MaNan SS:- Baked with Love CHAPTER 11 UPDATED 13/01

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dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Awesome
Amazing
Superb update tha
Manik dog ko manofy krne ke liye dance or song gaane lgaaa hahahaha...
Manik cockroach se bhi drta hahahaha...
Muje ye bindasss type nandini bht pasand ayi...manik bhi impress ho gea iss nandu se
Lovd it
Thnks for pm me
Continue soon

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crazydreamer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

HEHEHEHEHEHE IT WAS DAMN FANTABULOUS YAAR I LIKED IT A LOT
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HEHEHEHE THAT MANIK's DANCE N SINGING WAS DAMN FUNNY 🤣🤣😛
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I SERIOUSLY WANTED TO TALK WITH U BY CALL 😉 U R CRAZY GIRL BUT I Love CRAZINESS 😊
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STAY BLESSED
TC TY FOR PM
Love You 😉

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rimsha01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

That was IMPRESSIVE. Great job.

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Sujitha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Hey hi..

I came across ur story..
I read all parts in one go..

When I was reading I was laughing like a maniac..
I literally laughed seriously..

Pls update soon..

Love
Suji :-)

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suraiya77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

What a hillarious chapter!!
Loved it
I was literally laughing while reading
manik is afraid of cockroach!
The last part was also awesome
continue soon

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Dhingli44

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Damn! Why didn't I read this before 😆
I loved it all..
Pls PM me.. 😊
Nd if you update regularly na...I'm damn sure this will be a super hit 😉

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FrizzAngie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Thank you so much for this great response for my story and yeah MERI crazy dreamer even I would love to talk to you and even in this update Angela has helped me so the credits eventually gets divided between us and do enjoy the chapter...

Chapter 7

Next morning i felt two small hands trying to push and pull me which was not at all effecting me in any ways suddenly i heard a cute voice ," Didu get up na mujhe cake khana he plss utho naa"

Daniel I thought to my self and got up lazyly and stretched my arms and pulled that Baichain aatma in my arms and kissed his cheeks ," Didu cake khana he" he cribed

" ha baba u go wake up Mary ma till then i will get fresh by the way kal kya hua ghar pe" i asked as i was entering the washroom

" Bohot hungama " replied Daniel and we both and giggled and i went in to get fresh. I came out and changed myself into a Red top and black jeans. I combed my hairs and came down

I saw Mary ma talking with Daniel. I was passing when Mary ma asked," Nandu tere pass boyfriend bhi he? " and i stood rooted to my place not able to answer this Q.

" Na..na..nahi Mary ma woh Manik tha " i replied and went into the kitchen. " didu chocolate truffle with white vanilla cream " told Daniel and sat on the cooking slab.

" ya ya my chotu baby ap keliye sab kuch " i told and pulled his cheeks to which he smiled broadly. " Anyone there? " i heard a voice. " Daniel jao jake dekho kon he" i told him to whic he immediately ran off

" didu didu apka boyfriend aya he " came Daniel running towards me." kya baak rahe ho Daniel kon aya he thik se bolo na " i replied as i was busy making the meringue.

" Hello Nandini Murthy " i heard a hoarse voice calling me from behind. I turned around and found that Manik Malhotra starring at me giving a lopsided smile.

" Tum , tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?" I asked angrily. " Nandu aise baat karta he kya koi? " i heard Mary mas stern voice. " Vohi toh Mary ma yeh aisi he hai humesha rudely baat karti he " told Manik and made a sad face.

" aa nautanki yeh apna drama band karo aur yeh baatao ki yaha kyu aaye ho! " i told angrily. " dekha, dekha Mary ma " told Manik and kept his head on Mary ma s shoulders

" yeh itni acchi smell kaha se aa rahi he Lady Mogambo " told Manik and gave a hi-5 to Daniel. " Get lost you Effiel tower " i replied and removed the truffles from rhe oven

"Truffles" screamed Daniel & Manik happily and tried to touch them but i smacked to which they held thier hands and screamed ," Oow!" And i giggled. " never be greedy Daniel" i reminded him.

I scooped some cream in the pipe and piped it in swirls over the truffles and turned to take some more cream but found the bowl empty with Manik and Daniel standing near it with thier hands behind

I came near Daniel and wiped some cream stuck over his chin to which he got shocked and i smiled seeing him like that . I went behind the corner and threw some flour over him to which he got shocked

I giggled to which he came and grabbed a handful of it and came near me giving a i-wont-spare-u glare to which i immediately caught hold of the gram flour and again threw it over him and ran away from there giggling

When suddenly Daniel came in front of me and threw some flour over me. I saw him with angry eyes when suddenly i felt two hands smearing all flour over my face

" Manik! " i screamed and took the tub of flour and threw it over him angrily drenching him fully with the flour from head to toe. I giggled when i saw him like this . He walked towards me while i took my steps behind.

Suddenly i felt a wall behind me. I saw me to which he immediately pinned both my hands to the wall and came so close to my face making my body shiver with his touchs

He came so close and hide his face in the crook of my neck smearing the flour on his cheeks over mine and did the same with mine other cheek and kissed my shoulder

I was shocked when suddenly i felt another wet kiss over my shoulder to which i fisted my hands to stop the moan to escape from my mouth but he again placed more 2 kisses to which i could not control and let a moan come out of my cords

I felt him trying to go more deep into mine crook to which my whole body shivered to which he relised my hands and pulled me more close towards him self through my waist. He snaked his hands on my waist

I held his shoulders to control myself i didn't knew why but it felt so good. I felt complete being around him i liked what he was doing when suddenly i heard Mary ma calling me

I immediately pushed Manik away and ran towards Mary ma . I reached there and saw Cabir there. I was shocked to see him there. " lady mogambo" he told to which i got angry and puffed my cheeks and sat beside Mary ma

" Cabir" i heard Maniks voice to which he came towards Cabir but he just punched him in the stomach ," saale tu itni jaldi utha iss lady mogambo ke liye" he screamed. " aa joker lady mogambo hoga tera dost paar me nahi hu" i replied back instantly

" didu sahi bol rahi he " i heard Daniel's voice when suddenly my eyes shot up towards the plate of truffles but i found none there ." Daniel you ate all the truffles bad boy now no chocolates for a week." I told him to which he became sad

" don't worry champ me hu na yeh lady mogambo aisi hi he sirf kadva bolti he" told Manik and picked up Daniel in his arms. " Mai bhi dekhti hu tum usse chocolate kaisi khilate ho" i told and took Daniel from his hands .

" O baccha party tumlogo ko college nahi jane ka he kya? " told Mary ma and caught hold of mine ears to which i winced in pain while that Manik and Cabir laughed

" tum kyu hase ja rahe ho ?" I asked and slapped both of theirs arms. I went and kept all my books in the back and took it over me. I went there and packed some croissants and doughnuts in my tiffin in my bag

I went and saw Daniel in Maniks arms laughing and giggling with him. I didn't knew why but i liked it. They were looking cute when suddenly i felt Mary mas hand over my shoulder .

I saw her and smiled " bohot acche lag rahe he na yeh donno i hope ki tum bhi kabhi iss photo me fit hojana " told Mary ma " kuch bhi ma aisa nahi ho sakta me aur Manik never he is different so am i " i replied casually

" aur agar yeh difference nahi hota toh tum kya karti nandu?" Asked Mary ma to which even i didn't have any answer. I was confused that what was this? Urrgh let it be i don't care

" Chalo bandaro hume pehle Daniel ko ghar chodna he fir college bhi jana he" i told to which they got up and we went out bidding farewells to Mary ma who gave us flying kisses in return...

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How was it i knew it was all rubbish but it was all that i could write at that time and i hope it was good and yeah Angela wrote the manan part and i hope you all will love it yeah tomorrow i will give an update in the occasion of ...itni jaldi nahi bataungi 😉

Love

Frizz

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rimsha01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Oh that was superb. Though i didnt understand what relation Daniel has with nandu but i love their bond.Or is it they dont have any relation? And also i wanna know dat mary ma is just her guardian, right?

Manik came early morning to meet nandu. And he cant control himself around her. Dat chotu manan moment was damn sweet. Let more such moments come. 😳 Nd more intense ones😉

Meera ma wants to see nandu in the same frame as Manik. :)

Her wish would soon be fulfilled.

One request- next time a big update please❤️