Manan new begining (chapter 19)pg 14 updated on 15/12/15 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 17

Next day morning

Nandini find herself on bed instead of beach. She saw Manik was still sleeping taking her in his embrace. She smiled looking at him.

She remembered that she fall asleep she felt little guilty as she also wanted to spend some time with him so she goes and change dress and goes from room.

After some time Manik also got up and not finding Nandini he started to look here and there and he heard "Good Morning" from Nandini in her sugary voice.And he saw a surprise which was waiting for him.

Nandini arranged breakfast for him.She smiled looking at him.


Manik also wished her good morning by kissing her on her cheeks.After a breakfast Manik also goes to take a bath and Nandini joined others.

Nandini: So what's the today's plan

Navya: Hame voh aquarium dekhna hai.

Mukti : what seriously

Alya:let's do some adventurous sports.

Manik: yeah chalo karte hai

Cabir:Ek minut Nvya aur mai ja rahe hai aquarium dekhane

Mukti: muzhe water sports karne hai

Manan also said

All goes from there

Manik:So Nandini what do you want to do?

Nandini:muzhe na parasailing karni hai

Manik:seriously are you sure?

Nandini:ya sure

Manik:chalo phir

Manik helped her to tie a belt.

Nandini was feeling nervous littlebit.

So Manik holds her hand. and asks if she i



Both enjoyed there.

Other side Dhruliya

Alya:water scooter pe chale

Dhruv:As you say Alya

Alya smiled

Both go for a long ride.



On other side

Cavya goes for An aquarium.

They reached there.


Navya: wow ye kitna acha hai na cabir isse dekho na kitni choti hai fish aur yeh golden vali bhi.

Navya was all exited. Cabir was watching her and feeling happy.

Navya catches him while he was looking at her.

Navya:Cabir kaha khoye ho?

Cabir: kaha matlab yaha jo dikh raha hai wo dekh raha hoon.fished dikh rahe hai muzhe.

Saying this he took her to next section

All gathered at one place at evening

They spend time singing songs , sharing their today's experience .

All were really tired so they decided to had a dinner in their rooms only.

They say good night and go to their rooms.

Manan also reached their room.

Nandini: Manik I will change dress and come.

Manik said yes then she goes to change.

When she came back she didn't find Manik instead she found a box which was gift wrapped and a note written on it.

Will you go on date with me? If yes then pick this box up and came fast .Can't wait to see you in this dress.I am waiting for you.

Yours monster Manik

She took his note and kissed it and smiled.She took that box an unwrap it.

It was a beautiful white dress.It was short dress.


She reached at the destination

She just gets mesmerized with the beautiful arrangement.



It was a candle light dinner arranged.

She said Manik I love you in very low voice.

But then she feels hand wrapping her waist. It was Manik.

He kissed her hair. And said I love you too Nandini Hamesha.

Saying this he turned nandini facing towards him.

Nandini just gave him quick kiss on his cheek.

Nandini:par Manik tumne yeh kab kiya? You were with me na all the time

Manik: aree kitne sawal puchte ho. He dragged her near him and just looking at her.

She blushed as the way Manik was looking at her

Manik: beautiful

Listening this she blushed very hard.

Manik: Nandini please don't blush otherwise me dinner ka wait nahi kar paunga aur hame room me jana padega

Nandini hiding her blush :Manik please muzhe bhukh lagi hai chale

Manik forwarded his hand and she held it.

Manik ordered all her favourite dishes.

Both had a dinner.

After they had a very romantic dinner

After that Manik cover her eyes with his hand.

Nandini:Manik kya kar rahe ho.

Manik: you are impatient please thoda wait karo

Then he took his hand aside.

Precap:

aur ek surprise

Manan romance continued

So I tried to give my best to give an update as early as possible anda long update .Hope ki you will like it.

Thanks for liking keep liking it .and don't forget to comment .

If you want to give any suggestions PM me.

Love,

sonpri

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Posted: 9 years ago
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All the three parts are amazing one. Continue soon. Do pm me if possible and sent me buddy request as am updateing comment by mobile not possible to sent you. Sorry for that please forgive me. Thank you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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guys first of all I want to tell you that the dance sequence .Aaj mere sath hote hote rahe gaye. jiske saath karna chahiye tha usake saath nahi kiya par kisi aur kisi ke saath hua.☺️ but it was not that bad aur maine aaj hi yeh likhna start kar diya what a coincedence


Enjoy reading aur pakaungi nahi


Chapter 18

Manik removes his hand slowly from her eyes her eyes

And she saw a wonderful sight in front of her eyes


Nandini takes look around

Manik it's so beautiful

Manik takes her hand her and made her sit in front of him.

Nandini was lost in his eyes which were intense and looking at her.

And she saw guitar behind him. So she ask him

Nandini: Please sing for me

How can he deny his love's request .

He took his guitar

And started to sing looking at her.

Kisi ko sapna lagey tu
Kisi ko behti hawaa
Kisi ko bas baaton mein
Kare pal mein yahaan wahaan
Kisi ke sau jhoot sun le
Kisi ka sacch bhi gunaah
Kisi ki bas yaadon mein
Kare hulchul saara jahaan

Nandini was busy in admiring him

Te amo me te amo
Tu chhaanv hai, tu dhoop hai
Te amo me te amo
Tere hazaron roop hai
Koi samjha nahin
Jo bhi hai bas khoob hai
Falling so crazy in love
(he forwarded his hand towards her. She also held it )

Te amo me te amo
Tu chhaanv hai, tu dhoop hai
Te amo me te amo
Tere hazaaron roop hai

(manik pulled her slowly toward him taking her hand)

Ho.. I've been around the world
There's no one like you, Girl

(he kissed her hand nandini closed her eyes smiling)

Nandinin sings

I feel it all the time
Just have to make you mine

Kabhi lagey raaton mein main
Khwaabon se baatien karoon
Subah unhi khwaabon ko main kaabu karoon
Kabhi lagey taaron se bhi, unchi udaane bharoon
Kabhi lagey baadalon se jaibein bharoon

(Putting her hand near his heart and goes near him)

Te amo me te amo
Taare ginu tere liye
Te amo me te amo
Saare chunu tere liye
Khwaab saare bunu tere hi tere liye
Falling so crazy in love
(he twirls her and again took her hand in his.both were lost in their world)

-Nandini sings-
Kabhi lagey mili nahin
Tumse main khwaabon mein bhi
Kabhi lagey kahin toh hai ristha koi
Kabhi lagey chhu tumhe
Yunhi khayalon mein hi
Kabhi lagey nahin nahin chori nahin
(giving him bright smile)

Manik sings
Te amo me te amo
Tu paas hai par door hai
Te amo me te amo
Jaata nahin yeh noor hai
Teri chori bhi yeh manzoor manzoor hai
Falling so crazy in love
Te amo me te amo
(nandini kissed his cheek)


Te amo me te amo
Jaata nahin yeh noor hai...


Both hugged each other tightly

So guys I have given this update I know its little short but I will try to update next part as early as possible.


Keep commenting 😊.

And hit like.


Love,

Sonpri



Edited by sonpri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
yaar,,
its a nice nd sweet 1...
bohat intezar karwaya...😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome lovely update dea. ...
Read 11 parts in one go
Beautifully written
Continue soonnn
If possible pm me nxt time
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was lovely update. Please post the next part soon. Tack care. Keep smiling😊😊😊😊.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just read it
Awesome story loved it
Cont soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
So guys m back again with new update actually promo

Chapter 19(promo)

Now manik and nandini broke the hug and sat on that bed.
Nandini rested her head on his chest.they were busy in watching their favorite stars which were clearly visible from that place.
Nandini was playing at his fingers and his hands were busy playing with her hair.
Manik: I want ki hum aaise he rahe hamesha
Nandini: toh rahenge na hamesha
Saying this she kissed his cheek.
Manik turned around and rested his head on his elbow
Nandini was blushing as she knows his intense gaze on her.
Nandini: manik
Manik: haan nandini
Nandini: kya krr rahe ho
Manik: tumhe dekh raha hoon aur kya
Saying this he dived into space between her neck and shoulder
And kissed her nap
Nandini closed her eyes and places her hand on his shoulder
Manik: its so difficult to control myself when am around you.
Nandini:so don't control then
Saying this she came dangerously close to his face and without wasting any time has fused his lips with her.kiss was so passionate that they almost forget all world that exist around them even themselves,
They broke the kiss when manik feels they nandini needs air.they were panting badly.
They rested head on each other and manik's hands were holding Her waist.

He hovered over her took her hand in his and kissed her right eye then left eye.

To be continued...😆

Galat time pe khatam kiya.

Sorry bahot jyada busy hoon so small update.😊

Thank you both .you kept commenting regularly. Those who want pm send buddy request .


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Edited by sonpri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely promo
Update soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful promo. Update the full part soon. Thanks for the pm. Tack care. Keep smiling😊😊😊😊😊.

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