MaNan SS:- Baked with Love CHAPTER 11 UPDATED 13/01 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Superb story
Just loved it👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey frizz
I wanna ask you serious question... Answer honestly... Will you???
I want to know are you really thirteen years old or you both twin sis are kidding us??
Really yaar how could you guys can bring these emotional dialogues so easily in such a tender age... I'm highly impressed by your writing
Update was so emotional at start.. Comedy at middle and romantic at last
Oh god i was crying when nandu broke down... Her love for Mary Maa its really heart touching
Manik rescue mary maa...its unexpected
Holy shit!! Naughty nandu she spiked every single dish including desserts and water too.. Poor manik Bali ka bakra bangaya by drinking water
Oh that crazy girl proposed manik in his school days.. Its interesting
Oh no nandu spoilt that girls face pack too..ab toh gayi uska chehra
Last but not least.. Manan moment was magical
Baby do answer my above questions I'm really curious to know..
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
I admit it I am late actually super late but i was busy and Angela was just throwing tantrums while i was typing ending up we both fighting and Dad grounding us and not allowing to touch the computer i speaking too much nowadays right? Let it go here's the chapter...

Chapter 6

My breath was hitching in my throat at the thought of Manik being so close to me. His hot breathe was still fanning my face increasing my body temprature

He moved his nose towards right and brought it over my cheeks nuzzling it there making my heartbeats wild. When suddenly " AAAhhh" we both heard a scream making us catch our ears

" who the hell is screaming" i muttered angrily and shoved away that bedsheet away from. I got up and dusted the dust away from me.

"Yikes" i heard Manik scream and climbed on one of the racks like a monkey."NANDINI! Get that stupid cockroach out of here!" screamed Manik like a Maniac

" Where is the cockroach?" I asked and watched him confusingly." There...there it is among the sheets plss bhaagao usse waha se plsss" he screamed and started scratching that rack nervously

I spotted that sickening creature lying among the sheets. I still remembered how afraid i used to be of it and the Mary ma used to come and kill it. And when became big those fears just flew away from me, how strong i had made myself.

" What the hell are you doing just kill that mind sickening brown blob" i heard Manik hissing angrily at me. " Shut up ladke hoke cockroach se daarte ho sharam nahi aati ?" I asked snapped at him angrily

" konsi book me likha he ki cockroach se sirf aurate daar sakti hr?" He to replied back furiously. " ladko ke naam pe dhapa ho tum " i told him and picked up that cockroach by its anteena

" Manik dekho brown-brown cockroach " i told him and swinged it in front of him making him squeal and squek in fear. " plss me request karta hu door..door rakho usse mujhse plss nandini tum devi , saraswati, durga sab ho pls mujhe chod do" he screamed

" Accha bachu yeh choti abhi devi saraswati ban gayi ruk abhi tujhe Ma Kali ka roop dikhati hu" i replied and brought that cockroach more close to him. " Nandini dekho Mary Ma ghar pe akeli he plss jane do mujhe" he again screamed

" Mary Ma" i whispered and flung that cockroach away and grabbed Maniks hand and started walking away.

We hiding reached the door when suddenly that Pooja in tears was walking towards us her skin totally rashed out and had turned dark red in colour.

Before i could tell anything Manik pulled me down under a table and placed me over his lap. I was so scared that Pooja might discover us that I hid my face in the crook of Maniks head

His hands slithered over my waist like a snake and he pulled me towards himself. I felt Poojas footsteps stop i turned my head a little and saw her standing right in front of us.

I was just getting scared when suddenly i saw a small boys feet coming towards Pooja and telling, " Didi don't cry nothing will happen come lets go in my room " and he dragged her away

Daniel i whispered and smiled widely when suddenly that steps retured and bend down and i saw Daniel seeing me and smiling.

" i saved you and i want a treat at your shop" he told cutely to which i readily agreed. " khana maat khana Daniel its spiced" i told him to which he nodded

" Nice Boyfriend di" he told and ran away while i just couldn't stop the blood from rushing to my cheeks. " Lets move " whispered Manik in my ears and i nodded like a child

We soon came out and ran towards the car but there was a hurdle waiting for us near the yard gate named Bozo thier stupid , knuckle-minded dog who always chewed away either mine footwear or shawl whenever i visited them

" Woof!" It barked as soon as it saw us " Manik what are we are to do now?" I asked tugging at his shirt. " Stay calm and don't move" he replied " yeah! Aur fir woh humara barbeque banake khajaiga " i replied sarcastically

" okay so do what i will do ok " he told and i nodded " lets sing a song and try to manofy the dog what say?" He asked " have you gone nuts?" I replied but he went front and started singing

Who let the dogs out
{Woof, woof, woof, woof}
{Woof, woof, woof, woof}
{Woof, woof, woof, woof}
{Woof, woof, woof, woof}

Who let the dogs out {woof, woof, woof, woof}
Who let the dogs out {woof, woof, woof, woof}

{Woof, woof, woof, woof}


And started dancing like an idiot or i say a bimbo and suddenly caught hold of my hand and started dancing with me making my body move according to his wish while that stupid dog was enjoying the show

When the party was nice, the party was bumpin' {Hey, Yippie, Yi, Yo}
And everybody havin' a ball {Hah, ho, Yippie Yi Yo}
Untill the fellas ": start the name callin': " {Yippie Yi Yo}
And the girls respond to the call
I heard a poor man shout out

Who let the dogs out {woof, woof, woof, woof}
Who let the dogs out {woof, woof, woof, woof}
Who let the dogs out {woof, woof, woof, woof}
Who let the dogs out {woof, woof, woof, woof}


And sang literally shouting his heads out in my ears making the drums vibrate violently. When suddenly i heard screams from the house which means that they have ate up the spiced food yo!

I see ya' little speed boat head up our coast
She really want to skip town
Get back cruffy, back scruffy,
Get back u flea infested mungrel

{Woof, woof, woof, woof}
{Woof, woof, woof, woof}
{Woof, woof, woof, woof}
{Woof, woof, woof, woof}


I knew they can come out anytime hearing this idiot singing at the top of his voice in middle of the night. I freed myself from his dancing clutches and went and brought the garden hose and sprayed it over the dog

It ran away yelping in fear but this another dog was still dancing trying to impress an imaginary dog when i took the hose and sprayed ut over him drenching him head to toe and walked towards the car

" That was mean " he came and told me as i sat in the car. "Oh really and what you were doing was idiot and stupid" i snapped back.

" By the way it was a fantastic night ! I didn't knew you were such a good company" he told me while i just gave him a cute smile . I felt his gaze over me but ignored it

Now its enought from 10 Mins he is starring at me!" Keep those bloody damn eyes of yours on the road" i yold him and he immediately obeyed it

We reached Pure Bliss I got down and went in " at least rhanxs yih bol do" i heard him shout but ignored and went in . I went in and brought out that cake which i had keept in the fridge

I piped a Thanks over it and packed it and went out and saw him starting his engine ready to zoom off

" wait" i shouted and he immediately halted and saw towards me and smirked. I went near the car and kept the cake in his car " thanks ghar pe jake kha lena kyuki mujhe nahi lagta he tumne khana khaya he" i told

" tumhe kaise malum?" He asked in a surprised tone " the way you were gobbling that desert indicated it " i told and walked away in ...


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Kaisa tha? I knew it was rubbish but Angela was irritating me too much. And yeah people i am 13 so is Angela the difference among both of us is she is hyperactive and non- patience types & i am also a hyperactive but a bit mature and yeah Mere priy silent readers aapse yeh darkwast he ki comment kare woh nahi toh at least like kare aur mujhe aur apne EXISTENCE ka koi saboot paish kare

Love

Fizz& Angela

Note:- we both wrote it thats why and we both pondered a thousand thoughts over it so its our boths !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Awesome awesome awesome.
I just completely love this story.
U r one hell of a cutypie. 🤗
Thanks a zillion for the pm.
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Frizz... Baby I'm so much impressed by you both sistaa's. Thanks for the pm. Update was rocking one. Loved the cutie pie Daniel.Manik seriously gone crazy... To manofy dog he's singing.. This is hilarious I liked the way nandu presented her thanks to manik... I'm sure once he tastes cake he'll be fidaa for her cooking skills.Now I'm stopping here only. Till then take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
I really liked your update. And the thanks part was soo good.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Damm funny..hahhahahahaha
I am laughing like maniac...
U nailed it...
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...Fizz u wrote it well...
U r a very good writer...I just loved it...
Manik was hell scared of cockroach...it was so funny the way he was pleading nandu to keep it away from him...manan scenes was too cute...
Daniel is so cute and adorable...
Manik was singing to manofy the dog...that was funny...
Nandu gave him cake as she knew he hasn't had anything...that was so good...
Update soon...and thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it so much...
their closeness was just too cute...
daniel is a friend of nandu...it was hilarious when he said nice bf...
the dance in front of the dog was just icing on the cake...
glad that they spent this night together...cant believe manik was scared of a cockroach...
the cake gesture to sat thank you was sweet...wonder whats gonna happen tomorrow...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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THANKS FOR THE PM... LOVED IT... IT WAS SO EXCITING AND THAT SOND HEHEHE THAT WAS AWSOME... LOVE THE NEW BONDING... LOVE YOU...

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