manan ff a dream couple updated very imp note on pg 33 - Page 10

Awesome

it was amazing update. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.

Nice chapter
Finally nandu maan gayi
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

awesome update...

loved it so much...

love the angry nandu...so cute...

father in law...hope he is nice and that nandu has a great bonding with him...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

chap8a:*- nandini POV :*-(I was sitting comfertably keeping my head on his heart ...I m really in love with his heart beats...they r really the best music in the entire world...I was busy in listening his sweet melodies heart beat and he was busy in ruffling and playing with my hair...cabir mukti was dozed off by now... dhruv and alya were talking...well they have became normal by now they were frnds now nothing more as per their saying at least ...navya was busy in struggling to sit comfortably as mukti and cabir were falling on her tym to tym it was really funny ...keeping everything apart .I closed my eyes and started to hear the world best music again...when I heard him wisphering in my ear) M:*-SLEPT???? N:**NO M:*-TOH SLEEP NA BABY...TAKE REST...WAISE V KL RAAT I TROUBLE U SO MUCH NA...TUM THIK SE NHI SO PAYE HOGI ... SO SLEEP NOW OK(awww that was so cute .. .how much he cares about me...seriously I can bet on that haan..no one has such caring bf like mine...listening this I tilted my head to look at him replied in most babyish way...he call me baby na so I had to behave like one also na). N;-I CANT SLEEP AND ITS ALL UR FAULT(I saw him getting curious and surprise...as how come he got involeved my sleeping). M;*-MY FAULT...KAISE. (she literally asked me being all worried and curious and all I can do is to suppress my giggle seeing his expressions ). N;*-YAY.UR FAULT...THESE UR HEART BEATS THEY R SO SWEET AND MELODIOUS. NA K I DONT WANNA SLEEP AT ALL(I said all this very cutely and saw him smiling inwardly). M;*-OH LIKE THAT. N;*-YAY LIKE THAT. NA:*-GARI ROKO(we were busy in our sweet talk when all of sudden navya shouted ...and I bounced at once listening her shouting so loud...NOT only me everyone get frighten and dhruv immediately stops the bolaro ...as soon as he stopped everyone looked at navya to get answer of her sudden dangerous act) NA:*-HUME SEAT CHANGE KRNI H(she said this simply and all of us looked at her in deabelif ). . M;*-WATH THE HELL NAVYA...U SACRED US(after shouting at navya ...he looked at me and asked me with concerned tone) M;-BABY...U R OK NA(oh god not again...I saw everyone was looking at us with the same look they have in house ... why won't they manik just address me baby infront of everyone ...again embarrassing situation...and cabir how he can let it go he was toh always ready to tease us). . C:*-BABY N ALL HAAN MANIK(he said that and winked at manik...and manik just glare at him ). M:*;SHUT UP...AND MISS MADHUBALA...KYUN KRNI H TUMHE SEAT CHANGE (he said all this in irrating voice as by now navya has really made him annoyed not only him but others also) C:*-HAAN I WAS SLEEPING YR.. .U JUST DISTIRB ME ...WHATS WRONG WITH U. NA;*-AREE YHI ...SLEEP ...YEH MUKTI AND CABIR R SLEEPING ...AUR BAAR BAAR MUJH PE GIR RAHE H ...HUM THIK SE BAITH V NHI PA RHE (She told us her sad story and all of thought for some tym to get some solution for this) N;*-NAVYA U CAN COME TO BACK SEAT...THEIR IS STILL SPACE LEFT (seeing her helplessness I offered her to come to back seat...but this manik shouted...like seriously is their any shouting game going on). M;*-NO U CANT (he clearly shouted and I know why . . as when navya will seat on back seat ...he can't hold touch kiss me... in short he can't do anything as such ...and how can Mr manik malhotra let that happen ) NA;*-AREE Q NHI BAITH SKTE ...HUM TO BAITHENGE(navya shouted back at him and came out of car and reach to the door of back seat and everyone else was enjoying the scence only ...now it was too much funny navya was trying to open the door and he was doing against her holding the door tightly not letting her open it) M;*-NAVYA GO BACK NA;*-MANIK OPEN THE DOOR M;*-NAVYA I SAID GO BACK. NA;*-OPEN THE DOOR. M;*;NAVYA. NA;*- MANIK( LIterally they were fighting like kids and fight for 5min almost till I hold on manik hand to stop him...and finaaly he let her come in.). NA;-THANK U NANDU. (WITH we started our journey). M;*-NAVYA... . LOOK TUM YAHAN BAITHNE AAYE HO NA SO ... CHUP CHAP BAITHE REHNA ...ND CLOSE UR EYES DONT DARE TO OPEN... AND IF U HAVE TO OPEN UR EYES U WILL ASK MANIK CAN I OPEN MY EYES .(he made her understand each and everything and she nooded and closed her eyes and slept...soon we reached the house and everyone started taking their bags...manik was taking my nd his bag in both his hand ...we were Walking to the and I can't even say how nervous I m...their r so many qusn in my head ...maniks dad I was meeting him for the first tym ...would he like me or not...I was hell tensed...we r walking and he wispher in my ear ). M;*-DONT BE NERVOUS...HE WILL DEFENITLY LIKE U

it was wonderfull update. Just love the way manik make navya understand everything. Continue soon. Thankyou.

Awesome yr..ua imagination in something which i cannot express in words..the way u described every situation.. Is awesome.. I must say..u r very good writer...awesome story ⭐️

loved the fight between navya & manik... I could literally see them fighting holding the door 😉😆😆

note;*-
very much hurt with the response almost 33 people liked the update but only 7 comment
seriously if u can like it then why not comment ...seriously very hurt ...very hurtful and dishearted 😭 😭

interesting story