MaNanSS: Dheere Dheere Chap5/PG91/ Link to Thread 2/PG1 - Page 54

That was fun chapter
I loved the drunk Nandu
The orphanage kids haahhaahahah MANIK was almost gone
Baparay Nandu nay aryaman Ko diya kheech Kay baraabar Kay
Well now we hav seen Nandu jealous now u should bring MANIK jealous
Jaaha tak Mujhay PATA hay Nandu KUCH yaad NAHI hoga
Per subhay uththay he Jo jhatakaa lagayga woh zarror shocking hoga
Anyways I hope MANIK fear doesn't come true n Nandu behave THODHA sa like how 20year old behave maturely so Tht she will hav trust in MANIK
Anyways continue soon
I can't wait for the next morning to come

Heya. ...u nailed it dear... luved this talli nandu.. i wished ke 1 baar cat fight hote... it would hv ben awsum 2 see nandu pulling shoa's hair... hahaha... bechara manik... i hope she don't regret nything...

Tali nandini ... super awsm .. 😃
He he manik's cndition ...!!!
Kissing n all haan ...!! Not bad manik..
Hey update was amazing ...
Thankx fr pm ...
cntinue soon..
Gd mrng ... hve a nice day 😊

Wohoo that's what I call back to back hahaha
But u want to put 4abc as for a min I was going to turn back after 4a
Back to updates take a bow gal ... Mind blowing
4a heheh stranger to jeeju to khadoos boss haha I love the kids
4bc loved talli Nandu totally... The slap and tiff with Soha and the way she asks haina manik sir
And the kiss ... Hmm what will be her reaction tmrw morn ... She can't blame him now lol ;)))
Just loved it gal

mawara my dear...jaan
it's was awesome
blossom
thnx 4 giving us daily update
ur writing skill...excellent
this story is beautiful...
keep writing
stay blessed
luv u...
muaaah

just awesome...aryman thappad...jealous,talli nd expresive nandini...emotional manik ..first kiss wow! nd nandini said dont regret.. i trust you so cute..thank you for the pm nd eagerly waiting for the next update thank you

Haai!!!! What a fun update. I so enjoyed it. Bhot mazaa aya is update me.
Seriously!!!! Ek he update me itna much.
Starting from Manik's entry in the orphanage...the kids...waterguns...hahaha!!!!! And then jiju...i could not stop laughing 🤣
Then came Nandu in that breathtaking dress. Wow and Manik's look was also fab. I've always loved that black suit with white shirt combo. Their car conversation was just awesome.
CabiNi moments during the whole party was just too good.
The best part of party was jealous Nandu drinking wine. Bhot maza aya.
And the way she dealt with Soha and Aryamam...ROFL...!!!!
The journey back home was so amazing.
And finally the kiss...first kiss...liked it!!!!
Kaise??? Kaise kar lete ho tum??? Har update itna beautiful!!!!! And that too of ur every story.
A bow to u 👏

Superb part
Drunk nandani is always treat to watch.
Waiting to knw what vl be nandani's reaction after waking up

Hahahaah it was awesome yaar...

O m g...u made my morning mawara...
Shahahjaha...that thappd was so classy...and MY Manik sir...hahhh I am flying in air...
Loved this update in every sense...

When she was drunk...she was letting out her insecurities...
I loved the part...that she justified everything...

And that kis...was so so out f world...

U made my day...
Thanks a lot mawara...
U r really the best...



Loads f love...
God bless you bby