MaNan SS:- Baked with Love CHAPTER 11 UPDATED 13/01 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting !!! Let me know when u update next !!
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ok guys so i better clear 1 thing i can't update daily but i promise i will try to do it only if you all will give me your love ,support ,likes and comments and yeah i am so happy with the response and yeah sorry for my bakwas her is the next chapter


CHAPTER 2

I entered the canteen and sat down on the near by seat as i waited for Navya to come.I saw around and noticed that it was actually a posh canteen and even well maintained

I was in my own la-la land when its was broken by someones pat on my shoulder

I turned around and saw those5 Mischief Mongers giving me glares like as if i had did the biggest crime in the world. When suddenly something struck me Did Navya tell them that i had saved her? No...no she can't do that i had warned her! but if they have come to know about it? now what to do?

This is our seat madam! Told that boy with the earphones and sat on the seat opposite to me with his legs on the table

" Cabir humne asj tak kabhi kisi se itni tehsibse baat ki he kya jo tu usse kar raha he?" Asked that Effiel Tower." hmm sahi bol rahe he re tu " and boy named Cabir agreed with him

"Hey you get lost from here this is our seat ok yaha sirf hum baithte he ok!" And by sign language told me to piss off

But that behavior of his pissed me off and i stood up and literally screamed over him "Kyu? Me kyu jau yaha se tum jao na aur ha rahi baat iss seat ki toh iss pe tumhara naam nahi likha he jo tum muuh uthaye chale aaye samhe!... when i heard Navyas voice

Nandini chalo yaha se yeh unki fixed seat he woh yaha humesha baithte he samjhi ab chalo and she started dragging me away with her

ek min...tum toh wahi ho na jisse humne kuch minto pehle dustbin me band kiya tha? asked that Eiffel Tower

nahi...na...nahi toh koi galat faimi hogai he tumhe saying this Navya started walking ahead but they followed her to which eventually even i had to follow her because she is my friend no actually 1st friend...

I ran and saw them cornering up Navya so that they could identity her

I felt the ground below me sucked behind as i knew the consequence as Navya can anytime break down and tell them the truth

I immediately pushed them away and stood in front of navya like a hero who would save her.They all narrowed thier eyes towards me and gave deathly glares

I at first got scared but over came it and told myself thatthatNo nandini you are not a coward,you are brave and spoke up," itni akhe maat dikhao, aakho ka diagram aata he mujhe"

When suddenly that tomboyish girl literally pounced over me but her friends pulled her back," if eyes could kill you would be dead by now" she told angrily

"calm mukti ,calm down meri bheem ! Lagta he woh nayi admission he toh hume nahi jasnti he" told Cabir

" jaane me koi interest bhi nahi he mujhe samjhe" i snapped back at him

" ooo toh yeh chota chua kaata bhi he" told cabir and they all laughed

" kaata kya laat bhi maarta he" i told and immediately kicked him hard over his shin. He shrieked in pain and fell on the floor catching his organ

When suddenly that Effiel Tower came out of no where and pinned me to the near by wall. It hurted a lot as he pinned my hands to preventing me from protesting

He brought his face so close to mine that i could feel his hot breathe fanning my face.He spoke out," How dare you kick my Bestfriend like that? who gave you that right? yaha sab humse daarte he aur humare raaste me aane se daarte he aur tum! itni choti se paar itni himmat!

"Choti kisko kaha be" and with all my strength pushed him away but that silly smirk refused to go from that handsome face of his.handsome? Uff nandini i murmured to myself

" tum choti si,chutku si ho na height me bilkul ek lilput ki tarah" that Effiel Tower spoke and laughed loudly including his so called"Chumchas"

" aaa Effiel Tower khud ki height bhi dekhi he kya jo mujhe bol raha ghar me fan tu thik karta he ya repairer samjh nahi aata, aur ha bachpan me complan itna pasand aa gaya tha kya jo itna pi liya ki height itni badi hogai ha?" I told whatever that came in my mind not fearing the consequences

" kya kaha tumne? " he asked angrily

" sunnai kaam deta he ya bhaire ho" i told and laughed and so did that Cabir

"Cabir" they all shouted loudly

" kya guys? Bilkul sahi bol rahi ho tum ! Ek dum sahi by the way your name?" He asked and forwarded his hand near my face like as if if is holding a mike

"Nandini...Nandini Murthy when suddenly they caught hold of both my hands and that Effiel Tower went towards Navya and asked her," sidhi tarah se bol de kisne bachaya warna college se rusticate karwa dunga

" ussne...ussne mujhe bachaya " told navya and pointed towards me

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So how was it? ab kya hoga jab manik aur unn sab ko malum padega ki nandini ne navya ko bachaya? kya karenge woh nandu ke sath? ya me kahu kya karegi nandu Fab-5 ke sath

Love,

Frizz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I didn't read it yet bit I know it will b good and yup index to update kr do
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear. ...
I just came across your story... its background is good. Nandini running a cake shop for a living... its cool.

I liked the way you have written the first ever Manik Nandini confrontation... Nandini is damn brave...

Waiting for the next part. Please update soon.

Love Shrut
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update but pls nandu KO dumb mat banana k wo sare torture sahe fab 5 k nandu KO unhe sabak sikhanachahiye serial se alag story honi chahiye
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
loved the sherni nandu...who speaks her mind...
cabir was just too hilarious and got kicked in the important part...ouch...
hope FAB5 doesn't harm nandu too much...worried about mukti and her anger...as well as manik...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsome amazing marvoules chapter... I really really love this bold nandini avatar.. whatever comes in her mind she just spit it out.. bohot bhari padega nandu se panga lena ya phir nandini hi phas jayegi..
I feel for cabir.. but the most hilarious was when cabir was too laughing..

Waiting for next.. plz post soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Bechara cabir aur nandu ne toh sherni ka roop le liya...kya kya bole ja rhi thi hahahaha
Pr ab kya krenge fab5
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nandu kya karegi fab5 keep saath
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Thank you so much guys for the love and support i hope you all will enjoy the next chapters here it goes...

Chapter 3

" Toh yeh tumhari himmat he humare victim ko aise chudane ki huh?" Asked that Effiel Tower

" Duur raho mujhse samjhe, ha maine bachaya isse kyuki tumlogo ko haak kisne diya kisiki zindagi ke sath aise kehlne ko?" I snapped back angrily at him.

" Bohot zabaan chalti he tumhari abhi baand karta hu" told that Effiel tower and pulled me out with him or you can say litrally dragged me out to an corner.

" Chodo mujhe, maine kaha mujhe chodo tumhe samajh nahi aata kya?" I told and somehow managed to free my hand from his strong cluthes.

" You know what tumme bohot himmat he i am impressed! Kyuki aaj tak kisi ne Fab-5 ke samne kuch bhi bolne ki himmat nahi hoti aur tumne toh humare victim ko torture se bachaya impressive" he told and gave a lop- sided smirk which clearly indicated he is upto something

" i am impressed , impressive" i mimicked him in a funny side due to which in a second his smile vanished off

" How dare you ! You bloody commner! Do you even know to whom are you talking girl?" He asked as he is president of India

" to an Effiel Tower which can speak ha - ha - ha" i spoke in a sarcastic tone." ha ha so funny right " he told

" i am Manik Malhotra, the trustee of this college ok so you better behave properly now with or get out of this college" he told looking straight into my eyes

His eyes were so deep and that chocolate brown hue of it made him just so irresistable till now it was the first time i noticed how good looking was he was

Perfect lips, sharp and chiseled jaw line perfect height and a sexy body that any girl would desire for and his eyes a deep pool of passion that i would love to swim in but his eyes showed so many emotions at one go.

" Hey where are u huh?" He told and smacked his fingers in front of her face breaking her trance and chain of thoughts when i saw him smirking

Oh how much i felt like smacking his face hard and remove that stupid smirk of his face

" i know i am hot toh itna ghurne ki zarurat nahi he " he told and slide his hands over my shoulder. " tum hot nahi Thande ho thande ek frozen food ki tarah" i told and smirked

" just shut up ok just shut up you chutku" he told

" haww mujhe chutku kaha you Monkey Malhotra i told when suddenly i was pinned to the nearby wall

" ouch tumne kya theka lekar rakha he kya jab dekho tabhi dewaar par painting ki tarah latka dete ho" i literally screamed on him

Manik ! i heard someone call him we both turned around and saw a boy same of Maniks height giving him death glares

" tu apni harkato se baaz nahi aayega na be" he told him while i could see anger clearly increasing on Maniks face

" tujhse koi matlab nahi Harshad tu apna kaam kar samjha" he replied in a could voice

I saw the movement and immediately ran away from there i reached towards the canteen but nor fab-5 was there nor Navya

I searched for her in the unkown corridors and classes of space college.When suddenly i heard the voice of Navya screaming

I saw it was storeroom and saw Navya cornered in a corner with those Chumchas troubling her and that Cabir telling Navya," Toh iss Madhubala ka kya kiya jaye maar diya jaye ya chod diya jai " and those Maniacs started laughing like Maniacs

God! I need to save Navya but how and saw around and saw the worker cleaning all the dry leaves an idea immediately popped up in my mind

I went towards that uncle and asked him," Kaka kya aap mujhe yeh saari sukhe paate de sakte he kya?" I asked him with a cute face," Tum kya karogi iss ka beti?" He asked politely

"Please mujhe dedijiye na please please!" I requested him with a extra sugar coated voice.

" thike lelo betiya hume koi shikayat nahi" and i gave him a smile and started picking all the leaves and kept it in a dustbin and stuffed it in it and saw the kerosene bottle lying near Cabir

I somehow hiding begind boxes, shelfs & racks and reached behind cabir when suddenly Cabir saw towards me i nearly freezed on my place he came towards me and picked up Navyas bag lying in front of me

I heaved a sign of relief and went back and mixed a very small amont of kerosene and threw the matched fire into the dustbin and moved out after observing the whole area i left and stood out of the room

Soon the room was filled with smoke emitted from the leaves and i could hear all of them cofing inside i covered my face with a hanky and went in and according to my observations i without hitting or stumbling over something or someone i saw in a corner Navya Cofing

I held her hand and led her out and told her," Navya aaj ke liye bohot tamasha ho gaya abhi ke abhi ghar bhago jaldi se college gaya khade me samjhi" and she nodded her head and ran away

I was about to go when suddenly i felt someone held my hand i turned around and saw ...

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i hope you all will like it and who all are asking for links sorry guys par me toh ek 14 yrs ki ladki hu aur mujhse tum itna complicated thing expect maat karna kyuki mene kabhi computer period me dhyaan nahi diya iss liye mujhe nahi aata. abhi kya hoga? Nandini Ghar toh chali gayi paar dusre din kya hoga? abhi likes aur comments zarur denna

Love,

Frizz

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