Manan new begining (chapter 19)pg 14 updated on 15/12/15

sonpri thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#1

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

New entry

Dhruv get bumped onto someone & paper falls from person.

Dhruv: R U fine? Tumhe kahi lagi toh nahi?

Girl: No .I am fine. Sorry I didn't mean to I was...

Dhruv: It's ok.I don't need any explanation.

He helped her gathering papers.

Girl:Thank u for helping me. By the way hi my name is Sana (Imagine her as Utkarsh's partner in splitsvilla)

Dhruv: Hii,It's Dhruv.

Sana: kya aap muzhe library kaha pe hai yeh bata sakte hai? This is new place for me.

Dhruv: ha ha kyu nahi.Go straight and take right turn you will find library.

Sana: Thanks once again.

Dhruv: u r welcome.

Sana: Well I have to leave. Bye nice to meet u. said smiling at him

Alya was observing this & got upset.

Then aryaman came & called her

Aryaman: kya hua?

Alya: kuch nahi chalo.

Dhruv and alya exchanged looks and go from there

At cabir's house

Cabir was watching TV

Navya was trying to help his mother

Cabir's mom: Navya yeh tum kya kar rahi ho? Tumhe aaram karna chahiye.Ek to tum college jati ho uparse mana karne par bhi Radio station jati ho.iss halat main itana kaam thik nahi hai beta.

Cabir: ham aur datiye isse vo to meri aur Nandini ki baat bhi nahi manti

Navya listening to this had tears into her eyes

Cabir: vo ho madhubala ro mat.I was jocking seriously mat lo.ab ro mat.

Navya:Kuch nahi vo maa ki yaad aa gayi agar voh hoti toh va bhi mera isi tarah se khayal rakhti

Hamara.

Cabir's mom: Agar vo nahi hai ti kya hua mai to hoon na.Ab jao aaram karo kamre main

Listening this conversation cabir also got emotional but doesn't show

Cabir take navya to her room & wished her good night.

At late night Manan were feeling sleepy but missing each other.

Both were looking at phone. They took phone and dialed number.

But phone was busy as coincidently both were calling at the same time.

Both recorded voice message and send them

Both were unable to sleep without listening each other's voice

The message was "I am missing u .I was calling u just to wish u good night...and most important thing I have to tell u that I love u hamesha..."

Next day in college

It is a rose day

All came to college but Manan were missing.

All are trying to find them

Cabir: agar yeh log college main pohonch hai to kaha gayab ho gaye hai

Mukti: but obviously they are busy in romancing

All laughed

Manik called Nandini in classroom

Nandini reaches and It was dark .she called his name but he didn't respond

Suddenly light turns on and saw Manik in front of her. And asked him why he called her.

Manik: Tum bhul gayi aaj kya hai

Nandini: Hmmm...AAJ to rose day hai

Manik: toh phir..

Nandini: Toh phir kya muzhe laga ki you would like to give me roses.To kaha pe hai mera rose.

Manik: Acccha toh yeh baat hai Mr.Murty

He goes near her & gives her white rose.Nandini gives him questioning look.

Nandini: Yeh white rose kyu?

Manik: Voh issliye kyu ki it's symbol of peace and since you have entered into my life I found my solace in you.aur waise bhi it's your favorite color.

Nandini smiled

She was about to say something but get interrupted by him when he forwared his hand with yellow rose.

Nandini: thank you

Manik: Aur isse pahele kuch tum kuch pucho mai yeh batadoo ki.It is for our friendship.We started this relationship with friendship.

Nandini: smiled hugged him tightly he also responded it equally burt breaking the hug Nandini said "In this case I should be the one who will give this rose to you becoz you r the bestest friend anyone could have on this earth .Thanks for being my friend"

To be cont...

Precap

Time for Red rose

Manan romance

Chapter 6

Edited by sonpri - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

85

Views

36k

Users

26

Likes

559

Frequent Posters

divtan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
This was a chhotu update
Plzz update thoda lambs
Cz I jus started reading ur updatea..
I love dem !!!!
Filmyarchu thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Oh soo sweet
a better rose day than the last one for Manan
pls update soon :))
RomComFan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
So sweet...love the voicemails and the comments with the roses... looking forward to red rose and sana interaction with dhruv
sosweetsumi thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
outstanding
loved all parts ab to innnhi se kaam chalana hai
please do continue
bye sumi
SIAZAHEED.1 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#6
jst loved it..
egarlyy waiting 4 the nxtt.,😆
sonpri thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#7

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Manik and Nandini hugged again but this time Manik broke the hug saying aur not but the least he gave her red rose.

Nandini was more than happy. She smiled.

Nandini: I love u Manik.

Manik: I love u too Nandini HAMESHA.

He was looking into her eyes. He takes her hand in his hand and kissed them.

He cupped her face still looking into her eyes caresses her cheek. She closed her eyes sensing his so gentle touch. She can feel the care he had for her & love he feels for her.

Looking at her how she was reacting to his touch. Manik turns on his teasing mode. He brushes his thumb on her lower lip. She opened her eyes. She looked at him. He had so intense gaze on her. She couldn't resist .She put her hands on his chest and goes near him. Both kissed softly but passionately. They broke the kiss when they are out of oxygen. They were panting heavily.

And then Nandini's phone starts ringing.

She picked it & says I am coming

Manik: Kya hua kiska phone tha?

Nandini: It's Navya. All are waiting for us.

Manik: Ok toh phir chalo .

He said looking at her. She was avoiding his gaze.

Navya: offo Nandini kaha pe thi tum tumhe kabse dhoond rahe hai hum.

Cabir teasingly

Aree Navya dikhayi nahi de raha kya tumhe. Nandini ke hathon mai roses hai.Yeh dono apana rose day mana kea aye hai.

Manik gave him daggering look

Cabir: Matlab aaj pura college hi rose day mana raha hai

Issase muzhe kuch yad aa gaya jo mai bhul gaya tha mai bhi kuch laya hoo tumhare liye Navya.

Navya: hamare liye

She got exited.

Cabir: This white rose is for u.

Navya: Hamare liye par kyu.

Cabir: kya ka kya matlab hai?Kyyu ki meri zindagi mai hamesha shanty bani rahe.Matlab tum hamesha muzhase zagda na kiya karo issliye.

Navya: Kya kaha tumne.Hum zagda karte hai.Par tum harkate hi aaisi karti ho ki hum kitani bhi koshish kare hum apne apko nahi rok pate.

All were laughing seeing their sweet knok zok

Finally Navya took white flower.

All go for practicing.

Aryaman: Alya kya hum friends hai?

Alya: Haan par tum aaise kyu puch rahe ho?

Aryaman: Who brought u a rose so I asked.

Alya: Rose who bhi mere liye par kyu?

Aryaman: Aree abhi abhi toh tumne kaha na that we are friends so

He gave her yellow flower.

Alya accepted his yellow flower. And smiled.

Alya: Thank you for flower. Friend. So shuru kare practice?

Aryaman: Yup,We better start it.

It was a break time

Dhruv was going through collidoor thinking about Alya.

There were some students who were playing truth and dare. A bottle pointed towards girl. They asked her to do dare instead of truth as she already is already had it before. And the dare was giving a red rose to guy whoever comes first.

She was so afraid that she closed her eyes & bumped onto a Dhruv.

Dhruv: Tum yaha phise vo bhi aaise Sana

Sana: I am sorry I didn't do it intentionally. Par she forwarded her hand with red rose.

Dhruv: Yek kya kar rahi ho?

Sana: Please take this or else I have to face punishment. Hum truth aur dare khel rahe the aur it's my dare.

Dhruv: What keep bumping onto me said smiling at her & took the red rose.

Sana: Thank you once again for helping. You are so nice. Woh main chalti hoon .I had to get back to my friends.

Dhruv was smiling looking at red rose

Then Fab4 and Nandini entered and saw him.

Mukti: Aree ye tumhe kisne aur kab diya? Tumne hame bataya bhi nahi.

Dhruv: Aree aaisi kai baat nahi hai actually woh...

Cabir: what actually woh Dhruv tu hamse kuch chupa raha hai?

All were laughing except Alya which was noticed by Nandini.

Dhruv also saw her and gave an explanation.

Dhruv: aaisi kai baat nahi hai actually who ek ladki hai use dare mila tha so I just helped her He said looking at Sana which was noticed by Alya.

Alya: Lagta hai wo ladki ek hi din main acchi dost baan gayi hain na.

Dhruv: Alya she is not my friend. I hardly know her.

Sensing that argument is going to be heated for lightning atmosphere Cabir targeted Manan

Cabir: Kuch bhi kaho aaj sirf hamare Manik aur nandini ne acche se rose day manaya hai kya lagta hai tumhe

Manik:Cabir yaar tu phir se start ho gaya .Ab bas tu ruk abhi

And started running after him.

All were laughing.

When break time got over they go to their class.

Manan also go to their class

They completed their practice session. Then Manik stopped Nandini exactly beneath fan .And her to stand here.

Nandini:Manik pahele batao kya hai .

Manik: wait Nandini abhi pata chal jayega.& turned on fan

There were all red rose petals on her.

Nandini was enjoying soft petals showering on her.

Nandini was so happy with his surprise .

Nandini: Thanks for this Manik

Manik: sirf aaise thank u he said removing some petals in her hair.

Nandini gave a strong peck on his cheeks said thank u so much

Thanks for your support. Keep liking and commenting.😊


Chapter 7

Edited by sonpri - 9 years ago
divtan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#8
very very very cute
loved it :) :) :) :)
SIAZAHEED.1 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#9
its damn nice update dear..

par Nandu ne aaj vi saari nehi pehna..\

kab she goonna wear saarii..

i m egarlyy waiting 4 that part...😊..
yams_ini thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
very cute update
cont soon
tanq fr Pm dear

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".