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Posted: 9 years ago
Very emotional updates
I crying while reading last two parts
Nice story
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next parts
Update soon
take care dear😊
Lots of love,

Sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manan_truelove

Amazing work... I loved ur story... Its fabulous... Seriously...i just came across ur story and read all parts in one gooo...i started reading it when i saw ur pm...

I wonder mene phele kyu nahi read ki yeh but..itssk..nice start loved it...
And the twists... That was the best...good going girl... Continue soon...will be eagerly waiting for ur next updates... Hope u will update soonnn
Lots of love,
Zeenat


Thank u so much... dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Yaar brain tumour...

manik was soo heartbroken...
manbir were awesome...
nandu proposed wow...
Jst hope nandu will be ok...
nice update...
thnx for pm...
update soon..


Thanx... dear.. n keep commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing...
...emotional...
... hope Nandu will be fine soon...
Manik...😭
thank you for PM
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Originally posted by: arshuaar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">amazing...
...emotional...
... hope Nandu will be fine soon...
Manik...😭
thank you for PM</font>


Thanx...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#Tum__hi__ho

Part : 42

Next mrg manik n nandini reaches to hospital

They were sitting in the cabin

Doc. Give report to nandini

Doc. : reports are normal but we have to do the check up

Nandini : k

Doc. : nurse nandini ko le kr jao Main ata hn

Nandini get up

Nandini see manik n manik blink his eye

Nandini go wid nurse

Doc. : manik tumhare khne pr juth toh bol diya but it is wrong

Manik : thank u doc.
Bs ek aur din doc.
Fir aaj rt main khud nandini ko sb bta dunga
Bs ek din

Doc. : k I m coming

Manik thinks doc. Ko bol toh diya hai lekin main nandini ko btane ki himat kaise launga ( manik having tear in his eyes )

Doc. Comes in cabin after checking nandini

Manik : nandini kaisi hai

Doc. : abhi voh toh thik hai but humhai jld se surgery krni padhegi

Manik : kb

Doc. : tomorrow
U fill the form

Manik : okay doc.

Doc. : yeh kuch medicine give her at evening

Manik take the medicine n comes to nandini

Nandini : manik kha tha I m okay
Tum bhi na.. chinta kr rhai thai
Dekho reports r normal ...

Manik : hmm...

Nandini : chle...
Manik

They reaches at manik house

All r waiting fr them

Mukti : tum dono toh super fast nikle
In one day marriage n all

Nandini blushes

All hug manik nandini

Mukti : chlo abhi aur main kl subha honeymoon pr ja rhai
Ab company mil jaegi
Wht say guyz

Nandini : super osm
Kyo manik ( nandini looks at manik )

Manik has no word to say

Cabir : honeymoon pr toh akle jana chiye na mukti aur nandini
Mukti : but nandini aur mujhe ise koe problem nhi

Alai : honeymoon ki bate bad main krna
Abhi jo krna voh kre phle

Mukti : ya right
But yeh glt bt hai shaddhi main guest ko toh bulaya hi nhi

Nandini : I want simple marriage

Mukti : come nandini

mukti navya n nandini going upstair manik also come after them

mukti : manik hum nandini ko ready kr rhai h
tum kha aa rhai ho

mukti calls druv n cabir

druv : kya hua mukti

mukti : manik ki aaj shaddhi ushai ready karo

druv : chl buddy

manik goes wid druv in his room

all girls go to guest room

navya gave her langa to wear nandini go for change

on the other hand manik wear sherwani n standing in front of mirror setting his hair

manik ly on the couch he was completely loss in nandini thoughts n he was like crying
manik phn rangs

it's doc. batiya call

manik : hello

doc. : manik everythings r ready

manik : wht kuch clearly nhi sunae de rha
hello ...

manik comes outside the house

on the other hand

nandini is looking so preety in read langha

mukti : our job is done
nandini ko ready krne ki


navya nandini ki najar utrti hai

everyone laughts at her

mukti : nandini tum yhi wait karo
hum tino abhi ate hai

nandini : k

they go
nandini setting in front of mirror
n blushing n remembering time spend wid manik

nandini thinks mujhe manik se abhi milna hai

she gets up n go to manik room

scene change

doc. : manik i call the specialist for the surgery
tum kl nandini ko le ana

manik : nandini thik toh ho jaegi na

doc . : manik dekho maine tumhai phle bhi kha tha i did not take any granty
body pr depend krta h aur patience ki will power pr

manik : plz doc. nandini ko kuch mt hone dena
plz doc.

doc. : i will try my best

doc. cuts the call

manik can't able to control her self n he bend down n sit with support of tree n he was crying
Cabir comes there n make him stand by holding his shoulder

cabir : manik...

cabir : manik sb thik ho jaega
nandini is strong

manik : i can't cabir
i ..
i can't see her in a pain

manik not stopping crying

cabir hug him try to control him

cabir : everything will be f9

cabir : chl abhi pandit ji aa gae hai

manik comes n sit in mandap

druv cabir n alai mukti n navya also sit with manik

pandit mantr padhne shuru krta hai

scene change

nandini : manik...(calls him but he didn't answer)
lgta hai manik niche chla gya

nandini start moving towards door but her palu get stuck with drawer
n she come there n open the door n she sees her name on file n open the file n read for sometime n her face expression changes her glowing become pale tear start rolling from her eyes to see this n uske hand se file chuth jati hai n she bend down n starting crying NANdini says to herself
"manik why don't u tll me ki mujhe ek aisi bimari hai jise bachpana bhut muskil "

( nandini start remembering incidents when manik scolds him for standing on chair n manik hug her n say i need u nandini n manik drag nandini while dancing n say he want to tll her something n last night incident )
bg song
(Khoyi khoyi si hoon main
Kyun yeh dil ka haal hai
Dhundli saari khwaab hai
Ulja har khayaal hai
Saari kaliyan murja gayi
Rang unke yaadon mein beh gaye
Saare gharaande reet ke
Lehrein aayi, lehron mein beh gayi)

nandini says to herself "manik i want to live wid u
i don't want to die lekin manik main tumhai ek aise rishte main nhi band skti jiska koe future nhi
manik i can't ...
manik mujhe jana hoga "
nandini gets up n start remembering manik memories n tears not stopping from her eyes
she was comepletely in a shock
(Raah mein kal kitni chirag the
Saamne kal phoolon ki bhaag thi
Iss se kahun kaun hai jo sune
Kaante hi kyun maine hai chune
Sapne mere kyun hai kho gaye
Jaage hai kyun dil mein gumm mere
Saare kaliyan murja gayi
Rang unke yaadon mein beh gaye
Saare gharaande reet ke
Lehrein aayi, lehron mein beh gayi

Na na na...)

nandini take out her ring n put it on the table
n say" i m sorry manik...
i know u will never forgive me for this but main chain se mr toh paungi ki tum thik ho
main tumhai apne sth til.. til.. mrta hua nhi dekh skti...
i m sorry manik "
she was crying very bady n she cover herself with blanket n left the room n come outside n sit in car n ask the driver to take her to railway station

(Kya kahun kyun yeh dil udaas hai
Ab koi door hai na paas hai
Choo le jo dil woh baatein ab kahan
Woh din kahan raatein ab kahan
Jo bhi dhakhal hai ab khawab sa
Ab dil mera hai betaab sa
Saari kaliyan murja gayi
Rang unke yaadon mein beh gaye
Saare gharaande reet ke
Lehrein aayi, lehron mein beh gayi, beh gaye)

pandit says" kanya ko bolao"

mukti n navya n alai goes upstair
they enters in the room

mukti : nandini..
nandini...

navya also calling her

Mukti : navya main washroom mein check krti hn..

mukti knocks the door of washroom

navya : nandini khi nhi mil rhi hi..

mukti : nandini kha chli gye

alai comes down

alai : guyz nandini pta nhi kha chli gye

manik gets up in a shock

manik gets up n say

manik : wht ??

manik rans to his room all run after him manik enters in the room calling her name n see that reports file is lying on floor

manik take the report n stand still n all comes there mukti pull manik hand takes the report

mukti : manik kya hua
aur yeh kya hai

she was also shock to see this

navya : mukti kya hai

mukti give him

navya : yeh nhi ho skta
nandini...

all see that

manik : i have to go

manik ran outside

cabir : manik...
ruk toh

all run after manik..
Tum__hi__ho

Part : 43



manik sits in car n fab 4 n navya also sits in other car
scene changes nandini reaches to railway station n take the tickets n sit on the bench n still crying
bg song
(Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile.. jaa mile..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..)

manik sitting in car remembering nandini n he is also crying very badly

bg song

(Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan)

they both remembering eachother n nandini sits in train

bg music lyrics
(Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani.. )

manik reaches to railway station n start finding nandini
n nandini sitting in train n crying

bg music lyrics
( Jannatein agar yahin
Tu dikhe kyon nahin
Chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
Intezar tera sadiyon se kar raha
Pyaasi baithi hai kab se yahaan

Humari adhoori kahaani
Humari adhoori kahaani..)

manik sees nandini n nandini too see him
manik start coming toward nandini n both are crying

bg music lyrics
( Pyaas ka ye safar khatam ho jayega
Kuch adhura sa jo tha poora ho jayega

Jhuk gaya aasmaan
Mill gaye do jahaan
Har taraf hai milan ka samaa
Doliya hain saji, khushbuein har kahin
Padhne aaya Khuda khud yahaan..)

manik reaches to nandini n holds the window n nandini also hold it n both touches their head (nandini setting in train n manik is outside the train )n start crying

bg music lyrics
( Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani..)

manik : nandini why r u going
nandini main hn na tumhre sth
main tumhai kuch nhi hone dunga
nandini tumhne hi toh kha tha if we r together we will handle any problem
nandini without u i will die plz nandini don't go plz plz
don't go plz don't go
nandini plz...
nandini ...

manik crys
nandini gets up n run towards the door n both see each other n tears continuously falling from their eyes
( Pyaas ka ye safar khatam ho jayega
Kuch adhura sa jo tha poora ho jayega

Jhuk gaya aasmaan
Mill gaye do jahaan
Har taraf hai milan ka samaa
Doliya hain saji, khushbuein har kahin
Padhne aaya Khuda khud yahaan..)

they slowly comes to each other n hug eachother very tightly n both cry in eachother arm both having Pain manik having fear of loosing her n nandini having pain of thinking how she can see him like this daily dyeing a bit by bit with her

bg music lyrics
( Humari adhoori kahaani
Humari adhoori kahaani..
Humari adhoori kahaani
Humari adhoori kahaani.. )

they broke the hug

nandini : manik mujhe jane do
plz
maim tumhai apna sth mrta.. hua nhi dekh skti
jis rishte main dukh ho ush rishte main tumhai nhi band skti ...

manik : mujhe voh sare dukh manjor hai but with u
agr tum na hoe toh voh kushiyan manjur bhi manjor nhi hai

nandini bends down n start crying than manik also bends down n take her in his arm n hold her tightly that he want to safe in his arm forever

nandini(screams) : i don't want to die manik..

manik : nandini plz don't say that
tumhai kuch nhi hoga
main tumhai kuch nhi hone dunga(manik says again kissing on her face)

manik : nandini get up (manik says by making her stand up by holding her arm )

they both get up manik wipes her tear

manik : abhi ke liye sb bhul jao bs yeh socho ki we r together

nandini says nthng

manik hold nandini hand
n say come wid me but nandini don't move she was lost in her thought

manik hold nandini face

manik : nandini look at me
nandini tumhai kuch nhi hoga trust me sb thik ho jaega

nandini again start crying

nandini : manik yeh sb kya hogya
maine kya socha tha aur kya hogya
manik main yeh kabhi nhi chati thi
kabhi nhi

manik hold nandini in his arm try to console her

manik : nandini u have to be strong
tabhi tum thik ho paungi nandini aur main hn na tumhare sth always
so u don't worry

they both come out from the station

manik calls cabir inform that nandini mil gye hai aur hum ghr aa rhai

manik n nandini reaches at home

everybody comes n hug nandini

mukti : how r u nandini

nandini nods

navya : nandini tumhai kuch nhi hoga

cabir : nandini come sit

nandini sit on the couch
everybody try to console her but nandini says nthng n her tear r not stop falling

manik come n hold nandini hand

manik : chlo nandini

nandini looks at him

manik : aaj humhari shaddhi bhul gye tum nandini

nandini didn't getup

manik : get up nandini
k u r not going than don't blamr me for this

By saying this he take nandini in his arm n they reaches to mandap n he put her down n make her sit

nandini : mujhe yeh shaddhi nhi krni
manik i can't be selfish
i don't want u to come with me in the hell
(Says while crying )

manik : nandini
i want to come with everywhere
tum khi bhi jao fir chahe voh hell kyo na ho

mukti : nandini u don't worry tum thik ho jaungi hum sb hai na

nandini not stopping crying not because of her fear of dying but because seeing him her life manik.. who has to suffer with her

manik : nandini stop crying mere liye plz
just forget everything for now

manik suckes her tear than gently kiss on both eyes

cabir to pandit : aap mantr shuru karo

manik look at nandini n smile
nandini also give lit bit smile

pandit ji start the mantr

all r sitting siliently

pandit : fero ke liye khadhe ho jae..

manik gets up but nandini didn't as she was fully lost

manik : nandini...

manik hold nandini shoulder help her to stand up

manik hold nandini hand start taking round n than nandini come forward nandini can't able to walk she looking so restless
manik take her in his arm completed the remaining vows they both looking into eachother eyes

manik put nandini down

manik puts magalsutr on her neck

n putting sindoor but nandini fall in manik arm

manik :( shouts by holding her cheek )nandini nandini
open yr eyes
nandini...
bg music lyrics

( Humari adhoori kahaani
Humari adhoori kahaani..
Humari adhoori kahaani
Humari adhoori kahaani..)

So here is next part... keep doing comment


Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous
Plz yaar manan ko alag mat karma
Stay blessed
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nandini can't leave manik n go please don't separate them
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Posted: 9 years ago
emotional update
finally they completed
their marriage
pls jaldi nandu ko theek kardena
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Damn emotional update yr . So much pain ... I can't see manan in pain.. plz Sab thik kardo ...
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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