MANAN FF- IT HURTS ALOT...(chp12A-pg147 / link to thread 2-pg 152) - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago
AWWWmanik is so cute phone part was best yr like really phone ki aatma ko shantii nd then phone kha gaya lol
Romantic dance stupid manager kissmisss kara diya
Lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very good update, loved Manik drunk and ahh MaNan scenes were too intense and cute, please update soon!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
nyc update drunk manik ko nandu ke sath ishq wala love karna tha
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing...
sweet romance of Manan
Drunk Manik...
... Manik want ishq wala love... with Nandu 😆
beautifully penned... loved it

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Posted: 9 years ago
When R u going to update dear
Update fast n long one
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Posted: 9 years ago
A very very n very big sorry for delay.. N upar sey mainey koi response vi nahi diya to your cmmnts... Actually meri na weekly test is going on n avi do aur subjects ki baaki hain.. So as a punishment yeh chota sa update n long one i will update once my test gets over... Sorry...
Enjoy reading..;

CHAPTER-6(c)
Nandini was looking out of window.. Actually she was thinking abt the moment that happened jst few min ago on terrace.. Suddenly she felt a head on her shoulder.. She turned around n it was of course manik.. Then he hold her hands and started to play wid her fingers.. She didn't object as she was not in mood n she knws dat manik was not in his sense aur agar she object him for anything then he will create more nataunkisss..!!!
Manik: Nandini..!!! He called her..
Nandu: Hmm.. Bolo..!!!
Manik then write "Y" on her hands wid his finger...
Nandu: "Y"?? She gave him confused look..
Manik: Y nandini?? Kyun kiya tumne mere saath aisa?? U toh knw naa k main tumse kitna pyaar kaeta thaa.. Tumhari khusi k liye i could go to any extent ..!! Toh phir kyun ?? He asked her in a low voice..
Nandu: Manik plz i had enough of it.. Don't start this topic once again.. M done wid it..!!!
Manik: But m yet not done wid it.. Mujhe janna hain nandini..!! I wanna knw ki y u betrayed me...?? Y?? He said in a loud voice this time..
Nandu: I betrayed u... Huh..!! She said shedding lonely tears...
Manik: Yaa.. Nandini u betrayed me.. Pata vi hain tumhe kitna hurt hua thaa main.. Aur yeh sab bas us raat ki baat nahi hain.. I was noticing u frm 1 week nandini..1 week...!! Main toh in sab k baarey mein tumse baat vi karna chata thaa..dat whether u had any kind of problem wid me toh i would hv solved ...bt u toh don't even hv time for it.. Aur uske baad toh jo tumney kiya na it was heart wrenching.. Nandini..!! Ek baari baat karke toh dekha hota..!! Par nahi u toh choosed to betray me na... Uss raat tumney sirf mera trust nahi toda thaa bt u broke me too.. Nandini..!! I wanted to die after all that.. Kyunki mere paas na jiney ki wajah hi baaki nahi rahi.. Tum meri zindagi thi.. Mera wajood tumse thaa bt wat u did...!!!
His eyes were full of tears bt controlled it frm falling..
Manik: Tumhe pata hain that night maun ghar lautne k baad na bohot royaa... Bohot.. Mujhe toh samajh hi nahi aaraha thaa ki wat happened..?? Kuch waqt mein hi my life take a 360 degree turn.. I had nothing left in my life.. Frnds k saath toh already prblm chal rahey the bt u also.. I cried my heart out.. Mujhe na meri zindagi ek saja ki tarah lag rahi thi.. Bt i composed myself n promised myself ki main aaj k baad kavi vi nahi rounga.. Aur tumhaare liye toh bilkul vi nahi.. Suna tumne...!!
Nandini: Really manik tumhe aaj vi yehi lagta hain ki uss raat i was at fault?? She asked him in a low voice...
Manik: Sab kuch toh mere aakhon k saamney hi thaa nandini.. Everything was clear... Nandini..!! Kaas tumney yeh sab naa kiya hota toh today we would hv been happy.. Bt thik hain na ab tum ho hi aisi aur yeh sachai ek na ek din samne aani hi thi.. Nandini y??? Don't u knw it hurts... " It hurts alot..!!"
Nandu: xcatlly..manik it hurts..
Manik: Nandini tumhe pata vi hain in 4 chaar saalo main mainey tumhe kitna miss kita..?? Main na chah kar vi tumhe bhoola nahi paya.. Pata nahi ye kaisi saja mili hain mujhe aur kis baat ki... Saying this he hugged her..
Nandini plz mat chodo mujhe main nahi jee paaunga tumhaare bina.. Tumhaare bina meri sasey chal toh rahi hain par main jinda nahi hu nandini .. M a lifeless body.. Adhoora hu main tumhaare bina.. Plz complete me..
After a while he brk the hug.. Nandini was mum all this time..
Manik: Chup kyun ho nandini kuch toh bolo..
Nandini: Ghar aagaya..!!! Chalo lets get in..
Saying this she came out n manik too.. Both entered the villa...
Precap: Cabir apologized to nandu... A new mrng wid new plans..

Ohh..!! Finally done wid one more part of this chapter.. I knw bohot hi chota thaa bt kya karu these test na... Bt don't worry once this test gets over lamba wala update dungi.. Agar mumma ne mujhe aisey phn pe dekh liya hota toh aaj to jodo ki daar padti.. Yaa u hears it correct ye update i did through phn.. Bohot hi muskil hua.. Bt its all for u readera... Kaisa laga do cmmnt n don't forget to press like button...aur haa plz jaada ae jada cmmnt karo guys.. It encouraged me...

Signing off by MYRAH..!!!!



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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u so much for update and pm!! Finally manik poured his heart out to nandini but what mus have happened he is saying she betrayed him but nandini is saying something else seems like their is a big big misunderstanding between them..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update too emotional
But manik is at fault he has not trusted her air bahut hua hard bar nandu hi kyu explanation de jabki she is not at fault. Pls let manik know everything fast tabhi to maja aayega.
Pls update the long one fast. Make manik apologize nandini in front of every one.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice updt...emotionl wala..
Plz bring out d mystry soon... d suspnc is killing me yar...
N plz unite manan as soon.as u cn...

Gud luck fr ur xm...
Plz continue soon ..
N thnx fr d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
aisa kya hua tha unke past mein
I want to know it
Loved the update
Cont soon
Plz pm me for your updates

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