MANAN FF- IT HURTS ALOT...(chp12A-pg147 / link to thread 2-pg 152) - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
cont soon
try to give more manan scenes with full of the emotions and their romantic moments
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks A lot u updated this for us
We will wait for long wala part

Update was emotional
Loved it
I know Nandini ne kuch nai kia just misunderstandings hon gi
But clear them soon
Or 4 years pehle howa kiya??
Jaldi jaldi tell

Best of luck for exams
Stay blessed
Love
Dua...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
lived manik's confession of him being lonely...he is incomplete without nandu...heart touching...
want to hear nandu's side of the story...
can't wait to see what happens next and what the new plans are...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
it's really very nice. But when are u going to revel the truth.

i m very angry after so many days u update and that such a small.

Please yar at least u to don't do this.

Edited by Sony.K - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Wen r u gng to revael there past wat happend in past that manik is sayng that nandini betrayed him I can't believe this manik is sayng this
All believed that nandini is at fault but cabir doesn't
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really amazing story..
Amazing concept..
I read all parts in one go..
Beauriful.
Loved bold nandu..
Eager to know the past..what happened that night..
Cont soon..
Love..mini.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read last two parts in a go!
Amazing update!
Drunk manik is such a cutie
loved manan moments n their talk in cab!
Jaldi past reveal karo
waiting impatiently
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update was very good but savhi mein chotu tha plzz next time na bahut saarraaa update karna bada wala ok and jaldi karna
ALL THE BEST for ur exams
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. .
Manik ki halat deki nahi jati.
He suffered a lot. Can't wait to read more.
Please update soon.
Thanks
God bless you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Guyz thanks for ur wishes for my tests... Actually mein toh padhai mein na bohot hi badi waali nalaayak hu.. U knw meri aur studies ka to 36 ka aakda hain.. Especially yeh account subject it sucks..!!! Chii..!! I hate it... N monday ko accounts ki test..padhai ka bilkul vi mood nahi hain aur momma vi apne frnds k saath shopping gayi hain so thought to give some updates.. Ek baari mumma wapas aagayi toh phirse padhai.. Agar if she sees me on phn to unka fav dialogue suru" nahi padhai toh kar hi mat..tera yeh mobile hi tujhe paas karwaaeyga.."lol...
So let me start b4 my mummy catches me.. N yaa abt past revealation toh woh main 9th chapter main karungi...
Enjoy reading;

Chapter-6(D)
Nandini n manik started to move towards the villa. Manik was not able to walk proprly.. Woh kavi idhar kabi udhar ...
Nandu: Tum dhang se nahi chal saktey kya..??
Manik: Woh m trying par mera legs khudhi idhar udhar ho raha hain toh main kya karu..?? he said like a crying baby..
Nandu: Okay...!!!
Manik: Ek kaam karo na y don't u give me ur hand.. I will hold it toh main nahi girungaa..!!
Nandu thought" haath toh tumney hi choda thaa manik.."
Nandu : Thik hain..!! .. Saying this nandini forwarded her hands to manik.. He hold it n also he wrapped his other hand around her shoulder for more support..
They both entered the villa.. Nandu led manik to his room first..
They entered in his room..
Nandu: Chalo ab so jaao...
Manik: Arrey aisey kaise so jaao.. Soney se pehle na mujhe bohot saarey kaam karne padte hain..
Nandu: Acha..?? Jaise..??
Manik: Jaisey ki mujhe na apne teeth ko brushy karna padta hain aur feets vi dhoney padte hain.. Gandey per soney se na raat ko daraoney sapne aatey hain.. They r so scary..!! Aur haan phir mujhe dress vi toh change karna padta hain.. Aise todi na sotey hain... !!! He said all this in babyish tone..
Nandu: Accha will give u 5 mins jo karna hain jaldi karo.. Uskey baad mujhe vi sooney jaana hain..
Manik: Okay.. He nodded quietly..
Manik came out of washroom after doing all the things...
Nandu: Chalo ab chup chaap so jaao..
He made him lie down on his bed n cover him wid blanket.. She turnef around to leave..when suddenly manik called her..
Manik: Nandini..!!
N: hmmm.. Bolo
M: Tum plz thodi der yehi ruko na mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai..!! Plz..!! He said in full pleading tone..
" Yeh kaha phas gayi main..Ab kya karu..?? " She said under her breathe..
Nandu: Thik hain i will help u to sleep.. Saying this she sat on his bed... As soon as she sit manik placed his head on her lap.. Firstly she was taken aback.. Bt later she slowly started to ruffle hi hair..
N: Chalo now close ur eyes.. He closed...
Nandu started to sing...

Choti choti baatein yuhi aatey jaatey
Yaadein sehlaakey jaati hain..( she was remembering their first hug, kiss,confession)
Raaton ko siraaheney baasi muskaaney
Mujhko rulaake jati hain..( she remembered how they used to spent the time together laugh together)
Milna nahi hain mukin,
Itna bataao lekin
Hum phir miley kyun hain( she was remembering how they met once again yesterday)
Tujhko bhula na paaye
Tujhko bhula na paaye
Ye sisiley kyun hain...1
Sab kuch wahi hain
Par kuch kami hain
Teri aahatein nahi hain...
She completed the song.. Manik was sleeping..
She adjusted his head on pillow n got up frm the bed she was abt to leave bt turned around n saw manik has uncover the blanket.. She once again covered him n peck on his forehead.. She didn't knw ki y she pecked him.. Sayad still she cares for him..
Nandu came out of the room.. She found cabir out the door..
N: Woh manik was drunk n i brought him home so issiliye i was in his room..!!!
C: Its alright.. N thanx for doing all this.. Jo kuch vi hua uskey bawajood u helped him.. Thanx alot.
N: Its okay.. Waisy vi manim k jagah koi aur vi hota toh i would hv done the same.. She was abt to leave..
Bt cabir called her..
C: Nandu.. M sorry..

Precap: Cabini talk n a new mrng..

Done...!! Toh kaisa laga do cmmnt aur ab nxt updates Wednesday k baad hi milegi coz hv to study u knw na.. Waisey hi 60%se jaada marks aatey toh nahi aur iss bar usey vi kam aaye toh mumma ka jordar daat.. Plz cmmnt zada karna n wish me luck guyz..

Signing off by MYRAH..
Loads of luv...


Edited by myruh - 9 years ago

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