MaNan SS:- Baked with Love CHAPTER 11 UPDATED 13/01 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Aaouch both fighting like kids ...
Aage Kya hoga Hehhe
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Awesome
Superb
Amazing update
Donno tom n jerry ki trah fight krte hsi
Aur ab ye harshad bhi aa gea ufff
Nandu ne kya dimag lgaayea aur navua ko bacha toh liya pr prr pr nandu shayad fass gyi
Lovd it
Thnks for pm me
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Wow yaar the ff is getting great day be day.. nandini have a lot of guts man..
Really She is one of kind!!
I'm imagining manik's reactions when he was getting answered by nandini..
He must be thinking dat kaha se aa gayi ye chota packet bada dhamaka..
And what an idea to save navya.. hats off
Now just waiting to see that who's hands they were..

Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
awesome update...
manan just can't stop arguing with each other...
i think its manik who is holding her hands...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I read 3parts in one goo
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damn funny yaar OMG awsm Nandu u r the best...
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ky ans deti ye chutku chokri lol 🤣
that smoke idea loved it...
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Manik ne hi pakda hoga nandu ko shyd 😲 Ky karega Eifill Tower 😛

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awsm part
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le cmnt b kr diya or like b
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acha sun na ek request maan le yaar
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nandu ko brave hi rakhna brk mat hone dena...


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warna fir se girl ko weak smjha jaayega...
tc stay blessed keep smiling ty for pm 😃 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Thanx you all for your love & support that you all gave me to continue this story of mine and this chapter is dedicated to My Crazy friend "CRAZY DREAMER" bechari meri wajah se meri story nahi padh payi sorry yaar woh computer period itna boring hota he na ki apne aap neend aa jati he, sorry ab meri bakwass khatam aur chapter shuru...

Chapter 4

" Kaha bhaag rahi ho? Kahi jane ki jaldi he kya?" I heard that Voice that Stupid, idiot Effiel Tower ki awaj uff jeena haram kar rakha he jaha jati hu magnet ki tarah khicha chala aata he abb kya karu aisi situation se kaise niklu?

Suddenly he turned me around and i saw him that Effiel Tower staring at me like i am Sunny Leone

I knew i was at fault but meri galtu nahi thi toh mene usse face kiya toh dekha piche uske Chumche bhi khade the with blackened faces because of that smoke

" Isse tih me chodungi nahi meri shakal bigadi tumne urrgghhh!! " told that mukti and this time she came ahead and pushed me down

I saw up and those 5 Monkeys were looking like Grims who are going to feast on me. I knew i had to think & react fast otherwise i won't be left alive by these demons

" guys , guys kya sabut he tum logo ke pass ki mene hi aag lagayi thi huh?" I asked and a mischievous smirk

" koi sabut toh nahi he paar yeh kaam tumhara hi he itna hum sab dave ke sath keh sakte he chuhiya" told that Cabir

" Accha tumne science padha he ?" I asked crossing fingers mentally to get my desired reply from them

" obliviously ... nahi humne science - science bohot sunna he paar kabhi class pe dhyan nahi diya kyuki woh class itna boring hota he na..." that Cabir replied

" kyuki humara dhayan nahi humara nahi sirf tera dhyan uss so called hot maam par rehta that na " told Manik and kept his hand around his neck playfully

" aur woh ek lesbian nikli sare dil ke arman pani kya acid me mila diye" replied Cabir and wipied his fake tears

" hey you commoner " that barbie doll who was having her so called kuchie-ku session with that capped boy

" commoner kisko bola be chudail aur kitna make up thopa he reh chaihre par apne tune? Aisa lag raha he ki bass ab papdi ban kar gir jainge badi ayi commner bolne wali huh!" I told again not fearing the consequences

" i won't leave you ...you...bloody commner" she screamed and ran behind me those chumchas behind her trying to help her.

I came to a corner and saw Navya standing there with a bucket containing some black ink. She saw and came and gave a fire extinguisher in my hand

" Jab hum bole Jai Mata Rani tabhi chala dena thike " she ordered me and i nodded like a obedient student and stood in a corner with it

Soon Fab-5 cam running and in front of my eyes Navya threw that ink over them and screamed Jai Mata Di and i opened the extinguisher and WHOOSSHHH! woth full force came out all the contents over fab-5

And before i could tell anything Navya went there with a wooden stick and started hammering Cabir muttering " hhume Madhubala bula rahe the huh? Ab bulaoge ha bolona ab bulaoge?" And he just shrieked," nahi plss sorry" and she left the stick and caught hold of my hand and dragged me out of the college

" Humne tumhe ghar chale jane ko kaha tha na?'" I asked her panting hard." hum...apne ...dost ko...kaise akela...chod de?" She asked

" thanxs" i replied ," koi gal nahi " she replied and went away in an auto

I to reached my shop, My Pure Bliss and soon started my work of helping my Mary ma who was busy with those customers

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" Have a good day sir " i replied and handed over the parcel of cheese croissants to the customer and closed the shop

" aaj ka pehla din kaisa tha bacha?" Asked Mary ma as she packed the remaining cakes and other items in the fridge

" bohot accha aur mazedar i replied and went towards Mary Ma and helped her to arrange the chairs table and clean everything

" tiffin khatam kiya na?" She asked continuing her work, shit! I realised but before i could react," hum jaanta tha tum pehle din ki excitement me khana khana bhul jaiga. Kitna ptala ho raha he tum nandu ek toh pura din kaam karta he aur phir khana bhi nahi khata "

" tension mat lo na Mary ma aur sorry " i caught my ears she smiled and went in and brought out some bread, butter and whipped cream

" Wowww Mary Ma apne whipped cream banaya aur mujhe abhi bata rahi he so mean" i told and snatched bow and started licking it with my fingers

" Jesus christ! Yeh bread par butter ke sath khana he aisa khaiga toh paith kharab ho jaiga baccha chalo mujhe jaldi wapis karo yeh scchi bachi bankar" she pleaded and i gave her back

She applied it on my and gave me which i chewed it and told Mary Ma all about that happened in the school

" Bacha essa nahi karte kisi ke sath bad manners bacha" she told and caressed my cheek " ya ya ap toh sab kuch acchai dhundti he na" i told and kept all the things back in the fridge

" Accha baba baby jao jake soo jao me bhi ghar ja rahi hu kal subha aa jaungi thike woh aaj Daniel ko dekhne ke liye koi nahi he" And Mary Ma took her Coat and umbrella

" Mary Ma aap kyu unke pas ja rahi ho app janti ho na..." but i was cut off by her " Bacha me janti hu woh galat he par woh meri family he aur me janti hu tu gussa he toh me Daniel ko leke aungi" she replied

" Woww sachi yay " and i kissed her cheeka while she smiled and went away. I went up and cleaned up my room and went to washroom and changed myself into a Pink Minnie Mouse shirt and A Red Pajama

I went and sat near my cake recipe book and was searching around for a new recipe when my eyes fell on the recipe of , " Chocolate Chip Creamed Cake "

I immediately went around and brought all the ingredients and started breaking the eggs , making meringue, melting the chocolate and buttering the bowls , etcs

Soon the kitchen was having a tasty aluring smell of chocolate and cake i was waiting for that cake to bake when Ting and the cake was ready . I brought out the piping bags and started decorating it. It was looking so tasty and beautiful i brought out my spoon and a plate out .

Not for eating guys but i had some other plans. I removed the cake and made it hollow and filled it with chocolate sauce

I saw that and covered it with the cake i remo ed and ate up somesome 😆 i went and oned the fan and went towards the balcony

The city was looking so beautiful in the day with people running around and busy with thier own work but Mumbai is mostly know for its night life. The beautiful street lights that decorate the marine drive looking just like jewels over a Queens crown

Aah and the cool breeze that flows in the night makes me feel like forget all my worries, tensions and problems and go with the flow let my hair fly in the air

But there are also some Heartless people like my parents. Bhoj thi me un pe ladka chahiye tha unhe toh kya janam hote hi raat ki kali sadko pe chod diya mujhe akela

I wiped my tears and went to my bed and was about to have very sweet dreams tabhi i heard someone knocking not knocking banging on the doors of my shop and screaming at the top of his voice to open the door

Arrrghhh! I hate this city yaha log na khud sote he na dusro ko sone dete jab dekho tabhi koi aajata he inhe time nahi malum ya andhe he ki aise time pe konsa cake shop khula rehta he aur darwaza band he toh dukaan bhi band hogi na

I went down at least killing that person who was banging at this hour and abusing him a thousand times i reached down and opened the door and was shocked to see...


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So how was it ? Ha abhi juta chapal marna he toh maro kyuki mene aise main time pe rok diya 😃
So who would it be? I think many of you know it

Love,

Frizz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
THANKS FOR THE PM... LOVED IT!!!!! I AM SURE IT MUST BE MANIK!!! LOVE YOU
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
awesome update...
loved it so much...
the ink and fire extinguisher prank on FAB5 was hilarious...
i think its manik a the door...wonder whats gonna happen next...keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Yaayiee what a chapter yaar..
Bold nandu is the best..
Again nandini rocked and fab5 shocked..
I really liked nandini's POV.. and her feelings about her parents..
Just want to know that who is their on her doorstep..
Thinking of the member must be fab5 or a member of it..
But really excited for more..
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
It was great..
Wanna read more
Update soon..!!

LOADS OF LOVE

ADYA

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