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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey mehak
Thanks dear for the pm
Yaar update was so emotional
Don't know why but all forum writers are making me cry like hell ...
What have you planned for Manan i don't know but if anything happens to nandu na I'll not read further becoZ I'll say the reason in your pm
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the pm. EMOTIONAL update. I was literally crying. Nandini got to know and she was leaving Manik. Thank god Manik found her in time. Finally they are married but what happened to Nandini suddenly. I hope she will be fine soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
very emotnl...
update d nxt part soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ab kya hua???
nandu can't leave manik usko samaj q nai aa rha h ki wo uski lyf h???
Aur ha agar ye nandu ka plan h 2 leave manik den mein bta de rhi hu it ll nt work bcoz manik nandu ko ek sec b nai chodega...
Update soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for late response
It was really awesome and too emotional
Thanks for PM
Cont.soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Emotional update
But finally manan are married
At list they are together
Keep writing
Next part update soon
take care dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update dea...
emotional too
continue soonnn
tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update!!!
loved it soo much...
hoo..noo...nandu gets 2 know abt truth...
she left d marriage...
she don't want manik 2 suffer 4rm dis marriage...
finally manik found nandini...
aftr alot...finally marriage happens...
hoo nooo...nandini fainted...
excited 4r d nxt part...
cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tum hi ho

Part : 44

Manik reaches to hospital screaming her name
he calls the doc.
Doc. Comes

Manik put nandini n hold her hand

Manik : doc. Nandini achank se bhehosh ho gye

Doc. : inhe toh bhut high fever hai
We have control his fever tabhi kl surgery ho paegi

Doc. Comes to ward with nandini manik also coming inside

Doc. : aap andr nhi aa skte

Manik leaves nandini hand n sit on the bench n start crying
Mukti sit with her n try to console him

Navya also crying sitting cabir comes to her
Cabir : navya nandini thik ho jaegi
Agr tum raogi toh
Nandini ko kon sambhale

Navya put her head on his shoulder

Abhi comes n mukti tll everything to abhi

Doc. Comes out

Manik gets up n ask

Manik : nandini thik toh hai

Doc. : ya she is f9 aur unhai hosh bhi aa gya but pain hai

Manik : main ushai mil shkta hn

Doc. : ya sure fir toh operation ke do din milna aloud hota hai but only one person

Manik : thank u doc.

Manik goes inside

Nandini face towards another side n manik stand on other side
Manik hold nandini hand ( nandini have relief she close her eyes )

Manik ; nandini..
( nandini don't want to show her face becoz she is crying in a pain n he don't want manik to see her in a pain )

Manik : nandini look at me
Nandini I know u r not k

Manik slowly move her face with his hand n nandini open her eyes n see manik n manik having tear in his eyes n nandini too having tear

Manik : nandini I want to complete our marriage here only
(Clearing her tear )

Manik get up n take sindoor case from his pocket

both r looking into eachother eyes

manik put sindoor on nandini forhead after that nandini hold his hand n touch with her face n crys n manik moves other hand on her head

bg music
(Hai dil ye mera
Mujhe hardum ye poochta:
Kyun hai mujhe tujhse itni wafaa..

Kyun teri hasrat
Hai har khwahish se badhkar mujhe
Kyun naam tera hi leti zubaan..)

than manik hold her face n touch with his face n nandini hold manik hand n both having tear in eyes

bg music
(Saathi tera bann jaaun"
Kyun hai yeh junoon!
Har aansun tera pee jaaun
Or de du sukoon
Har din tujhko chaahun
Teri raah takun
Apni baahon mein tujhko
Main salamat rakhun)

nurse come inside

nurse : inhe injection dena hai need ka

nurse giving the injection to nandini n nandini hold manik hand n nurse go
n after sometime nandini sleep
n manik seeing her

doc. comes inside

doc. : manik u go outside nurse hai na yha

manik leaves nandini hand n come outside

navya n cabir sleeping on bench n druv n alai gone home
abhi n mukti r setting

abhi : nandini kaisi hai

manik : thik hai
pr voh tut chuki hai

manik : tum dono jao ghr tumhai kl honeymoon pr bhi toh jana hai

mukti : manik tu kaisi bate kr rha hai
humhne honeymoon cancel kr diya hum charo sth jaenge as a pln jb nandini thik ho jaegi tb

manik : k but atleast abhi toh
kl ajana
main yha hn aur fir cabir bhi toh hai

abhi : okay kl ate
u take

mukti n abhi hug manik n go

manik sit on bench n sleep after sometime
next mrng

manik gets up n cabir brings coffee for manik
manik : i don't want it

cabir : manik..
tune kl rt se kuch nhi khaya
isse pile
nandini ke liye

manik take a sip

cabir : doc. bol rhai thai ki surgery kuch dr main shuru hoegi
i hope sb thik ho

manik : hmm...

doc. nandini ko bhr lekr ata hai
bhehosh hoti hai
manik sees hr n ran towards her

n manik hold her hand n start coming with her n they enter to ICU n manik leaves nandini hand slowly

operation has started
manik is taking round of icu

all looking so serious

cabir goes to manik
cabir : manik relax
come sit

manik sits n again afer sometime gets up start walking

after 5 hours doc. comes out

manik runs to doc.

manik : nandini kaisi hai doc.

doc. : ya she is f9

manik : kya main nandini say mil skta hn

doc. : abhi nhi
after sometime
abhi kuch test krne hai uske
jb thodhi recovery hogi tb we will shift her in ward n than u can meet her

after sometime doc. shift nandini to ward n manik comes inside the ward

manik sit beside nandini n nandini get awake n she open her eyes

nandini feels the pain at wound n nandini can't able to shout also n she holds manik hand tighly n from other hand holds bed sheet

manik : nandini.. kya hua

nandini try to speak : ma..
ma..

manik shouts doc. n nurse come n increase the dose of painkiller

manik : kya hua hai nandini ko

nurse : dekhiye aap preshan mt ho bs pain hua tha

nandini feels relax n nurse give him sip of water but nandini throw the glass
nurse again fill the water in glass

manik : give me the water

nurse give water to manik

manik looks into nandini eyes n nandini also look into his eyes n than manik nandini ko pani pila deta hai

nurse clear his face n do bp checkup

nurse : nandini how r u feeling now

nandini say nthng n lying on the bed closing her eyes

manik : yeh kuch bol kyo nhi rhi h

nurse : this normal
she is confused n shock also to see
it will take time to recover
n to be normal
ab u go out meeting time is finish

manik try to go out but nandini don't leave his hand

nurse : nandini
i have to do personal talk to u
leave his hand

nandini leaves manik hand n manik comes out

cabir : nandini kaisi hai ab

manik : she was behaving so weired

mukti : manik brain surgery hoe hai
time toh lgega na normal hone main n manik u go home
n be fresh aur hum sb yha hai na

manik : okay

at night time

manik cabir n navya r setting outside n some sound came from the nandini ward

manik ran inside n cabir n navya also

manik enters in the ward

manik : nandini..

nandini is crying n not taking the injection

cabir n navya stands at corner of door n manik comes her try to control her by holding her

manik : nandini calm down

nandini : i don't want this injection
bhut pain hota hai

manik : injection nhi lgvaungi toh thik kaise hogi

nandini : no

manik : hold my hand n dekhna koe pain nhi hoga
mere liye lgava lo injection plz

manik holds his hand n nurse injection lgati hai

manik : dekho lg bhi gya
now u ok

nandini nods yes

after some nandini sleep n manik kiss on her hand manik came out n sit on bench n remembering nandini pain n tear comes out from eyes

cabir came n sit with her n put his hand on his shoulder

cabir : dekhna nandini bhut jldi recover karegi

manik : mujhe uska pain nhi dekha ja rha

cabir : manik she will be f9

next day

mukti navya alai druv cabir abhi comes to nandini wid flowers n choclate n greetings

nandini lying on bed closing her eyes n manik setting with her

nurse : dekho nandini tumshe kon milne ae hai
tumhre friends

nandini opens her eyes n see them

mukti : hello nandini

alai : kaisi ho

nandini smiles lit bit

abhi : tum jldi se thik ho jao fir humrha honey bhi toh pending hai

navya : nandini tumhai pta tum thik ho jaungi na tabh hum humhai pasta bana sikhna
tumhare wala

aise all talk to nandini fr half n hour n nandini can't able to speak properly so she didn't speak

nurse : chlo sb bhr jao
ab nandini thodha aram kregi

everybody goes out except manik becoz nandini not leaving his hand

nurse : koe bt nhi manik tum iske sth bhete rhao
vaise she feel comfortable with u

manik : nandini chlo close yr eyes
(manik close her eyes with hand n nandini sleep)

part : 45

after 4 days

nandini is better n all tumor is removed n talking also but less but sometimes lots of pain occur suddenly
today nandini is will be discharged from the hospital n one full time nurse n care taker also come wid her
n her physical tharipies r to be started from tomorrow becoz nandini can't able to move properly

manik is setting with nandini

nandini : manik i m so excited today i m going to home after so many days n sb kha hai

manik : they r decorating the house for u

nandini smiles

manik holding her hand

manik : tum thik toh ho na

nandini : manik abhi i m better becoz of u only

doc. comes n give the clear instructor about nandini that her mood changes quickly n somewhile she start behaving like a baby also her irritation increases n recovery will be slow or fast so don't worry about that aur nandini ko bhut care ki jarurat hai n for 2 - 3 month she will never left alone in the house n head ka pain toh 3 year tk nhi jata

doc. : i will come every week for checkup

manik : nandini normal toh ho jaegi na

doc. : ya jaise recovery hogi she will become normal
normal lifestyle main 1 year lgta hai

nandini comes to home everbody welcome her
n C.T. change nandini cloth n everybody comes n talk to nandini n she is sitting with the support of pillow
n inlast everybody goes to home

night time

nandini is not taking the food from CT

manik : nandini khana nhi khogi toh thik kaise hogi

manik takes the food n start feeding nandini

manik : common take it

nandini : no manik yeh bhut ganda hai

manik eat it n say

manik : dekho maine bhi liye kuch ganda nhi hai

than take it n than make faces

nandini : manik how do u eat it
it is so yaky

manik : jb meri doll yeh kha skti hai toh why don't me

like this manik feed nandini

manik : chlo now u sleep

manik ly her down on bed n covers with blanket n sleep with her while holding her hand

at late nite
Ct n nurse is outside

nandini start screaming in pain
manik gets up

manik : nandini wht happen

nandini : ma.. ma..
manik
(holding her head )

manik shouts nurse

nurse come inside

nurse : kya hua

manik : dekh nhi rhi she is having pain

nurse give him pain killer
but nandini pain not go

nurse : it will take time to get relief from pain

nandini : aa..
manik plz mujhe bachalo

manik hold her face n say kuch nhi hoga tumhai
abhi chla jaega pain

manik start singing the song
holding her hand

Hmm.. hmm...

nandini holding her head n screming manik puts her hand down
(Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum
Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena)

now nandini start looking in manik eyes forget her pain n lost in manik music
(Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum)

manik ly down nandini n cover her with blanket

(Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum
O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum)

manik sits down n nandini holds manik hand n sleep
(Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum)

manik kiss on her forehead n on hand n sleep down only

(hmm...
hmm...)

next mrning

nandini get up nurse checks her bp n CT fresh an up her

than CT doing her comb but she is having pain than maink hold comb n come n start doing her comb so slowly n carefully n
than physical therapist came n dowing her exercises

bg song
( Pal, do pal, ki hi kyun hai zindagi
Iss, pyar, ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi
Toh khuda se maang lun
Mohalat main ik nayi
Rehna hai bas yahaan
Ab door tujhse jaana nahi
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai)

next mrng

physical therapist helps her in walking but he can't able to move n see manik. Manik is worring than she see manik n she smiles n again try to walk n manik also hold her

( Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri
Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili
Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan
Inme hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri
Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai)

like this way 6 month passed away manik doing her comb daily n fb 5 n navya talking to her n manik helps nandini in doing every work from small to big n she having pain n he controlling her
bg lyrics
(Teri dhadkano se hai zindagi meri
Khwahishein teri ab duaaein meri
Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye
Teri meri jaan jo ek hui
Lotunga yahaan tere paas main haan
Waada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai )

inlast they hug eachother n sleep in each other arms

(hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai...)

nandini gets up n standing at window n looking down n remembering all movements
manik comes n hold her back n put her face on her shoulder
n kisses on her chicks

manik : happy birthday my doll

nandini turn around n kiss on manik chicks n say thank u so much n go n sit on bed

nandini : manik aaj main yha tumhre sath hn sirf tumhri vjha se i know manik jinta pain mujhe hua hai ushe khi jada taklif tumhai hua hai in seeing my pain

manik bends down on her knees in front of nandini n hold her both hand

manik : nandini jo beet gya forgot that
look after
that happiness waiting for us

nandini smiles n hug him tightly n manik also hold her tightly

manik break the hug n gets up

manik : u go n take bath n u know aaj doc. se appointment li hue hai

nandini : hmm...

nandini get's up n take the bath
n come outside n manik look at her N she looking tense n he start searching something in cuboard n bed ke niche

nandini : kya kr rhai ho

manik : nandini...
something is missing

nandini : kya

manik : yr smile

nandini smiles n manik drag nandini in front of mirror

manik : dekho i find it
nandini..
dekho u r looking so beautiful wid smile

manik touch her fimger from bottom of arm n come upto her shoulder n nandini close her eyes

manik : nandini...
now no need to take tension
anymore
always keep smiling Becoz its hurt to see u like this in stress

nandini turns

nandini : i m happy n i m having no stress now
n tum jo mere sth toh mujhe kisi bt ka koe tension nhi h
(put hand on his face )

manik hug her very tightly

manik : i love u

nandini smiles n say : i love u so much

So here is next part... Hope u all likes n thank u all my lovely reader n keep supporting my both stories... Thank u so much guyz...
Keep smiling
LOVE MEHAK
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey dear "Tum hi ho" is yr story.i didn't knew it.
bt you don't need to pm me this story because I already read
your this story from fb.i really like this story.
it's so beautiful.trust me you are awesome writer.
please pm me your other story.
ok
tnx...

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