Manan ff~Manik,nandini & their complicated love story EPILOGUE - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg! Hilarious.
I was laughing all the time.
Loved the update. Infact i love all your updates.
Now lets see what nandini does to manik for disturbing her practice.
:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
INFINITESIMALLLYYY AWESSSOME ;;;I JUST COULDNT STOP LAUGHING...U ROCK😛👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
alright,i thought all day long for a way nandini cud take revenge from manikso what m going to show now might be a bit uncomfortable for few readers as it they might feel that it contains explicit things,though my intentions r not to offnd someone and i assur that there is going to be no po*nography,but still read it on your own terms though not much of such sort is going to be there
CHAPTER 16
n:aru let me handle him,he wont uderstand like this,and yeah ab jo main karne wali hoon usse shayad tum thode uncomfortable ho jao,so sorry in advance
nandini picked up the call
m:sir aapne meri baat suni hi nai
n:arre sir nai ma'am
manik:(in thoughts-nndu ne phone uthaya!!)
n:bhaisahb yeh phone jiska hai na woh mera bahut achha dost hai,abhi na woh wash room gaya hai aur usne mujhe bataya ki aap dating shating bhi karwatein hain
m:hh..aan..haan ji madam karwate hain
n:fir toh aap log woh bhi bechte honge na?
m:woh kya madam?
n:arre,wohi,protections
on hearing the word protection that too from nandinis mout brought maniks eyes out
m:maa..dam aap aisa ky..yu puchhri hain
n:arre mera jo yeh dost haina,by god,bada hi handsome hai,aur ab na mujhe uspe crush bhi hai, aaj jab se main iske saath hoon yeh mujhpe line marra hai,waise toh mera kabhi koi bf nai tha,parr isse dekh ke lagra hai isse bana hi loon,abhi yeh bahar aayga toh propose kar hi doongi,ab aise samay pe insaan ka bhawnao pe control thodina rehta hai
m:maa...ttalbb..?
n:ohho bhaisab,aap bhina,mtlb woh itna hot,main bhi theek hoon hi,ab luv shuv ki batein hongi toh..
m:ttohh...
n:toh fir saari night besharmi ki height,toh ho sakte hain
m:KYA!!
n:arre aap chilla kyu rahe,achha aap bataiyye,aap kab tak bhijwa saktein hain,aur thodi jaldi kijiyega,kya haina aise atmosphere mein control nai hota,pata chala jawani ke josh mein hosh kho gaye thhey...uff!!mujhe toh soch soch ke hi sharam arri hai,aur haan bhaisahb thode zyada bhijwayega,aur jaldi bhi,main double payment ke liye taiyyar hoon
and that was it foe manik,such words from his all so very innocent nandu made him loose all his pateince,control and above all senses
m:HAVE U GONE CRAZY?YEH KYA BAKWAAS KARRI HO??SAARI RAAT BESHARMI KI HEIGHT,JAWANI KE JOSH MEIN HOSH KHO GAYE,NANDU HAVE U LOST IT
n:manik malhotra i have not lost it u have lost it,tumhe kya laga,tum aru ko phone kar ke pareshan karoge aur mujhe samajh nai aayega
n:nandu,tumhe pata tha??
m:haan pata tha,i know u in and out maniki malhotra,i knew ur protective nature just cant digest the fact that any gang girl spending such nights with a guy,tabhi yeh sab kiya,chhiii manik,chhiii...thodi,thodi sharam toh ki hoti
m:nandu listen to me wo...
n:m not listening to u,bye,and dare not call us again
with this nandini disconnected the call and switched it off while aryamann was still trying to digest what nandini did
ar:did u just...
n:sorry,manik ko samjhane ka yehi tareeka tha
ar:huh!!hmm...ok..um..i think aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai,ab kal practice karenge
n:ok,can u drop me home
ar:yeah sure,dhruv ki bike bhi wahin rakh doonga
n:yeah lets go
APARTMENT
m:shit!!!ab toh nandu mujhse baat nai karne wali,shit,parr woh samajh hi nai rahi hai,lekin jo usne bola agar sach ho jata toh...nai nai i trust my nandu,woh aisa kuchh nai kar sakti
manik returned to the gang who seemed to have being trying to suppress their laughter
m:kya hua?aise kya dekhre ho?
c:manik,tune apna imp call kar diya?
m:"haan,kyu
al:kisko kiya?
m:um..dad..nai.. nai soha ko
d:do logo ko ek baari mein not baad
m:nai woh pehle dad ko kiya fir soha ko
abhi:ok
if only manik knew that the gang knew what manik had done,nandini had informed them,they were shocked to see the level of jealousy and insecurity in manik for nandini but also had a great time
just then nandin i arrived
n:aru,chalo na come inside
ar:no..its ok
n:plz,mujhe achha nai lagega
ar:um..ok..if u insist
n:thanx
as soon as nandini opened the door she was shocked,she thought that everyone wud be at maniks house but to her horror eveyonre was present there,including manik,whom she simply ignored
n:hi guys,tum log yahan,anyways,tum log aru ke saath baat karo main uske liye paani lati hu,and nandini left avoiding to have any sort of disscussion,more than anyone she was embarassed with herself for being so bold,but she had no choice
meanwhile aryamann was luking around the house when he reached nandu's room followed by everyone,at that time even nandu came
ar:OMG!!!plz tell me kaun hai jo imagine dragons ka dan hai yahan,they r my favourite
n:mtlb,tum bhi?
ar:dont tell me even u r their fan
n:fan,m a die haert fan,i luv them they r the best
al:oh god,tum bhi
mu:yeah they r gud,but itna bhi kya achhe hain jo u ppl r crazy about them
on hearing this both aru and nano made a grumpy face and said together
aru&nano:they r the best,and then luked at each other and started laughing,cabir as always finding the moment whispered in maniks ears
c:dekha,kaha tha na made for each other hai,choices bhi same hai,aur dekh nano kitni jaldi open up bhi ho gai iske saath,warna an introvert like her...
MANIKS POV
cabir sahi kehra hai,nandu kitna open up ho gai hai iske saath,i mean for him she kind of had a luv making talk wid me,so bold,nandu toh aisi kabhi nai thi
more than jealous manik was now feeling left out and replaced,the thoughts that nandu,hs nandu replced him wid ryamann haunted him
where having a nice big talk about imagine dragons aryamann finally elft giving evryone a hud,except manik,manik was engrosed in his thoughts,thoughts that hewas being replaced,he was hurt,but he still failed to realize how much had he hurted his frnds and what he did with them was now being repeated with him
life is game,a gae for tit and tat,it has been rightly said,always do gud to others,coz what goes around comes around and maniks situation was the best living example for this

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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW...Bold nandhu...but i guess he had it coming...just hoe he ralizes his mistake...and his feelings soon before things go too far...terrific updte..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its awesome and ur story is a real time example in each and everyones life
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Posted: 10 years ago
Initially o was finding the part very funny than dheere dheere I got a bit serious..
Manik's thoughts were the part that got me serious.. he still don't know what he have done.. I just want him to realise and make everything correct.. but I know it still has time..
Abhi to party shuru hui hai..😆
Waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Manik is so shocked with the boldness in nandinis words the so innocently nano is talkng like that with him
Nw manik is felng left out but wen wil he realise that he has hurt his frnds so much wat wil he do nw
Nd cabir never leaves a chance to make his way watng fr the day wen old manik wil be back
Continue sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
The update was hilarious in the beginning but towards d end it got serious. To be frank there was nothing explicit or bold in what nandu said. It was totally normal.
Manik is feeling left out between his friends. But what he cant realize is dat he had done the same with them before. He had taken each nd everyone of them for granted and specially nandini. And now with the arrival of aryamann he is getting insecure. He is hurt thinking dat he has been replaced. Little does he know dat noone can take his place in nandu's life.
Now dat he and only nandu are left at his apartment alone maybe nandu could talk some sense into him nd would be able to make him realize where he had been wrong.
I want a bada wala update next time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
loved the jealous manik and bold nandu...
though manik deserves more than what he is getting...still feel sorry for him...
you need to finish the soha chapter soon...bring another handsome boy i school who soha will fall for...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
CHAPTER 17
as soon as aryamann left nandini went to her room and tried to sleep,completely ignoring manik,manik was in his deep thoughts and knew that this time nandini wont forgive him easily,feeling distressed and hurt manik left without saying a word,all this was witnessed by the gang,girls made the excuse of accompanying the boys till the gate and went outside so as to have a gud talk about the recent advancements
mu:manik ek idiot hai yeh mujhe pata tha,parr woh itna stupid bhi hoga maine kabhi nai socha tha,i mean usse abhi tak realize nai hua
al:exactly,he knows that he feels bad when he sees nano with some one else espwcially aru,but he is just not ready to accept that he luvs her
abhi:woh accept karega bhi nai,itni jaldi toh nai,jalan ke garam garam tel mein tal kar fish pakoda bann jayega,parr accept nai karega
nav:ab ham kya karein?
c:mujhe lagta hai ab hame kuchh nai karna chahiye,ham manik ko jiyna push kar saktein thhey kar diya,ab sab uske haath mein ha
d:cabir sahi bolra hai,for now lets just concentrate on the competition
mu:hm..i think ur rite,fine then bye
and then all the frnds bid a sweet gud bye to each other
NEXT MORNING
the first thing manik did on reaching college was meet nandu,but nandini was just not ready to even appreciate his presence.manik was loosing his cool but he knew this time it was both his mistake and need too,heneeded to be close to his frnds,he cud not just let them replace him,finally getting a chance he dragged nandini into a vacant room
n:what the hell is ur prblm manik,cant u see m not interested in talking to u
m:hmm...lekin ab toh baat karri ho,and then he smirked
lately if there was something that nandini started to dislike about manik apart from his behaviour was his smirk,well bcoz,manik malhoytra now only smirked when he was at fault and this irritated nandini,findinh that ever so famous smirk on his face irritated nandini further
n:manik,tumhe yeh sab mazak lagra hai,fine haslo,lekin mere paas bhi mat ana and she tried to leave,but manik being manik had this time decided to make nandini forgive him
m:nai,ab meri baat suno,m sorry nandini,woh sab ke liye jo maine kal kiya,i wanted to spend time with u but tum uss aryamnn ke yahan practice ke liye chali gai,isiliye main gussa ho gaya aur maine woh sab kar diya
on hearing manik apologising nandinis heart melted
n:manik i wint say that its ok,bcoz i aint,but i can understand,lekin manik even u need to understand na,woh practices mere liye zaroori hai,yeah
m:hmm..m sorry,lo kaan pakad ke sorry,ab toh maaf kardo
maniks cute antics made nandini smile
n:ok,i forgive u
m:yuhoo...ok now bye,practice ke liye late horra hai,bye,all the best
n:same to u
like this one 2 weeks passed,aryamanns classes had made nandinis control over the guitar really gud,where fab4&gang along with aryamann managed to get together always,manik was always dragged away with soha,these two weeks made this clear to manik that he never loved soha,he was just attracted to her,but made one thing unclear for him
WHO WAS NANDINI TO HIM?WAS SHE JUST A FRND?
somewhere deep down manik knew that nandini was more than a frnd,but his ever so big ego always overshadowed his feelings for her with the hurt that HIS FRNDS REPLACED HIM WITH ARYAMANN
yes,manik was still not ready to realie his mistake,or may be,his mistake was too big for him to accept
two days r left for thecompetition,there is hustle and bustle in the whole college,there is an atmosphere of excitement and zeal,all the students have been once again asked to assemble in the audi
AUDI
ny:gud morn students,as we all know that there r just two days left for the musicana and 3 for the freshers party,due to some reasons we have decided to add some more rules
rule 5:since only 4 bands r participating we have decided that none of the bands will be eliminated,they will be given scores for their performances which will be totalled up and then the firts two bands will be given the prizes
rule 6:the scores will be given on the basis of all aspects,that is,the dressing style,attitude,aura and most importantly,performance
so all the best to all the bands,its time to pull up ur socks,thanq and have a nice day
nyonikas anouncement made everyone cheer to the loudest,everyonr wanted to luk the best and this increased the excitement of everyone
OUTSIDE AUDI
both fab5 and NA4 met
s:chalo iss anouncement se ek baat toh achhi hui,ab tum log ko eliminate hone ki bezatti nai uthani hogi
sohas comment as usual irritated evryone,where none of the members were feeling competitive against each other,sohas cmment seemed to have tried to arouse such feelings,even manik was sick of sohas taunts against NA4,what disturbed him more was the fact that soha herself was really bad who shud actually thank her stars that the band did not throw her out
abhi:itna overconfidence achha nai hota soha
s:yeh mere over confidence nai,mera vishwas hai,mera ghamand hai,she said with a smirk on her face
sohas immature talks irked manik,just then nandini spoke
n:ghmand ka boj bahut bhari hota hai,itna ghamnd bhi achha nai soha,dont be so proud,u never know,when a disastorous storm may break ur ever so big pride,taking along with it the remains of ur terribly destroyed self repect too,leaving u in this world nothing more than a cripeled beggar,roaming around in search of his lost pride
nandidnis deep talks went absolutely not understud by soha,who stud their trying to analyse what nandini meant since everyone over there had a small grin on their faces,manik on the other hand once again got blown away by nandinis deep thoughts,which he very much respacted and appreciated
al:ok chalo then lets go,we need to go for shopping
nav:do one thing,fab5 alag shopping karega aur NA4 alag,whats say
mu:perfect!!
this was a well planned move,girls decided for anothershopping session in the eve to buy dresses for the freshers party,all done to keep soha and the boys away,they had a surprise for them

(i know it was like a shitty update but i was not feeling well and was extrmely sleepy so m really sorry)

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