Manan ff- Trip to your heart. part 29 pg 148 17 may pms later'

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Hey guys only some know me in this forum and for the rest I am unknown so let me introduce myself hy i am Noor😊 actually my head is banging with ky2 scinerio and morever this new topic is constantly Getting on my nerves i cant take it out of my head so i am updating a prolouge do tell me how it is if u didnt like it then feel free to tell me.

PROLOUGE

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Early in the morning the sun is rising spreading its lightness all over the world waking up the ppl from there peaceful slumber but its beautiful rays were disturbing two souls which had the beautiful night of there existance the night when they didnt confess there love but it wasnt necessary as there eyes had told them about there feelings but was it important that always a cool breaze is followed by enchanting rain may be no!!

After sometime the girl Opened her preaty eyes holding her head "bcz of hangover" she Held her head and memories of last night flushed infront of her eyes. "The way he held her and kissed her how she tried to resist but ended up surrendering completely to him. How he held her tightly that made her blush. Yes! The girl! Seriously a girl who dosent even smiled properly to someone who always weared her attitude mask was today blushing may b its called feeling of first love felling of your heart bieng slave in someones love. Chucking all the thoughts she looked towards his face who was half laying on her and half on bad his one hand totally wraped around her waist and one leg tangled with her she kept looking at his charming face after sometime he opened his eyes and saw her he remembered everything about last night and then realize their position there was an awarkard silence between them.

Ppl often says that after every dark night there is a shining morning but they forget the natural fact that after every brightest day there is also a dark night.

Next day

With a constant smile which she herself have not wittnessed throughout her life she went to meet him in his apartment she searched him everywhere but to her disappointment he wasnt there she than saw her favourite pink rosses on the table with the letter.

"I AM SORRY FOR LAST NIGHT U KNOW I CANT LIVE WITH U I AM GOING FROM YOUR LIFE FOR FOREVER PLZ PERDON ME WE WILL ALWAYS REMAIN FRIEND AND WHEN EVER I WILL LOOK TOWARDS SKY AND WATCH STARS I WILL REMEMBER YOU MY SHINNING STAR

YOURS AND ONLY YOURS MONSTER"

Those flowers fell from her hand with so much difficulty she trusted someone she trusted him but he. He broke her heart she sat there crying all the while remembering her memories with him after crying alot she wiped her tears no she was not that weak to sit and cry for some jerk and selfish person she was a tough girl She had again converted into a aggresive and ruthless girl but this time more harsh then before.

So y he left her? Will they able to meet again? What will b there destiny?

Guys if i got setifactory comments then only i will continue.

INDEX

PART 1:Page2

PART 2A:Page 3

PART 2B:Page 5

PART 3: Page 7

PART 4: Page 9

PART 5: Page 11

PART 6: Page 14

PART 7: Page 17

PART 8: Page 21

PART 9: Page 26

PART 10a nd b: Page 32

PART 11: Page 37

PART 12: Page 42

PART 13: Page 45

PART 14:Page 49

PART 15: Page 54

PART 16:Page 58

PART 17: Page 63

PART 18: Page 69

PART 19: Page 74

PART 20: Page 77

PART 21: PAGE 83

PART 22: PAGE 87

PART 23:PAGE 93

PART 24 A:PAGE 98

PART 24 B:PAGE 104

PART 25 A: PAGE 110

PART 25 B: PAGE 118

PART 26 A: PAGE 124

PART 26 B: PAGE 130

PART 27 A: PAGE 133

PART 27 B: PAGE 138

PART 28: PAGE 143

PART 29; PAGE 148

Edited by CROCKOMICHI - 9 years ago

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Wow great story pls continue and give the 1st chapter soon

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looks interesting...plz cont soon and pm me

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amazing start and sounds interesting...

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It's indeed a interesting story line. .

Please continue soon.👏

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Tishyy

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hiyas Noor, wow what a nice surprise ... But now whenever u start a new plot do let me knw plzz
Coming back to this story ... Wohoo yeh Kya hua ... Start hi betrayal she niceee ... Very interesting ... Do continue as I am really looking forward to how u take this plot ahead ... And I'm sure this one will also be a super hit like the other ff... Wishing you all the best for ur new plot gal

P.s. As to why he left her ... Hmm let him be at fault if u planning to show that ... Curious I am...

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Chapter:1

A girl was sleeping on her bad just than "splash" she woked up with a jurk she was fully dreanched in water.

Girl: sonia u bitch how dare u

Sonia: what to do nandini time dekha hai its 11 u lazy ass wake up aj b to collage nahi gai.

Nandini: just shut up and get me a cup of coffee my head is spaining.

Sonia: nandini ek sal hogaya hai y cant u just move on from that.

Nandini: phele bat mai use kab ka bhula kar move on kar chuki hun or dosri bat mujhe subha subha tumhara lacture nahi sun na aj just get me a cup of coffee.

Sonia: move on ywah right. Ok u go and take a bath. I will prepare coffee for u my highness.

Nandini: what ever.

She got up from the bad and went to take bath meanwhile sonia went in kitchen to prepare coffee. Sonia was preparing coffe when her phone start beeping.

Sonia:hello

Voice: how is she.

Sonia: again hangover aunty your daughter had lost it.

Naina: when did she came back last night.

Sonia: night subah ko 4 baje ahi hai.

Naina: ok mai london arahi hon.

Sonia: jaldi aye plz ap ki beti mujh se or nahi sambahali gae gi.

Naina cut the call.

Naina: nandini what to do with this girl God she will finish herself huwa kya hai ek sal sai aise wo i had asked her million times but this girl mai use khud ko khatam karnai nahi don gi. Or chae mughe os k liye mujhe kuch b karna parhe.

ON THE OTHER HAND

Nandini came out wearing a red top and shorts.

Sonia: here ur coffee

Nandini: thanks.

Sonia:so any news

Nandini: nothing new i break up with ronit last night.

Sonia: what nandini this is ur 25th break up

Nandini: yeah i know this is my silver jublie thats y i have thrown a party tonight.

Sonia:ronit really like u nandini he is really a nyc bou nandini y do u play with some ones heart.

Nandini:bcz they deserve this only they all are same just used girls for one thing just like m.

Sonia(raising her brow): just like

Nandini: just like my dad.

Sonia: u cant lie to me nandini

Nandini: just shut up sonia last time i am sick and tired speaking on this topic again and again that jurk dosent effect anymore i didnt even care infact i am thankful to him for teaching me a good leason that u should always be selfish so that no one can break u or u u r my cousin and also my best friend kya to Mujhe nahi janti u know na i am not that weak. Plz. I am leaving and thanks for the coffee

SAME NIGHT 10 PM

Naina reached london airport outside the airport a big red mercades was waitting for her driver toke her luggage and kept inside. She then dialed sonia's no

Naina: hy sonia is nandini home. ...What again club... ok msg me the address of the club... yes i will go... i know she hates me but i am also her mother mujhe achi tarike sai pata hai use kaise handle karna ha...by

LONDON CLUB HOUSE.

the club house was totally dark and ppl were dancing and drunking like maniacs forgetting whole world Nandini was also having shots with her friends. Just then Naina enters inside the club and saw her dancing with boys. She saw a

a boy trying to take advantage of her state her blood boiled Naina went towards them and slapped that boy hard on his face.

Naina: dont u dare come close to my daughter.

And without waisting any moment she dragged nandini out of the club not paying any heed to her protests

Nandini: leave me naina where r u taking me

Naina: nandini have u lost it what were u doing overe there

nandini: nothing just having fun pur tum yaha london mai ohhh i got that zarrorr maire step-father ki company ka kam hoga i know.

Naina: mai yaha tumse milne ayi hon.

Nandini: oh mujh se to matlab again u have come to make my life hell ab kya chaiye han.

Naina: nandini u r drunk lets go home we will talk later.

Nandini: ha to kya huwa if i am drunk mari life mari marzi y do u even care hmm.

Naina: nandini lets go. sit

She held her hand and forciely made her sit in car.

NANDINI' RACIDENCE

Naina brought nandini inside the house who was fully passed out her one hand wraped around her shoulder and one around her waist. She brought her in her room and tugged her in bad. She than start carresing her head.

Naina: i am sorry beta sab mari galti hai mai tumhe kabhi pyar dai hi nahi pai na hi tumhare sath kabhi time spend kar pai aj tumhari halat ki zemedar mai hon plz forgive u r mom i love u alot tumhare dad ka batreyal merai liye handle karna mushkil tha but tumhare liye b asan nahi tha or mai unjane mai apni furstration tum par nikalti rahi i am sorry par i love u alot my love mama loves u very much ab mai sab theek kardongi i promise mujhe tumhe is fake duniya sai nikalna hogha uske liye u have to recognize u r self and i know what can help.

She then kissed her forehead and cover her with duvet and went outside.

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Part 1 done do tell me how it is and i have typed it on my mobile so plz ignore mistakes

Edited by CROCKOMICHI - 10 years ago