Manan ff- Trip to your heart. part 29 pg 148 17 may pms later' - Page 99

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing..
Slowly slowly nandini is getting his feelings..
Cont soon
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Hey gal just read ur story n I loved dis new concept. U hve surly penned it very beautifully. Each character is amazing. Loved reading ur story. Pl update soon.tc
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hi awesome update very nicely written love reading your story look forward for next update take care and keep smiling ⭐️
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Awesome update...
Waiting for the truth reveal the mystery soon
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Love the story please update soon please let manan be together they deserve to be
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Beautiful...pls upfte it sooon :)
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I am sure nandini bohat jaldi truth ka pata kar legiii...I wait n watch Mr.manik malhothra 😉
Jealously always work..😆😆
loved manik pov n flashback...
waiting for next
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When I u planning to update the next part
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I am extremely sorry all really really sorry for this late almost two months but I had my board exams so I couldn't concentrate on writting story but now I will update regulary. Promise...

!!!!!! Warning!!!!!
This update consist of intimate scene so if ur not comfortable plz skip.
P.s: intimate scene isn't fully written by me. Its written by my friend Ankita di so whole credit goes to her


Chapter 29
Manik angrily scooped her in his arms bridle style and close his car door this tym she had stop strugling as she knew it was no use. He carry her inside the elevator.

Nandini: Manik put me down plz I can walk
Manik look down at her and sighed then he gently put her down on her feet. Nandini moved far away from him. Manik just glared at her he was still angry at her for dancing with someone so cozily for a momment he had totally forgotten that he was not her bf.

When the lift stopped Nandini angrily marched towards her apartment with Manik in tow. She angrily opened the door and entered inside she was about to slam the door on his face but he was fast. Manik put his foot in between before she could close it he angrily entered inside. Nandini closed the door and turn towards him.
Nandini: WHAT THE HELL IS YOUR PROBLEM
Manik: My problem really he was all over u
Nandini: listen Mr we were just dancing
Manik: dancing han!! Like seriously u guys were practically grinding on each other
Nandini: so y do u care its my life I can do what ever I want u r no one to stop me
Manik came close to her and held her arms tightly making her wince in pain
Manik: oh really so I am no one to u
Nandini(looking in his eyes): yes nobody
Manik moved his face close to her his nose was touching hers.
Manik(whisper): no one
Nandini(softly): no one

Manik dug his face in her hairs breathing her intoxicating smell. He than move his face downwords and kissed her collor bone ohh so softly which made her shudder. He left her arms and held her waist bringing her close to him he kissed her earlobe and then gently bite it making her moan softly.
Nandini: mm.Manik
Manik:shhh

He move towards her jaw all the while trailing his lips on her soft skin. He kissed her jaw her legs felt like jello she held his neck to keep herself steady. Manik kiss the hollow of her neck and Nandini closed her eyes and move her face away to give him better access he sucked her neck and then bite it giving her a hickey while Nandini was a moaning mess. He cupped her face and move towards her lips Nandini's breathing ragged her lips shudder in anticipation waiting for his lips but it never come. She opened her eyes to see Manik smirking looking at her with mischief

Manik (raising his brows): nobody hmm

He smiled and turn away to leave. But Nandini held his arm and made him face her. But next thing shocked him most Nandini fused her lips with him making him shock. After initial shock he to start responding. It was rough and passionate different from first ones. Breathless they pull apart. They joined there forehead breathing in each others scent the effect of alcohol was now gone. After sometime they open there eyes which were full of desire Manik tried to move away but she grip his neck tightly stopping him.
Nandini: Manik y are u doing this
Manik(softly):: doing what
Nandini: first u kiss me nd than u start ignoring me and now u r being so possessive y.<br>
Manik: Nandini
Nandini (cutting him in between): No y can't just accept ur feelings for me
Manik freed himself from her grip and looked away
Manik(stammer): Nandini I- I d-dont feel anything for u

Nandini angrily made him face her.

Nandini : really then look in my eyes and say this
Manik looked in her eyes which were begging him to speak the truth but not giving in depth of passion and emotions he took a deep breath and again focused in her eyes this shouldn't been difficult for him as all his life he was good in hiding his emotions and hurt y not today but damn.. Her eyes are hypnotic compelling person to tell the truth. Her brown eyes can force anyone to just kept starring for infinity.
Not getting any answer from him she just smiled knowing she has got her answer in his silence
Nandini: don't have answer right
She moved more close to her, the tips of her perky breast touching his chest so sensually that for a moment he forget all his rational thoughts.
Nandini (whisper):say something Manik u feel for me and u cant deny that
This seems to broke his trance he blinked multiple time to get rid of the spell she was casting on him. The spell which directly influence his heart causing it beat 1000 beats per minute. He tried to wriggle out of her grip but she wasn't having any of this she tighten her grip more on him. Manik tried to ignore the fact that how her body was intimately pressed against him her lips just few cm away from his her soft breast perfectly molded against his hard chest and lets not get to the low parts which were creating Tsunami inside him

"Damn control yourself Manik" he thought

Manik; Nandini I-I dont feel anything for u
Nandini (murmured): Liar
Manik (gritting his teeth); I am telling the truth damit
Nandini: haaa prove it then
Before he can even blink her lips were on himShe kissed him softly and teasingly his sences were playing havoc inside him. He knew he have to stop her before he loose all control on his sanity As of sensing his moment of hesitation her arms instantly tighten around his neck and once soft kiss was know turned rough she sucked his upper lips harshly and nibbed on it. Manik lost all control on himself and kissed her with same vigour all hesitation and fact flew away at that moment all that matter was her and ONLY HER...

He nibbled on her upper lip and she did the same with his lower lip. His hand slide further down her back and brought her more close. Like trying to absorb her inside him. He broke the kiss and pinned her to the wall roughly attacking her neck sucking and bitting on it making her moan in pain and pleasure she held his shoulder with one hand and other went in his hairs pulling him more closer. He broke away and gazed in her eyes that were filled with passion. He scooped her in his arms never once breaking the eye lock. He walked with her in his arms and reached her room. Manik layed her on the bed delicately and all this while they intensely gazed in each others eyes.The passion that had engulfed both a while ago was increasing with every passing second. It was driving them to climb the estcasy of desires that were buried deep in their hearts. Manik gently brushed his fingers from her forehead to her nose and then to her beautiful lips that were meant to only match his. He brushed his fingers down her throat and then next to the most delicate part of her body. Nandini shivered when he slightly touched there and she gasped with pleasure. She slightly parted her lips to let him know she was burning with desires just as him and was ready to submit herself with all her heart. Manik read her eyes that longed for him and he gently raised Nandini in his arms. He started kissing her face and brushed his lips on her neck. His hands moved to get her shirt off and then threw it away. He couldn&apos;t believe his eyes and only one word escaped from his lips "beautiful " Nandini blushed and clinged to his chest when Manik continued to caress her back. She had cold shivers running through her body and couldn't stop herself from slowly unbutton Manik's shirt. She removed his shirt and laid back on the bed with Manik hovering on her. They kissed wildly and devoured their love in the kiss. Not a for a second they could remain away. When she got breathless, Manik slowly moved down kissing her neck and then her collar bone. Nandini was moaning with pleasure and that got immense satisfaction to his heart. He gently kissed her most sensitive upper part of the body over the fabric. He brushed his nose in her cleavage, making him go wild as her soft supple skin smelled strawberry. Nandini beautifully arched her back and it made Manik lose himself. He unhooked the last piece of fabric that was a hindrance for his lips. He laid Nandini and gazed on her beautiful and full twins. Nandini crossed her arms to hide herself as she was getting concious. He kissed her again and then gently removed her hands to side and then nibbled her earlobe. He kissed the sensitive spot just below the ear that made Nandini moan with pleasure. He whispered sexually "you are the most beautiful woman I have met" and this made her blush. Manik kissed her all the way to her stomach and bite her soft skin. He gave feather kisses there to ease her pain. Nandini pulled him up again and then began to kiss his jawline and while his her hands caressed his strong shoulders. She switched and came on top. She kissed him again and brushed her lips all the way to his well sculpted chest. This made Manik groan and he couldn't take the sweet torture anymore. He came back on top of her and then quickly got rid of his trousers. He became wild on her kissing every inch of her skin. Manik worshiped her with all passion and then came back to kiss her again and then deepened the kiss while his hands caressed her body. He could now feel she was ready for him.He broke the kiss when she dug her nails on his skin making him groan with pain and pleasure. He knew she needs it now. He got rid off the last piece of fabric on their skins. Their skins rubbing against each other and this hightend their desires to be one. He knew he had to be gentle with her and take it slow as it was her first time. They both gazed in each others eyes and Manik got his answer she was ready for him. Manik settled himself and with one stroke entered her making Nandini scream with pain. He let her take her time and she dug her nails in his skin to let her pain out. After a while she finally got hold of it and dug her nails again to let him know she was ready for a ride ahead. Manik started again and kept on as he was not able to get enough of her. He made love to her as she was the only woman he wanted to love this way and make her feel that she belongs to him , only him. The passion and desires for each other let them experience what it is to be one and feel that utmost heavenly pleasure.They were in true sense soulmates and loved each other with all their heart.

End of f/b

Tears pour down from her eyes and soon she start sobbing remembering the most beautiful night of her existence his touches his whispers his kisses everything was still fresh in her memory but then he left her never to come back. She thought this all never meant to him anything but then y he left her.
Wiping her cheeks she again open his diary.

That was the most beautiful night in my life she was there in my arms my heart was fill with her warmth I felt so peace and calm it was so blissful to describe. She was sleeping peacefully but I couldn't. I was wide awake all the night I kept tracing her face and kissing her face I couldnt find that in myself to close my eyes. After all I knew it may b last time I am seeing her.
In morning when she opened her eyes she didnt spoke a word I knew she was feeling shy to say anything and I cant help but smile Nandini murthy was blushing. It was time for me to leave i gave her one last good by kiss my eyes were tearing.
"Good by Nandini"
I felt like someone was stabbing my heart again and again when I uttered those word with one last glance in her direction I left leaving my heart, my soul, my love MY NANDINI
But it was best for her to leave without me.
Most importantly without someone who was a MURDERER a DRUG ADDICT and with a dark past.


PRECAP

Manik rushed inside towards the pool side Aliya was already there. Manik reached near her
Manik;: did u find it
Aliya: no I have looked everywhere it's not here
Maink: what shit


Harshad: Navya where is ahhh
He felt on floor clutching his mouth he looked up to see a furious Manik standing there


Harshad: I DON'T HAVE YOYR DIARY GET THAT
Manik (whisper): Nandini
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Edited by CROCKOMICHI - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally like finally u updated...
Wow awesome update...
Manan were soo beautiful...
Manik is a murderere drug addict how can it be possible...
Nandu was soo shocked tht it meant the same to Manik also...
Can't wait for next update...
Manik is finding his diary...
Luved it...
Update soon...

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