manan ff a dream couple updated very imp note on pg 33 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Its awesome and yaa continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Nice upadate
I read ur all chapters in one go
I really love this romantic manik
Plz continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Superb ff dear
Today only I read all the parts
Too good
Excited for the trip
And don't be upset
I will for sure comment on all ur upcoming updates
BT plz don't discontinue it😭
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Nice chapter
Manan r too cute
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
awesome update...
loved it so much...
excited for the pune trip...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
nice updt


now pune trip exciting waiting go for it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Hey nice yaar.
But can u plz write with some gap nd by creating different paragraphs. That way it will be easier to read.
But nice concept. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Awesome update
Please update regularly
Write always positively like these
I just love the way you're writing
Keep writing
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
Bye take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Very nice update!! Navni conversation was good... And fab 5 caring for Nandini is sweet... Pls continue soon... Your story is too good yaar don't even think of discontinuing it so soon.. It's just the start and its superb so pls continue and update faster and longer pls pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yayyie waah almost everyone commented haa...I very very very much happy seriously plzz keep doing that always...now coming to update happy reading and do tell ur views OK chap7b:*- nandini POV:--(we were walking through the corridor just talking and heading towards canteen...best frnd talks u know..)N:*navya...baby kaisa h..(I asked very concern way as I can understand that it is very difficult for her ...it will be difficult for any girl ...she is only 19 ...but instead of her someone else answered that qusn...and do I need to tell who that person was...of course manik who else ) M;*-KAISA KYA. ...DRAMEBAAZ HI HOGA ...ISSE KI TARAH. (with this he came to us standing near me ...like very close putting his hand on my waist ...and I m really annoyed Mr.manik malhotra trying to flaunt his relationship ...I just nodded in disbelif and let it be as manik malhotra ko sqmjhana is not that easy u know.. .so to divert navya attention who is till now constantly gazing at manik hand which is on my waist...I asked ). N:*;manik what r u doing here ... tumhe toh apne frnds k sath hona chaheyea na(on this I thought he might leave me and go to their frnds but ...no he was still their) M;*-WO need to talk to u...come( with this he started dragging me...but navya stopped him). Na*-no ... mujhe bhook lgi h ...toh phle hum dono canteen janenge ...tumhe Jo v bolna h yhi bolo. M;*-navya(he glare at her ...but navya toh nsvya h ). NA;*-kya ghooro mat ...hum darne wale nhi tumse (this really instigated him now and he started moving to navya in threatening way) M;*-REALLY ...SO TUM MUJHSE NHI DARTI HAAN(he started taking forward steps and navya was going backward as expected ...and all I was doing is to watch the scene ...but I stopped manik by pulling him)N;*MANIK...KYA BAAT H.(WE came back to original topic ) M;*-HMMM ...PUNE JANA H. N;*-OH YA I KNOW ...ITS OK U GO M*-EXCUSE ME HUME JANA H. N;*-MTLB. M;*-MTLB BAAA. I MEAN NANDU WO MUJHE DAD SE MILNE JANA THA AND SO WE DECIDED KE WE R GOING THERE TO VISIT ALSO...WE ALL R GOING FAB5 ALSO. AND NAVYA U TOO ...SO CHALO PACKING KRNI H ...WE HAVE TO LEAVE IN 2 HR. N :*-BUT I HAVE INFORM CHACHA CHACHI FIRST NA... M;*-UNSE MAINE PERMISSION LE LI H ...AB CHALE ( with this he dragged me to the car ...and he doesn't let me say bye to navya also. we seated in car and he started driving ...I sat with grumpy face looking other side of him...finally after getting annoyed by cold behavior ...he asked very lovingly ) M;*-kya hua ( but I replied very irratsting ... not replied I shouted back at him) N;*-KUCH NHI. (he got that I was behaving like a kid so he STOPPED the car played along ) M;*-KUCH NHI TO AISE BOLA JAISE BHOT KUCH (on this I again shouted at him) N;*-BHOT KUCH M;*-ACHA...THEN HOW CAN I MAKE IT UP. N;*-U CAN NOT M;*-REALLY U THINK SO N;*-YES. M;*-LETS TRY THEN. (by saying this she started tickling me and I was laughing like hell he just kept on tickling till I begged him to stop) N;*-MANIK ...STOP...PLZZZ MANIK STOP...PLZZ(and finally he stopped and hugged me like a Teddy bear) M:*-SO NOW TELL ME...WHY MY BABY WAS MAD AT ME N;*-U DONT LET ME SAY BYE TO NAVYA AUR MUJHE BHOOK V LGI H M;*-OHHH BHOOK LGI H. GHAR TO JA RHE H NA WE WILL EAT THEIR ...AND NAVYA 2 GHANTE M TO MILNA H NA TOH BYE Q. N;*-HMMM. .. ...WAISE MANIK...WE R GOING TO PUNE TO MEET UR DAD SO. M;*-SO THEY KNOW ABOUT US ...AND HE IS COOL WITH IT OK. SO DONT WORRY ...AB GHAR CHALE (with this we both headed to my house ...as soon as we reached i saw everthing was cleaned by manik servent and as soon as we entered the house manik told him to leave and he left immediately ...and I go upstair to pack my stuff ...after 20 mins I came down with small bag in my hand ) M;*-HO GYA...WAAH SO QUICK HAAN ...WAISE ITNE SE BAG ME TUMHARE KAPRE AA GYE ...AREE HAAN I FORGOT TUM V TOH ITTNI SI HO (HE made fun of me on which I glared at him and he quickly suppress his intention ...we headed to his house ...he goes to his room and I sated on sofa waiting for him ...i saw a old man offcourse he is manik servent i called him as i was getting really bored ) N;*-HI KAKA. BAITHIYE NA. KAKA;-NHI BETA MAI KAISE N;*- AREE KAKA AAO NA (WE started talking and after good half and hour msnik csme down and smiled looking at me ). M;*-SO KAKA KO V IMPRESS KR DIYA HAA. KAKA ;*- BABA. BETIYA BHOT PYARI H. M;*- I KNOW...ACHA KAKA AAP SAB JAYEA ( with this everyone left and we headed to dinning talbe to eat something ...we r eating pasta as it is my fab ... . all the tym eating he has entwined our hand ...luckily it was my left hand ...if it had my ryt hand Na toh only ayyiappa know how would I eat...we soon finished our dinner and washed and headed to living area ...only to be pulled by him ) M;*SWEET DISH (and before even giving me a sec he fused our lips and started kissing me...we r kissing each other exploring each other mouth when suddenly some one started coughing and we broke unwillingly only to get shocked ...their were our frnd looking at us in disbelief as they had seen hot scene just 2 min before) recap ;*-pune trip sorry. for small update PR kl pakka bara wala update milega
Edited by juhiloveparth - 9 years ago

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