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Posted: 9 years ago
Ur writing skills r amazing yaar it was so romantic cute emotional and hilarious in short combination of everything
U r a brilliant writer and thanks for the lamba wala update
Can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww such a cute n lovely update. First kids ne jiju bola wooow so sweet. Hahaha nandu or uski wishes ankho mai dekh kr tareef. Jealously ne nandu ko talli kerdia wooow kya thappar para aryaman ko or soha ko tu tight sunai nandu ne maza aagaya Awww my manik sir was so cute. Hayeee such a blissful kiss.
Wooow dear u penned it beautifully. Really loved it
Keep updating
Keep smiling
Keep shining
Lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super super super update
I loved all the parts
And nandini such a cute doll
Waiting what will happened in the morning
U R awsome writer
Keep it up
Cont soon
Take Care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very very beautiful amazing and awesome update.
I enjoyed this to the core.
Manik kou nandni ne bacha liya.
Warna her shote sipahi tou water gun see
Uda de te Mr . Malhotra kou ..haha
And manik find nandni breathtakingly
Beautiful awesome.
Nandni ki cute si conditions
Aryman tou thapar kha ke beth gya.
Nandni talli scene was awesome.
Manik kou uske dil ki sachi baat pata chal gye.
But chocolate ke saath kiss yeh tou bonus
Mil gya.
Now talli nandni want to sleep with manik sirs hand holding.
Bechare manik ke tou bara baj gye ab...kya hoga.
Nandnis jewelry was beautiful.
I loved the chapter very very much from my heart.
Thanks for sharing this love story dheere dheere. ...
Your are a shabdun ki jadoogar.
Stay always happy.
God bless you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
BEAUTIFULLY written... manik's pov is something that I love the most... they are a bliss to read... and update was amazing... nandini is such a sensitive soul... even little things bother her a lot... but she understood manik soo well... she has understood that all this rude arrogant side of manik is just fake... and manik himself is surprised to know that... nandini shouting good morning, then blabbering soo much, the rat scene,,, really cute how manik held her... then cabir bhai and nandini behna scene... loved it soo much... and manik, he too smiled... how sweet... and the lunch with tye khuranas... aryaman's gaze on nandini... manik too having a bad feeling... nandini being uncomfortable... but still focussed on her work... very efficient... but crying like a baby... and manik consoling her... really adorable... and manik getting to know that nandini is an orphan just stabbed his heart sooo much... amazing... awesome... superb... loved the whole update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
First Comment on Dheere Dheere !!
Okay let me tell you first thing that I just loved loved the concept !!
A lonely orphan girl becoming solace of a loner young Man !! The thought itself is damn pure; beautiful and soul - stirring !! You know I am not so emotional but their talks na; they really made me go teary !! That Pain of Nandini !! Manik's joy around her !! Her cuteness !! Everything is so amazing !!

Here na I want you to make Manik also express his pain and grief with Nandini !! And pls pls no misunderstandings between the lovelies pleaseee !! Can't bear to see Manik sad and broken again !!

Chalo Bhai !! Maine toh teri wish puri kardi !! Jitna hosakta tha utna lambaaa comment diya !!

And Do I need to say? Please next update jaldi dena !!! Can't wait :)

Loads of Love !!
Juhi <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
Love this... their reaction to each other qnad the kids... her possessiveness infront of Soha and the reaction to Aaryman, and Cabir's note thtat only Manik can take care of her and then their admission of their feelings a bit and Manik's happiness and the kiss...sigh... really hope no regrest when they wake up and it's more of a fresh start for hem like after Nadhu's drunken night on the show...lovely job...can't wait for update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing .

superb.

hilarious I was fully laughing though out the parts it was Awsome love it..

the think which came in my mind only one thing can rule .
sirf nandani hi nacha sakti hai the manik malhotra ko.

this cute doll is driving him crazy ...

waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
What an update...it was just wooow... the orphanage scene where manik's outfit was in grave danger... hahaha... and then children saying JEJU and then referring to him as nandini's KHADOOS BOSS... hahaha... then in the car manik complimenting her and she saying to do it in a filmy style to which manik just laughed whole heartedly and nandini too smiled... and at the party nandini's jealousy leading to a fiasco... hahaha it was damn funny... and manik handling her as if she is a child... and for the first time manik didn't care about his deal but felt happy about the fact that nandini considers him as hers... it was delightful feeling for manik... and then her two conditions... real fun they were... manik felt soo overwhelmed that nandini trusted him and didn't want him to leave her... amazing... but now manik is worried about his actions... hope for the best... super awesome update... loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's awesome...orphanage scene was too funny. Boss se sidha jeju! Hahaha...party scene was also good...I loved the talli nandu...she was so cute.you present nandu in a different way...I am to know nandu's reaction... So update soon

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