but they followed her to which eventually even i had to follow her because she is my friend no actually 1st friend...

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Abb kya hoga ? Manik and nandini how will they cross paths ? Does anyone have any idea ? Tension nahi me hu na yaha pe 2-3 update me introduction ho jaiga

Love,

Frizz
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Promo

"Hey you get lost from here this is our seat ok yaha sirf hum baithte he ok!" And by sign language told me to piss off

But that behavior of his pissed me off and i stood up and literally screamed over him "Kyu? Me kyu jau yaha se tum jao na aur ha rahi baat iss seat ki toh iss pe tumhara naam nahi likha he jo tum muuh uthaye chale aaye samhe!... when i heard Navyas voice

Nandini chalo yaha se yeh unki fixed seat he woh yaha humesha baithte he samjhi ab chalo and she started dragging me away with her

ek min...tum toh wahi ho na jisse humne kuch minto pehle dustbin me band kiya tha? asked that Eiffel Tower

nahi...na...nahi toh koi galat faimi hogai he tumhe saying this Navya started walking ahead but they followed her to which eventually even i had to follow her because she is my friend no actually 1st friend...

________

Abb kya hoga ? Manik and nandini how will they cross paths ? Does anyone have any idea ? Tension nahi me hu na yaha pe 2-3 update me introduction ho jaiga

Love,

Frizz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ooo.. nice promo..
Why always nandini takes panga.. but this is also true that because of this panga only they fall in love in future..

Anyways part jaldi se post kardo please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was nice.. Very similar to the show.. So monster is not the name given to Manik by Nandini?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yaar... Don't make fab 5 torture Nandini.. That will be like the show only.. Do something new

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