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Posted: 9 years ago
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AB ALYA ND NANDU TEAM UP ??????

WO VI 4 A GUY ND 4 DHRUV ??????????????

WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

INTERESTING ...
WAITNG 4 D NXT ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love the bonds of friendship that they share
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I Know that I am too late sorry but here is the next part


Chapter 14

Precap:

Alya and Nandini decide to sort out things between Dhruv and Alya

Alya's house

Nandini: chalo get ready

Alya: for what?

Nandini: just wait and watch

She took her phone and called Dhruv

Nandini: Dhruv please jaldi aa jao Alya ke ghar pe it's emergency

Dhruv: par batao toh sahi kya hua hai? Woh toh thk hai na?

Nandini didn't answer and cut the call

Dhruv gets worried he was on his bike when Manik called him.

Dhruv: what happen tum aaise kyu sound kar rahe ho? Thik ho na?

Dhruv: I am fine it's Alya pata nahi but Nandini just called me and asked me to come Alya's home .Mai vahi ja raha hoon

Manik: buddy tu tension mat le everything will be fine. Mai bhi ata hoon

Manik was confused as Nandini called Dhruv but didn't call him.

Dhruv reached Alya's home

Nandini opened door

Dhruv: kya baat hai Nandini Alya thik toh hai na? tumne muzhe kuch bataya bhi nahi

Nandini: tum jake dekho she is in her room

Dhruv get into her room .

Alya was sitting on bed she had crape bandage on her feet.

Seeing this Dhruv started

Dhruv: what is this Alya ? yeh kaise ho gaya?

Looking at her

Alya: I am fine It's just sprain

Dhruv: Dard ho raha hai kya ?

He touched her feet

Alya: Ab nahi .Agar itanihi fikar hai toh fir muzhse fight kyu karte ho?

Dhruv: mai fight karta hoon jara yaad karo muzhe taunt kaun marta tha

Alya:Toh phir tum uss ladki se jyadahi friendly kyu ho rahe the?

Dhruv got confused

Dhruv:Kaunsi ladki?

Alya: don't be smart wahi ladki Sana

Dhruv:are wo.She is really sweet

Alya: toh jao phir usi ke pass

She looked at him angrily

Nandini listened knock on the door

She goes to open it.

Nandini: Manik tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Manik: why didn't you tell me? Kya hua Alya ko?thik toh hai na wo

Nandini interrupted him

Nandini:Manik shant ho jao she is perfectly fine

Manik: fir wo Dhruv kyu tensed tha?

Nandini:wo actually na it was plan

Manik:What plan?

Nandini:but obviously for Alya and Dhruv

Manik: kaha hai dono?

Nandini: room mai wo baat kar rahe hai

Manik: R U sure ?nahi toh dono lad rahe honge .mai dekh ke ata hoon

Nandini: r U crazy. Give the some privacy.Alya will manage

Manik: Hope so

Alya's room

Dhruv Looked at her

Dhruv: tumhari problem kya hai? Sana? Seriously.She is not even my friend

Alya: so you didn't like her said hesitantly

Dhruv:off couse not

He sat on bed. Goes near her took her hand in his hand and asked her

Dhruv: par why these things are bothering you?

Alya looked down

Dhruv: listen Alya I am here with you for you don't worry.Ab mai kahi nahi jaunga

Alya: Pakka then promise me

Dhruv smiles and promised her .both hugged

On terrace

MaNan were sitting on couch. both were observing stars.

Manik was resting his head on couch and Nandini rest her head on his chest.He was caressing her hair. While looking at his stars.

Manik: toh plan aaise achanak bina bataye?

Nandini: They really love each other but there are some miss understandings they need to get sort out baki jo dono decide karenge wahi hoga.

Manik:hmm wo toh hai

Waise nandini I forget to tell you onr thing

Nandini: Kya?

Manik goes near her ear and whisper I LOVE YOU NANDINI

Nandini smiled and gets up and kissed his cheek I LOVE YOU TOO

Nandini: Manik it's getting chill do you want coffee

She gets up from there but Manik pulled her and she next thing she find herself on his lap

Manik: Muzhe kuchh nahi chahiye ? just stay with me

Nandini slowly adjust herself on couch

Alya: Dhruv I don't want to rush can we take it slowly

Dhruv: yes as you say

Saying this he kissed her forehead

Alya started to move but stoped by Dhruv kya kar rahi ho aur dukhega

Alya removed her Band-Aid kuch nahi hai and smiled

Dhruv was surprised

Dhruv : toh ye kiska plan tha

Alya: Nandini ka.Shit ham toh bhulhi gaye use chalo use thanks toh bolke ate hai

They started to find her.

Finally they found both of them

MaNan were holding hands .talking with each other

Alya: Aaj sirf Nandini ki wajah se yeh possible hua hai

Dhruv: yeah dono kitane khush lag rahe hai na

Saying this he took her in side her

They didn't disturbed them

Manan slept there unknowingly when Nandini was playing with his fingers. Manik was playing with her hair

Please guys let me know how was this part by giving me your precious comments😊

you can also read MANAN MYSTERY


Love

sonpri

Edited by sonpri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow super cool update
Cont soon
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Chapter 15

Next morning all were ready going for goa.

All decided to meet at airport. All were there except cabir and Navya.

Mukti:kya ha gaya iin dono ko kaha hai voh.

Nandini: meri baat ho vhuki hai uun logo se they are on their way.

Dekho wo aa gaye

Mukt: kaha the tum log we were waiting

Cabir: yaar dekho madhubala ke chakkar mai der ho gayi.Upar se meri maa ke instructions ki ye maat karo yeh karo toh kya karta mai

Manik:It's k chalo ab nahi toh der ho jayegi

All started to move

Nandini was sitting near Manik,Alya near Dhruv ,Cabir with Navya,Mukti with Aryaman.

Manan was holding hand .Nandini was sleeping on Manik's shoulder. Manik was watching her. He thought she look so beautiful when she sleeps. He kissed her temple.And rested his head on her head.

After few time she was awake and saw his monster sleeping peacefully. She ruffled his hair and kissed his cheek. Feeling Nandini's touch he also wake up but he again sleeps turning on his naughty mode. He move his head and goes near her hair and hide his face in her crook. Now Nandini also started to feel his hot breath. Manik moved little bit and placed his hands around her waist.She looked at him once but she still finds him sleeping. She started to move but she couldn't as she was in protective embrace of her bf. She smiled and goes to fresh n up. As soon as she was returning she saw her monster bf was standing infront of her.

Nandini:Manik tum yaha.tum toh so rahe the na?

Manik smiled ha

Nandini: Manik you were pretending to be sleeping

Manik goes near Nandini took her hand in his hands

Manik: tum yeh san chodo yes socho ki you me ek kamare mai

Nandini:toh

Manik: toh we will share room and.. you know

He got interrupted by cabir

Cabir:yaar tum dono yaha bhi suru ho gaye

Manik rolled his eyes

Cabir :aree yaha pregnant ladki bhi hai dhyan rakho jara.

He gave his hand to madhubala.who wanted to use washroom.

All took their seats.

Plan got landed.

They reached to the hotel. It was near beach.

Manager:How can I help you sir?

Manik: we need to book 5 rooms

Cabir:Nahi 4 rooms

All were looking at him

Manik:4 rooms?

Cabir:wo navya ke sath koi toh rahega na so maine kaha 4 room.

Mukti:yah u r right cabir.I will stay with her.

Manik agreed and made bookings for 4 rooms.

Manager handed them keys.

All went to their rooms.

Manan was last to go to the room.

Manik kept his hand around her neck side hugging her.

They reached to their rooms.

Manik: Nandini chalo finally hamara room aa gaya

He smirked.

Nandini : toh open the door she said it in low voice

Manik leaned towards her and opened door.

Manan bedroom:



She strted to walk further and she found .

Nandini walk and she found



Nandini couldn't resist and hopped into manik's arms

Seeing her happy manik was also happy.

Nandini hugged him hightly.Manik hugged her more tightly after some time she broke the hug and claimed his lips with hers.First he taken aback by this sudden guesture but He also reciprocated with equal favor.The would last for some time if they were not got disturbed by knock on the door.They straighten themselves .Manik opened door it was their luggage he took it and closes door.


Precap:

Goa trip continue...


hope you will like this part.

Please leave your precious comments.


Love,

sonpri

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Posted: 9 years ago
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i jst loved the chap
Specially Manan's suit..
it was lovely..
update soon..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 16

All decided to meet after taking some rest as they have travelled.

Manan was sleeping peacefully cuddling each other. Nandini was first who was awake she saw that it was almost 7 in clock. She saw Manik he was trying to get up .She moved his hand from her waist and goes to change her dress. Manik also changed himself into jeans and t-shirt with a jacket.

There was an arrangement for all of them.




Mukti :chalo let's play some games

Manik:Ok toh we will have a coconut we just have to place it between our partners and move it towards our lips who will do the task first will be the winner.And twist yeh hai ki you can't touch your hand to a coconut.

Navya: par hum yeh nahi khel payenge

Cabir:ya then we will play something else

Navya: nahi cabir tum log khelo mai yaha baithungi

Aryaman :Ok then I will also sit with you

Manik:So let's choose your partner.Nandini come here

Nandini joined him

Alya was with Dhruv and mukti with cabir

Manik: so let's play

They started to play. All put coconut between them and started to move towards lips .They all were going in very awkward position.

Cabir and mukti got out first them competition was between Manan and Dhruliya

Nandini was trying to hold a coconut near her throut but Manik didn't left a chance so he pulled her more closer holding her waist.They wasn't paying attention what was happening around them. They were lost in each other .

They were interrupted by sound of claps as Dhruliya wins the competition.

Navya: toh hame bahot khushi mahesus ho rahi hai yeh announce karte huye ki Dhruv aur Alya jit gaye hai .

All said good night to each other and goes to sleep .

Manan was walking on beach.holding hands.

Nandini: Manik hum yaha kya kar rahe hai.tumhe muzhe kya dikhana hai

Manik:Aree wait karo.thodasa aur bas.accha chalo aa gaya

Nandini:kya aa gaya?

Manik turned her and she saw very beautiful scenary.


She holded water in her hand . it was pearl she got.she was looking so happy.

Nandini:Manik it looks so beautiful.

Manik:you like it?

Nandini:I loved it

saying this she kissed him softly.

Manik:You know I like beaches .It feels so good when cold sand touches feet.It feels good.

Nandini:Acchha ,I also like it. She made him stop and sit on sand.

Now they were lying on the sand. Nandini was resting her head on his body.

Nandini: Manik we could have won that competition if you...and she stoped

Manik smirked and ask her if you kya Nandini

Nandini looked at him and buried her face in his chest and said kuchh nahi

Manik's hand was on her hair playing with her hair.

After sometime Nandini was feeling sleepy.she fall asleep.

Manik took her in his arms and reached to their room and placed her carefully on bed and slept near her .


Preacap:

Manan romance



Hope guys you will like this part.

Keep liking it


Love ,

sonpri

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Posted: 9 years ago
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So glad you updated!!! Living the story can't wait or the next part!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chotu Sa date
but bohat PyAaARsA Hai yeh update..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome yaar it was lovely waiting eagerly update soon.

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