manan ff a dream couple updated very imp note on pg 33 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hmmm sorry from next update will surely do comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey ..waitin fh uh nxt update ..plz update sosooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
so here is next update and it is last warning I will continue only and only I get comments. like se kaam nhi chalega guys so plzzz comment if u want next chapter soon. and do tell next chapter u want in manik POV or nandini POV. chapter 8b;*- manik POV;*-(we r walking to the door ...and I can see that she is hell nervous and why won't she...after all she is meeting my father and her soon to be father in law...but I m not worried even a bit as my dad RAJ MALHOTRA is coolest dad ...WO khte h na all the gense we got from our parent ...so ya all sweetness cuteness naughtiness I had only got from him ...he is a gem person...we steeped in house and their he is standing with a board smile to welcome us ...we all hugged him one by one ) M;*- HEY DAD R;*-HI SON ...WELCOME EVERYONE TUM SAB AAYE BHUT ACHA LGA... TUMLOG HAMESHA Q NHI AATE ...U KNOW I FEEL SO BORED...TUMLOG AATE HO TOH MAZAA AATA H... WAIT WHOSE THIS BEAUTIFUL GIRL (he pointed to nandu...and I introduce her with a broad smile on my face). M:*- DAD SHE IS NANDINI(I introduce her to him and she did a namaste. to great him and bowed down to touch his feet). N;*-NAMASTE UNCLE (but he stopped her in midway and took her in a hug...and replied breaking the hug). R:*- UNCLE NHI BETA DAD BOLO...MANIK NE BTAYA H TUMHARE BARE M ...AND I MUST TELL U R WAY MORE BEAUTIFUL THEN HE TOLD. (by saying this he winked at her and she was all shocked...may be she doesn't expected my dad to be like this...but this is a fact he is totally like me ...no no I m totally like me). R;*AB TUMLOG APNE ROOM M JAO FRESH HO JAO ...BUT NANDINI U COME WITH ME...WE R GOING ON A LUNCH DATE. (he said that with a broad smile...and all I could do was to stare at him in disbelif ). M;*DAD R;* WHAT DAD...I M TALKING TO BOND NANDINI NA...U SHUT UP...SO BEAUTIFUL U WANNA COME WITH ME ON A DATE.(by saying this he extented his hands to nandini. and she quickly out her hand in his ...for their so called date...I must say dad had really gelled up very easily) N;*-I WOULD LOVE TO. MU;*-WHAT IS THIS UNCLE NANDINI K AATE HI AAP HAME BHUL GYE.(mukti said this is teasing manners as before nandini he always use to pamper them and all the lunch date dinner date was with mukti and alya only). AL:* HAAN OR NHI TOH KYA LUNCH DATE SIRF USKO(alya also joined mukti and they both made a fake pout ...seeing which dad replied sweetly). R;* TUMLOGO K SATH MAI BAAD ME JAONGA BUT ABHI...WE R GETTING LATE...SO CHALE. (by saying this he started Walking with outddor with nandini hand in hand ...and we all seeing them happkiy when suddenly navya shouted) NA:*-AREE AISE KAISE...HUME TOH KISI NE INTRODUCE HI NHI KIYA (ooo yay actually we forgot to introduce her...but she also doesn't need introduction as nandini ...as I have said a lot about navya to dad seriously a lot). R;*OOO OPPP SORRY ...BUT LET ME GUESS U ...U R NAVYA NAVELI...FROM PATNA...RYT.(he said this fallowed by a wink...which really made everyone surprised expect me). NA:*HAAN PR APKO KAISE PTA. (navya asked in very various way as she was really confused) R;*-KUCH NHI ...BAS MANIK TUMHARI BARI TAREEF KRTA H (he said this teasing me ...and also targeting me). Na,;*-TAREEF AUR WO V HAMARI...KYA UNCLE.(she asked dad very courisly as it is impossible for me to praise her and to be true it is true also...and I do all the nagging about navya to dad...and now he was using this against me...he is surely my dad only). R;*-BATA DOON MANIK.(he warned me last tym...and all I can do is stare at him in disbelif). . R;*-OK OK FINE HUM APSE BAAD ME BAAT KARENGE NAVYA JI ...ABHI AP JAYEA AUR REST KIJIYE...AND TUM SAB V (by saying this he walked out with nandini for their lunch date ofcorse...and we decide to go to our room) M;*-SO GUYS ROOMS R UPSTAIR ...BE COMFORTABLE C;* HAAN I M VERY TIERD ...NEEDED A NAP BYE GUYS. precap;* raj and nandu date and much more fun 🥱 and one more thing love u and hug to( sharon_babu.) love ur comments
Edited by juhiloveparth - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey dear loved ur story nd ya pls continue its awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chapter
Manik dad is so cool man
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lunch date with Manik ka dad .
Soo cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahha...lovd this update...nandus and manik dads date...waitg 4 the update...sorry yar mai kuch dinse comment nahi karthi hoon... work load tha...aur net problm bhi...lekin abse meri postg change hogayi...so i ll comment daily now...i must say i love ur story...go ahead girl...lv u
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb pls update next soon sorry for nt commenting in previous parts as my board exams are gng so but will surely comment from next updates ya ur previous well also awesome
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Manik dad is very sweet
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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update...

loved it so much...

raj is one of the most coolest dads ever...so relaxed and chilling...such and laid back character...knows everything we'll...also good at teasing...

my dad even though I'm a girl if i bring a guy home...that is it all hell breaks loose...

loving the quick bond between raj and nandu...im sure they will make the best father in law and daughter in law duo...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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