MANAN FF- IT HURTS ALOT...(chp12A-pg147 / link to thread 2-pg 152)

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

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Posted: 10 years ago

It Hurts Alot ...

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So guyz banner kaisaa laga plz bataadenaa .. Let me n pari knw...)

Prologue...
Story has taken 4 yrs leap... Fab 5 has been famous all over da world.. Ever music compamy dies to work wid them ... They symbolize a grt a bond of frndship.. But bahar se jo dikhta hain jaruri nahi ki waisaa hi hoo.. Fav5 aaj saath honey k baad v unme bohot duriyaa hain.. Dhrulya r still trying to sort out their luv life, mukti has still not overcome avi n cavya had a daughter named pari.. Navya has become a famous folk singer... But wat abt manan???
Manan aaj ek saath nahi hain... Ek raat ne unki puri life badaldi... Some days after aryamans party they had a breakup due to our very own nyo... Kal subah hotey hi fab 5 went to us for their album... Nandu didn't got time to sort out the problem.. After5 months they return back to mumbai.. Par tab tak nandu mumbai se dur jaa chuko thi...
Wat happens next?? Kta yeh dooriyaan hi unki future hain ya destiny has any other plans for them.. Kya hua uss raat??? Will their love survive... To know stay tuned...

Dats it hope u guyz liked my concept ... Kaisa lagaa do comment.. N support my ff... Will update the chapters soon... My colz life has just been started so won't be able to update the parts soon but i promise will update a new chapter every saturday or monday...

INDEX

Ch1-pg2
Ch2-pg4
Ch3-pg7
Ch4-pg10
Ch5 A-pg16,B-pg19
Ch6 A-pg21,B-25,C-27,D-30,E-32
Ch7 A-pg35,B-39
Chp8- pg43
Ch9 A-pg47,B-56,C-70
Ch10(A,B,C,D)-pg78

Chp11 A-103,B-127

Edited by _Myrah_ - 9 years ago

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sharon.babu

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Posted: 10 years ago

interesting prologue...

can't wait to hear more about it...

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry for being late bt there's some kind of technical problem guyz ... Sorry once again...

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

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Posted: 10 years ago

PROMO:

Cabir: Manik sayad tujhe uss din Nandini ko ek baari apni baat explain karney ka mauka dena chaahiye tha..

Manik: Seriously Cabir.. Sab kuch toh clearly aankhon k saamney tha .. Issme woh kya explain karti... Sach toh sab ko dikh raha tha...

Cabir: Yeh tujhey v pata hamari nandu aisi nahi thi

Manik: Exactly cabir Nandini aisi nahi thi par ab ho gayi hain... Ya sayad peheli se thi hum bas samajh nahi paaye..

Cabir: Do u know wat Manik ... Nandini is a pure soul n i trust her..

Manik: Oh plz Cabir stop all this.. Aur hum uss ke baarey me kyun baat kar rahe hain... Lets change the topic...

Hua kya thaa uss raat??? Kyun manik nandini se nafrat karne laaga?? Will soon reveal?? Will their destiny bring them together once again?? Stay tuned to know more... Will update the first chapter till tonight...

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Divzonly
Awesome promo continue soon

Thanks for showing in my story... Buddy me for pm

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Filmyarchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very interesting..please continue soon :))

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyakna
Very interesting..please continue soon :))

Thanks alot for appreciating my story.. I will try my best. N i will surely update till tmrw morimg..

Buddy me for pm..

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVYA64
nice concept
nice promo
cont soon

Thanx.

M dying to update n let u guyz knw abt the story.. But wat to do.. Lack of time due to new session.

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 1:

With the change in time, everything has changed...every relation have changed..

FAB5 BUNGLOW:

Every member of fab5 were sitting in the living area except our very own Manik Malhotra..

Alya: Guyz yeh Manik ab tak kyun nahi aaya hain. Hamari baat hui thi that we all will meet at 10am in bunglow to discuss abt out new project of Delhi..

Mukti: Tu toh aisey baat kar rahi hain jaisey ki woh hamesha time par aata hain.. I don't believe ki itna sab kuch honey ke baad v he is still not over that creep grl..

Cabir: Watch ur words mukti..

Mukti: I don't believe it yaar cabir.. Jab sab kuch aakhon k saamney hi thaa toh y r u not able to digest the truth..

Dhruv: Plz guyz lets not start this topic once again. Warna u know khaamakha hamari ladaai ho jaayegi.

Cabir: Actually tu sahi keh raha hain Dhruv.. N tum sab yehi wait karo main Manik ko lekar aata hu.. ( He left from there)

Malhotra Mansion:

Cabir enters the house n ask the servant abt Manik..

Servant: Manik baba toh apne kamre me hain..

Cabir: Thik hain...

Cabir went towards Manik room n when he open the door he found one of the saddest scene.. The room was really dark n in a big mess.. All the stuffs were scattered on the floor.. N Manik was sitting in the corner of room shedding some drops of tear.. Cabir rush towards Manik n put his hand on manik's shoulder..Manik notice him n immediately wipes his tears..

Cabir: Tujhe mujshe apni aasu aur dard chupaa ney ki koi jaroorat nahi hain..Main jaanta hu Manik tu kitna dard main hain...

Manik: Main koi dard main nahi hu its just i was tensed regarding our new project... Thats it..

Cabir: Ab tu mujhse v jhoot bolegaa.. Main jaanta hu tu aaj v Nandini ko utna hi pyaar karta hain manik just accept the truth... Manik tu aisaa mat kar kyun do dil ko hurt kar raha hain.. Jaa manik dhudh ussey..

Manik: Stop it cabir... Tujhey kya lagtaa hain cabir itna sab kuch honey k baad main ussey dundunga... In her dreams bro..

Cabir: Tujhe sayad uss raat usse apni baat xlpain karney ka ek mauka dena chaahiye tha Manik..

Manik: Sab kuch aankhon k saamney tha cabir. Iss mey wo kya explain karti cabir..

Cabir: Manik ye tu v jaamta hain hamari Nandu aisi nahi thi..

Manik:Exactly cabir wo aisey nahi thi par ab ho chuki hain.. Yaa sayad aisi hi thi bass ham kavi ussey samajh nahi paaye..

Cabir: Do u know wat Manik she is a pure soul n i still trust her...

Manik: watever.. N hum usske baare main kyun baat kar rahe hai.. Let's change the topic..

Cabir: So wats abt the new project??

Manik: I have talked to the owner n we r doing it.. Ham do ghante mein delhi k liye nikal rahe hain.. N ya were r going roadways.. So get ready to hv fun...

PRECAP: Nandini' s entry...

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Sorry for being late... Bt i didn't have time... Sorry sorry itna time lene k baad bi chotu saa update... Bt promise next time lambaa hoga..

Hope u guyz liked it.. Kaisa laga do comment n yaa for pm buddy me guyz..