MANAN FF- IT HURTS ALOT...(chp12A-pg147 / link to thread 2-pg 152) - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice updt...
Nandu still cares fr manik a lot..
N hw much they may say that they hate ech othr..but still they can't hide their lv...
They r made fr ech othr...

Plz continue soon...
N gud luck fr ur xm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cute update..
Loved drunk nd cute manik alot..
U have reverse the role in serial its drunk nandu doing such cute actics nd here manik doing..must say both r equally cute..
Waiting for cabini talk..
Loved it.
Cont soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Manik drunk, the dance, the kiss, the talk and the song
All was awesome
But why is cabir sorry?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Pls update the next part soon n long one
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Posted: 9 years ago
myru is dt u..???
loved d update...d lyf afta 4 long years...
w8n t read mystries gtn unfold...
reali liked evry bit of stry...jz read it nw in one go...
PM me d nxt tym u updte...
Edited by pragyas1192 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very late comment I know I loved all the chapters they all are amazing. All the very best for your exam.
Continue soon waiting eagerly.

Thnx for the pm dear.
RIKKITA thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Very late comment I know😛 but I loved all the chapters they all are amazing. All the very best for the exam and concentrate on your studies.
Continue soon waiting eagerly.

Thnx for the pm dear.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Enjoy reading...

Chapter-6(e)
Nandini came out of the room n found cabir outside of the door..
N: Woh actually manik was drunk n i brought him home so i was in his room...
C: Its ok nandini i didn't hv any problem in i being in manik room..
N:I was just helping him out thats it...
N:Thanx... Itna sab kuch hone k bawajood u helped him.. Thanx alot..
N: Its alright cabir.. Waise vi mainey jo vi kiya wo sab insaaniyat k naatey kiya aur manik k jagah koi aur vi hota to i would hv done the same... Its my duty to help ppl in need...
Saying this nandini was abt to leave... Bt cabir spoke...
C: M sorry nandini..
N: Sorry?? She gv him a confused look..
C: Uss raat i didn't took stand for u.. Uske liye m really sor... He was cut off in btn by nandini... " I think raat bohot hogayi hain u should go n sleep"...
Saying this she left for her room..
Cabir thought to himself "No nandini main itni jaldi haar nahi maanunga.. Tumhaari naraazgi jayaz hain par main tumse maafi maanunga aagey tumhaari choice whether to forgive me or not...!!"
He walked toward her room...
Nandini was abt to close the door when cabir rush there..
C: Nandini wait.. Plz ek baari meri puri baat sunlo.. Plz ..!! He was pleading really hard..
Nandini chahe jitni badal jaaye andar se toh avi vi hamari pyaari si nandu hain na.. So he let him in..
C: Thanx for letting me in.. Thanx alot for aleast giving me a chance to speak n clear everything..
N: Its fine.. Aur waisey vi main tumlogo jaisi nahi hoon who don't let other to explain themself or speak...
Listening this cabir remembered the incident..

Flashback...!!!
N: Guyz plz give me a chance to explain everything.. Jaisa tum sab soch rahey ho waisa kuch vi nahi hain.. Plz let me speak my words.. Let me clear everything..
M: Ab in sab chijo k baad bolne k liye kya reh gaya hain nandini.. Haa kya bologi..??
Mukti: Aur waisey vi kuch bolne ka vi faida nahi hain coz we knw ki tum jo vi bologi na sab jhoot hi bologi..
Alya: Exactly.. Manik yeh tumne firse apni seedhi saadhi baaton mein fasaana chahti hain.. Don't listen to her..
N: Nahi manik aisa kuch vi nahi hain.. Yeh sab jo vi tumne dekha i can explain.,
M: Just shutup.. Don't utter a single word frm ur mouth.. Mujhe kuch vi nahi sunna hain.. Waise vi sab sach toh saamne hi hain toh wat will u explain ha.. I had enough of it.. So ab chup chap yaha se niklo..
N: Manim plz aleast give me one chance to speak..
M: Enough nandini.. Mainey kaha na i don't wanna hear ur voice..
Flashback ends...!!
A lonely tear escaped frm cabir's eyes.. His thought were broken by nandu's voice..
N: Ab kuch bolna vi hain yaa aisey hi rahogey..
C: Haa bolna hain na..
N: Jo vi kehna hain jaldi kaho n leave... She said in a really cold tone facing her bck to cabir..
C: Nandini m sorry.. Uss raat k liye m really sorry.. I should hv taken a stand for u ... Mujhe pata hain nandini tum aisi nahi ho.. Pata nahi kaisey main vi baaki sab ki tarah tum par sak kar raha thaa.. Bt i really regret it now..
N: Cabir ab in sab baaton ka koi matlab nahi hain.. I hv moved on... Aur main phirse piche mud kar nahi dekhna chaahti ho... Its all over now.. Sab kuch khatam ho chukaa hain..
C: Tumhaare liye sab kuch khatam ho chuka ho gaa bt for me i haven't moved on.. Nahi bhulaa paa raha hu main usd raat... Do u knw wat m ashamed of myself.. Tumhe pata main ab tak chup kyu thaa coz i was not able to see myslf toh main tuumse kaise nazre milaa ta... Tum mere liye meri behen jaisi ho nandini.. U protected me..my secrets.. Par jab meri baari aayi maine tumse mu mod liya... Saying this he again remembered..
Flashback..!!!
N: Cabir tum toh hamesha kehte ho na k main tumhaari behen jaisi hoon.. Toh tumhe to apni behen par yakin hain na ki woh aisaa kavi nahi karsakti... Plz tum insab ko samjhaao na yeh baat.. Agar tum kahoge na toh yeh sab jaroor maanenge... Plz cabir kuch toh kaho..!!! She was holding his hands n pleading infront of him very badly..
Cabir removed her hand frm his n turnec his face to nxt side..
N: Cabir..!! She called his name really helplessly.. Par sayad aaj nandu k aansuo se kisi ko fark hi nahi par raha thaa..
Cabir was still standing facing to opposite side.. Aur issi k saath nandu ka last hope vi khatam ho gaya thaa..!!
Flashback ends..!!

Cabir again spoke.." Mainey jo kuch vi kiya un sab k liye bohot sarminda ho nandini.. I should hv spoke that day.. Mujhe tumhara saath dena chahiye thaa.."
N: plz rehne do na cabir.. Ab ye sab kar kar kya faida..??
C: Kaise rehne do nandini kaise.. I m at fault.. N i realize it.. Mujhe maaloom hain tum avi mujhse bohot naraaz ho aur i knw tumhaari yeh naraazgi jaayaz vi hain.. Bt plz ho sakey toh mujhe maaf kardo plz..
N: Ab jo ho gaya so jo gaya let it be na aur waise vi tum kyu maafi maang rahe ho... Tumne toh us din kuch bolaa vi nahi thaa like others jo mujhe vala bura keh rahe the..
C: Aur yehi toh meri sabse badi galti hain ... I should hv spoke smthg.. Tumhara saath denaa chahiye thaa par nahi mein chup chap ek koney mein muh modke kada thaa.. M sorry fir all this nandini.. M sorry.. Hamara blood relation na honey k baad vi u did everything to prove urself as a bst sister bt i.. I failed as a bst bhai.. I failed nandini n m sorry for this m really sorry.. He was now sitting on his knees n crying his heart out..
Nandu turned towards him n was shocked to see him like this.. She made him stand n spoke.." Plz cabir don't make it more hard for me.. Plz aisaa mat karo.. Us din jo kuch vi hua un sab chijo se bahar nikalne mein bohot waqt laga.. So plz don't bring it up once again.. Baat agar sirf meri hoti toh sayad main tumhe maaf vi kardi par uss raat ki wajah so i lost myslf n i lost my... She couldn't say anymore..
She wiped her tears n spoke" Cabir ab main woh nandini nahi rahi.. So mujhse maafi maangena ka kou matlb nahi kyunki main uss raat k liye kavi bi kisi ko maaf nahi kar paaungi"..
C: I can understand nandini u must be really hurt.. Aur main jaanta hu ki tum haame maaf nahi kar paaogi bt plz at least talk to us.. Plz don't behave like a stranger..Kamse kam mujhse toh baat karo.. Plz...!!
N: Okay.. I can talk wid u par issey jada kuch bi umeed mat rakhna..
C: Thanx alot.. Nandini.. Tum mujhse atleast baat toh karogi.. It means alot to me.. Thank you so much..
N: Ab agar tumhara ye sorry aur thank you session khatam hogaya hain toh go n sleep.. U must be tired after partying..
C: Okay fine.. M leaving...
He was abt to leave when suddenly nandini called him..
N: Cabir..!!!
C: Haa...!!!
N: Gudnite...!!
C: Gudnite.. He replied wid a huge smile n left the room..
...
Precap: A new mrng new plans..n ofcourse manan romance in swimming pool...n much more...


Omg..!!!! Finally chaptet 6 khatam.. Actually i wnt to kerp this night in a single chp so issilye i divided in parts coz i didn't hv enough time to update it in single parts..
Thanx for ur wishes... Mujhe toh khud hi yakin nahi ho raha k mera accounts ka exam itna accha gaya.. Its all due to ur blessings.. Ab toh mummy bohot hi khus ho jaayengi,. I m super excited... N yaa don't worry abt truth .. I wilk surely reveal it in 9th chp.. Tab tak yahi sahi..
I can sed that aajkal kam response mil rahe hain.. Is it bcoz u guyz are lozing interest?? Yaa chota updates ki wajah se hain.. If so then i hv got 1 week of toh i wilk update lamba lamba from now on..
Plz guyz do cmmnt warna mera vi man nagi karta ki update karo... Aur silent readers ko kya kahu yaar.. Kamse kam kuch to likho kaisa laga accha\bura??
Mera hogaya now ur turn.. So cmmnt n like plz...!!!!

Signing off by MYRAH;
Love u all

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Posted: 9 years ago
It was really nice update...
Like cabini emotional talks
I so wonna know what exactly happened..
Why they all didn't trusted her and listen to her
And what made her change...
Well ch 6 is completed and it was fab
Coming up manan romance in pool
Awww waiting for that...
Update soon and long one😉
Keep smiling
Take care
Stay blessed
Love
Dua...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it!!
Finally Cabira spoke and please get Cabni back soon!!
So emotional 😭
Without Manan also it was superb!!
Thanks for pm.
Keep up the great work!

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