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Chapter-6(B)
Everyone were dancing crazily n here someone blood was boiling due to anger... It was none other than our very own Manik Malhotra... He was just drinking n drinking seeing them..
Dj announced" Guyz i think its time for some romantic number.. Enjoy urself'..
Everyone shouted"ooo"..
Now the lightings were also romantic..
Nandu n maddy also took part in this dance..
The song got started..
( ishq wala love)..
Nandu n maddy were dancing really romantically..
N now manik had no limits..
He took 2-3 bottles of wine n went towards the terrace of pub...
Suddenly cabir received a call frm rohan..
Cabir: hello..
Rohan: haan actually cabir..dekho na pari bass roye jaa rahi hain..kuch vi karo chup hi nahi ho rahi hain..
Cabir: okay don't worry ...main aa raha hun...
Rohan: okay.. N sorry for ruining ur party..
Cabir: No no its absolutely alright.. Saying this he hung up..
Cabir went towards navya.. She was standing wid dhruv n alya..
Cabir: Navya actually rohan sir ka phn aaya thaa n he told ki pari roye jaa rahi hain so we hv to leave..
Navya: Kya ?? Pari roh rahi hain.. Jaldi cabir..
They were abt to leave when alya spoke..
Alya: Guys m also tired so main vi tum logo k saath chalti hu..
N then dhruv also spoke..
Dhruv: Actually mera vi mood nahi hain so i will also come wid u..
Cabir: Thik hai.. Letsgo..
Mukti also came n..
Mukti: Oh hello sab kaha jaaney ki baat kar rahey ho??
Cabir told everything..
Mukti: Thik hain phir main vi chalti hu.. N wait hum manik ko vi le chalte hain..
Navya: Thik hain.. Par manik hain kaha??
Cabir: lets search..
They search for him bt couldn't find him..
Cabir: Lets do one thing hum msg chod dete hain that we hv left .. Woh maddy aur nandini k saath aajaye gaa.. Actually pari bohot ro rahi hain so we hv to hurry..
Mukti: Thik hain..
N they all left..
Here manik was sitting on terrace wid empty bottles of wine.. He was not in his sense.. Actually he was fully drunk.. Suddenly his phn buzz..
It was cabir msg .. He read " We all r leaving for home .. Actually pari roh rahi hain so we need to leave.. Hum ne tujhe dhoonda bt couldn't find u... Tu Maddy aur nandini k saath ajaanaa.. Sorry.."
Manik: wat unke saath aajaana.. Unke saath aaney se accha main yahi rahu.. Huh..
Here downstairs maddy n nandini were sitting on chairs n chit chatting.. Suddenly Maddy got a call..
Maddy : hello..
Person: woh sahab .. babyji ki tabet kharab ho gayi hain.. Jaldi aajaaiye..
Maddy: Wat?? Thik hain tum di k saath rehna main avi aaya..
Saying this he hunged up..
Nandu: Kya hua Maddy .. Everything alright??
Maddy: Actually di ki tabet thodi kharaab hain.. I need to leave.,
Nandu: Main vi chalti hu..
Maddy: No its alright.. Main sab sambaal lunga.. Aur fab5 vi toh saath mei hain na.. Acchha todi na lagege .. Humne unhe invite kiya aur hum hi gayab..
Nandini: Thik hain u take the car.. We will manage in one car..
Maddy: Thanx dear..
Nandu: Bye n gaadi acche se chalaana n inform me abt di's condition..
Maddy: Ok .. Bye..
Saying this he left..
Nandu was searching for everyone when a manager of pub came near nandini n told..
Manager: Aap manik sir k saath ho na..
Nandu: Y??
Manik: Woh actually he is full drunk.. Woh upar terrace par hain.. He is not coming down.. Hum unhe aisey haalat main upar nahi rakh sakte..
Nandu: Haan toh unke frnds unkey saath aaye hain.. Aap unhe kahiye naa y r u telling me..
Manager: Main unhe kabse dhoond raha hu bt couldn't find them.. Actually mainey aapko ek hi gaadi se utartey huye dekha toh i thought ki aap vi unkey saath ho..
Nandu: Thik hain main uskey paas jaati hu tab tak uskey dosto ko dhoondiye..
Saying this she went to terrace..
Manik was sitting on the floor..
Nandu: Manik.. Getup.. Chalo mere saath.. Its time to leave for home..
Manik: Mu..mu.. Mujhe na...hi.. Jaa..naa( mujhe nahi jana)
Nandu: Manik mere paas in sab k liye time nahi hain.. Common hurry up..
Manik: Tum haare paas mere liye time hi kaha hain.. Ab toh tum haare pass uskey liye time hain na.. Ky..aa naam hain uska.. Hmm ( he made a thinking expression).. Mad.. Kuch.. Mad mad jaisa thaa..
Nandu: Madhyam..
Manik: Haa. Madhyam.. Bt tum usey kya bukaati ho.. Umm. Yaa.. Ma.. Mad.. Maddy.. Haa maddy..
Nandu: Manik stop all this aur chalo ghar.. Ek toh tumhaarey frnd vi nahi milrahey hain aur upar se tum..
Manik: Woh milengey vi nahi.. They na left.. Chaley gaye woh log..
Nandu: Wat??
Manik: Hmm. Aur issmey koi badi baat nahi hain.. Aaj kal we all don't share the same bond naa.. Toh its alright..
Nandu: Y?? Wat happened??
Manik: Ma..in.. Tum.. Tumhe kyun batau??( main tumhe kyun bataun)
Nandu: Thik hain mat batao.. Let me make a call mujhe ghar se gaadi mangwaani hogi..
She was abt to call when she realized that her phn was dead.. So she asked wid manik...
Nandu: Manik.. Give me ur phn.. I need to make a call n my phn is dead..
Manik: Wa..aat?? Tumhaara phn mar gaya.. Oh shit.. Bechaare ki aatmaa ko shaanti miley..
Nandu:( In full irritated tone) Manik.. I mean to say mere phn ki battery khatam ho gayi ho so ab plz tum apna phn dogey..
Manik: Ohh.. Toh aisey bola karo naa.. Wait main avi deta hu.. Wait wait Wait.. Main na phn toh jaroor dunga bt yeh phn mtlb kya hota hain?? ( he said in babyish tone)
Nandu: Manik...
She murmur to herslf" Relax nandu"
Nandu: Manik ( showing her phn) phn na aisaa hota hain.. Yaad aaya..
Manik: Oh haa .. Yaad aagaya..
Nandu: Toh ab dogey..
Manik: Main na tumhe apna phn jaroor deta bt ab nahi de sakta..
Nandu: Kyun??
Manik: Woh naa.. Baat ye ki woh todhi der pehle naa mujhe bohot bhuk lagi thi toh mainey naa phn khaaliyaa.. Ab toh wo mere tummy main hain..( showing his tummy)
Nandu was feeling like banging her head.. Suddenly she realized that manik has stood up n now he was walking on on railings of terrace..
Nandu: oh shit.. Manik tum upar kyun ho jst get down.. Warna gir jaao gey..
Manik: Haa woh toh mujhey vi pata hain.. Main koi superhero todhi na hu ki udjaaunga.. He chuckled..
Nandu: Issiliye toh keh rahi hu ki get down..
Manik: No.. Mujhe nahi aana niche.. Its really bad world.. Sab kuch yaha bohot ganda hain.. Bt upar na sab kuch accha hota hain.. Ha believe me.. Mainey bachpan main padhaa thaa... Issiliye ab na main upar jaa raha hoon.. Nichewaaley main jaa raha hoon.. Uparwaaley main aa raha hoon..
Nandu angered has no limit left..
Nandu: Manik stp it..Band karo yeh sab..
Manik: jaao.. Ab na main nichey aaungaa hi nahi.. Tum bohot gandi ho.. Tumney mujhe daataa.. Now don't talk to me..
Nandu: Acha baba sorry.. Thik hain ab toh nichey aajaao..
Manik: Okay.. Sorry accepted.. Par main nichey ek sarth main hi aaunga ga??
Nandu: wat condition??
Manik: Tum na maddy k saath woh romantic dance kar ragi thi na waisa hi dance mere saath avi karo..
Nandu: Main aisaa kuch nahi karney waali.. Saying this she turned her face to nxt side..
Manik: Thik hain mat karo main vi nichey nahi utrunga..
Nandu: Thik hain mat utro.. Mujhe kya?? Giro gey toh mujhey thodi naa dard hogaa??
Manik: Yaa right.. Mere dard se tumhe thodi na kuch hoga... Aakhir zindagi ki sabsey bada dard tumhney hi to diya hain..
Nandu: Yaa right.. I hurted u.. She said in a sarcastic tone..
Manik: Exactly.. U hurted me.. N hurted me alot..
Nandu: Ab yeh sab plz band karo n get down..
Manik: No.. First dance wid me.. Woh maddy ke saath toh khub chipak chipak kar ishq wala luv kar rahi thi naa toh mere saath kya problem hain???!!
Nandu thought there was no use of arguing so she agreed..
Manik: pakka??
Nandu: haa..
Finally manik came down n he was abt to begin the dance wen manager came...
Manager: Woh mam.. Manik sir k frnds toh chaley gaye..
Nandu: Haa.. I knw.. Aap plz ek kaam kardo.. Can u plz arrange a cab for us ...!!!
Manager: Alright.. Aap ruko main arrange karke aata hu..
Nandu: Thanx alot..
As soon as the manager left manik hold nandu's hand n pulled her wid a jerk towards him.. She banged on his chest.. N finally manik whispered in her ear" dance is still left".. Saying this he twirled her round n round n round..
Now manik hand was on nandu's waist on her hand were on his shoulder.. They were moving with the flow of romantic wind...
Manik huskily said " do u knw wat nandu its the first time jab main tumhe itne waqt k baad itney karib se dekh raha hu.. I must say u hv been more beautiful.. Tum janti vi nahi ho how hard its for me to resist y right now.."
Saying this he again twirled her..
Now they were standing on such position that nandu was facing her bck... They were really close.. Manik kpt her hair at a side.. Nandu closed her eyes to rejoice the moment... She was wearing a bck less dress.. He caressed her bck with his hand n kissed it.. Nandu was really hving a hard time as she was not able to resist him... He then slid the straps of her dress little lower n gave a love bite on her neck then he kissed it to soothe the pain... He droped a wet kiss on her shoulder.. Then finally he turned her toward him.. He cupped her face n asked her to opn her eyes.. She with a grt difficulty opened it.. They shared an intense eyelock.. Manik gently rub his thumb wid her lips.. Nandu now stand on his foot andthen kissed his both cheeks,eyes n forehead.. He also did the same.. Then finally the time came.. He brought her closer n closer.. Their eyes were closed n lips were an inch apart .. They were abt to kiss.. Bt the manager came..
Manager: Woh.. ( he turned around seeing them in such position)
Hearing his voice nandu pushed manik away.. The reality hit her mind.. She realized wat waa she going to do.. Finally she spoke..
Nandu: Woh cab ka kya hua??
Manager: Haa.. Woh cab nichey aachuki hain..
Nandu: Thik hain.. Thanx.. Chalo manik..
Saying this she began to walk n manik also followed her quietly..
They both sat n bck seat..n the cab started..
Precap: some emotional talks in cab..
So done wid part b also.. I knw manan romance chota saa thaa bt story line k hisaab sey avi itna hi fit hua... Bt don't worry aagey vi toh manan scenes hongey na.. Kaisa laga do comment n of course press the like button.. For pm buddy me.. N guyz plz cmmnt yaar agar aap sab cmmnt nahi karogey toh how will i knw ki aap savi ko kaisa lag raha hain.. Do u knw jab cmmnt jaada na ho toh story update karney ka vi man nahi karta.. So do lamba lamba cmmnt.. N if u wanna suggest then plz do it..
Signing off by MYRAH...
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