MaNan SS : Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Rabtaa [on Hold] note-35 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
nice update
the way all fab5 enjoyed n make evrey one was too good
manik sang to nandu was too good
jst loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part - 3
Just now car is start it's not a journey to reach Manik home it's also new journey of my life.
Life is always unpredictable and for my life its a huge example
Nandini Murthi who live in U. S. A with her world best family. She never thought her life change like this.
Mom Dad and Rishabh such a amazing life we spend their. Papa ki princess thi main kitne khush thi main my life just like a fairytale but one night change every thing. I lost my amma appa and Rishabh's voice. But we get Rishabh' attack.
I am Just 12 years I lost my self also but Amms give me music which help me to came back normal life.
Then Chacha chachi give us so much love so they fulfill our Amma Apapa's place.
Then god bless us an Angel our life . Tanu my princess she complete our family. She also Complete my chachi she called her maa.
Srif 1 month ki thi jab Tanu mere saath hamari ghar aye thi 5 year we share such a beautiful time. At first Amms not like my decision of Tanu stay with us but Tanu's sweetness also convince her. We spend lots of beautiful moments we also go Mangalore 2 times of the year and Amms also come Mumbai to see us. Most happy family we r. Chacha Chachi loved Tanu so much they adopted her. When Tanu first time called maa to Chachi her happiness is priceless to me. Perfect happy family we are. But last year our life face more harder time. Rishabh suffering his attack from 10 years but last year his attack give him more pain. Only me calm him down but this time I am also helpless then we get to know my little princess suffering from blood cancer. Our world just stop we all just collapsed. Chachi blame herself only for her destiny Tanu suffering alot according to her chachi ki maa na baana unki badnaseebi thi jo bhagwan ne unki kismat me likhi thi but humne unki kismat badalne ki koshish ki Tanu ko unki beti banake toh Tanu ko itane takleef sayna pare hai.
Kahte hain jab mushibad ati hai toh charo taraf se ati hai humare sath bhi esahi huya. Chacha already take loan for our own house in Mumbai. So amms decided to mortgage our Mangalore house but then we know their is some legal problems created by One big promoter who want our house for his multi- storage bulliding.
I take loan from my office Cabir help me alot this time.
This time we lost all hope. Nothing good to happens with us. But 3 month ago Cabir call me his cabin where Manik already presence then.
Flashback
Cabir - Dekho Nandini I know which problem u face of on ur life. You already took loan from office so in official way I can't help u any more. But I have other way . Nandini Listen to me very carefully I have offer for u. So Nandini you know Manik. The offer is aaa ok Tumhe Manik ke saath saadhi karni hai. Don't get me wrong it's a fake just a deal.
Nandini - What? What do u mean by marriage fake Marriage?
Cabir - Dekho tumhe or Manik ko marriage ki drama karni hai or tumhe isske badle Ur all money problem is solve.
Nandini - Cabir sir what u think about me. I have money problem so do any thing. No I didn't do it.
Manik- Cabir chood na we just try to help her if she not want it its ok. Listen girl I am not interested on you. But its a very good deal for u just playing my wife just some days.
Nandini - Sorry but I am not doing it.
Nandini phone is ringing.
Nandini - hello chachi. what? I am coming. My eyes her full of tears.
Cabir - What happens Nandini?
Nandini - Tanu is hospital.
Cabir - I will drop u there.
We reach hospital. Manik also came with us.
Chachi came and told me Tanu cut her finger playing with her friends till then her bleeding is not stopping then she face Shortness of breath.
Then doctor come from cabin. Then doctor tell us Tanu is very week as soon as possible to they want change her blood and very soon we need to Transplant her bone Marrow.
Cabir and Manik also hair full conversation with Doctor.
We don't know how we will mange this then Manik come to me and he just tell me deal abhi bhi on hai.
Cabir clear all bills of hospital and tell me think Nandini it's not a bad offer. Think one more time..
Full Night I don't sleep just thinking of my life then Morning I call Cabir and say yes for marriage.
After I agree this deal. Manik and Cabir tell me full plan. as our plan we r dating last two month we r going every where together. He took me his Concert. Last 2 month we spending most of our time with each other. So all media, social networking site talking only about us.
I am telling him all about my life. Amma Appa's accident. Rishabh problem and about Tanu 's adoption. He also tell me something of his life but most of fab5.
One day we r going restaurants for our fake date it's a private date but some reporter's try to click our pic then Suddenly Manik call all reporter's to our table then he came to Close me and tell them meet my love my girlfriend Nandini Murthy now u all happy hope u all not spoil our date. May u all go please.
After this incident Manik propose me for marriage on his Concert.
After finishing fab5 songs he announced this song is for my love my Nandini.
Then he starts song
Hum tere bin
Ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera
[Manik start his song. all audience r clapping.]
Hum tere bin
Ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera
Tujh se juda agar ho jayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jayenge juda
[Then spot light fall on me I am standing In first row with Navya]
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
[He come to me from stage then he take my hand and dragging me to stage]
Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ek pal door gavara nahi
Tere liye har roz hain jeete
Tujhko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera..
[Then he site on his knees and he fill my ring finger with a beautiful diamond ring.]
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
Tum hi ho..
Tum hi ho..
Nandini you will be marry me I just node my head.
After propose drama he came my house for convenience my family of Marriage at first amms not agree for it The Manik Malhotra use his charm and at least Amms also agree for this marriage.
Every thing goes to according our plan. But last few days when our marriage rituals r starting I don't understand Manik behaviour I am very confused. If he is such a good actor or I don't know. I didn't want think this matter.
Nandini come we reach our home.
our home the word make me come back my present.
Chale Nandini fab4 r waiting for us.
We enter to Malhotra Mansion.
'What the what r u doing here? 'Manik shout.
Then I up my head then I saw Mrs. Nyonika Malhotra.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Chapter - 4
Malhotra Mansion :
Manik:what the hell are you doing here nyonika?
nyonika:what kind of question is this manik!! M your mother n morever this is my house too!!! mere bete ki aaj shaadi h n mujhe he ni pta lga
Manik: ohh cut the crap n tell what bloody hell you want??
Nyonika : nothing m here to perform rituals for you both...
manik starts walking when nandini holds his hand and
gestures him to stay back fab4 were watching this n gets
happy seeing manik staying back
manik to nyonika: do fast what ever you wanna do i dont have whole for you (nyonika performs rituals)
afterthat manik angrily leaves from there leaving nyonika n Nandini alone fab4 follows him
In study room,
manik makes whole room mess.. Just then fab4 enters
Dhruv :buddy calm down!!!
Alya :manik atleast today pls control your anger
Mukti : why can't jst for one day nyonika leave him at peace
Alya :manik nandini is not used to all these things pls
controls
As soon as alya finishes speaking,
Cabir freaks
Cabir : guys nandini is still outside with nyonika
wait i'll get her
Meanwhile in hall,
Nyonika:so you are that commoner who wants my place through manik but m imprssed that way you controlled him bt silly gal you dnt knw me tmhara yh pyar n shaadi sab bahot jald khatam ho jaega manik tmhe khud iss ghar se
nikalega and if not i'll make sure he do se
tch tch tch nandini wlcm to hell
smiles evilly
Nandini pov
how can a mother be so evil for her own son
Nandini was so much scared from all these things bt still she calms herself from the very first day i was wondering ki q woh apko maa
ni bulata bt now i got all my answers you are not worthy for that pure word!!!!Nandini says to Nyonika in hatred tone and mrs malhotra apko hmare pyar aur shaadi ki chinta krne ki jarurat ni h as far as we are together we can fought
with evry problem one pair of eyes were witnessing all these things
who else one n only our CABIRA
cabir was coming to the hall bt stops when he listens their conversaton n hide behind the pillar to listen whole matter
Cabir pov
BINGO!!!! I was rgt from the vry 1st day she is the one for manik, only she can bring him back from darkness, only she can fill his heart with love
i know my way of doing things is wrong bt i'll make sure kiyeh fake marriage rael marriage bane manik and nandini manan bane
pov ends
cabir: nandini come with me nandini & cabir reaches manik's room you ok naa!! I know yeh sab tmhare liye easy ni hoga n Nyonika ke aane se aur bhi tough ho jaega bt dnt you worry
m aur manik hai tmhare sath!!!! Cabir told Nandini in a brotherly concern
Nandini : i know Cabir sir yeh sab easy ni hoga isliye m ready for everything
Cabir : you take rest!!! M Manik k paas jta hoon
Nandini pov
how i controlled his anger?? Manine kbhi kisse se ese baat ni ki bt what hpnd to me today i know yeh marriage srf ek deal h bt jab Nyonika mam woh sb bol rhi thi toh q ni m apne pe control kar payi she closes her eyes n rests her heat on bed board to calm her nerves
meanwhile in study room,Cabir enters
guys tumlog bahar jao i'll handle him
fab3 leaves
manik tujhe pta h abhi Nandini ne Nyonika ko kya sunaya hai agr tune suna hta naa toh you would have hugged her Cabir said naughtily
Manik : Cabirrr
Cabir : accha ok tu abhi nandini k paas jaa aaj bahot drama ho gya its too mch to handle for her manik starts going arre manik tu toh bda fast nikla itta besrb ho rha nandini ke
paas jane k liye cabir says playfully manik punches in his stomach lightly
Fab3 were waiting outside when manik and cabir comes
their
Mukti : Manik jaa Nandini ke paas
Alya : its your 1st ngt Manik
Dhruv : haa buddy she needs you rgt now
Cabir : tu jaa!!!. We are here only
manik enters in his room and saw nandini sleeping keeping her head on bed board, he admires her her long silky hair
her pouty lips her milky white skin
how perfect she is Manik covers her with blanket and moves to washroom to change into comfortables
Next morning
nandini wakes up n sees herself covered with duvet a smile crept on her lips then she sees manik sleeping on couch
Nandini pov
ohh god how cute he looks while sleeping lyk a baby
pov ends
Nandini moves towards couch as if thinking how to wake him up bt drops the idea n moves to washroom for taking shower after coming outside she sees manik is already up
Manik : nandini jldi ready ho jao fab4 is waiting for us on dining table nandini nods meanwhile manik freshes up n both moves towards breakfst area after teasing and breakfast session fab4 leaves so as
manan
manik drops nandini to her house and goes to his office
murthy's were happy to see nandini so as Nandini
she spends quality time with them due to which she actually
forgets lst nyt incident meanwhile in office manik was
thinking about nandini
(manik likes her bt is ready to accept so as nandini) in
evening nandini bieuds them n went with manik on reaching
Malhotra Mansion
they got another shock
person to Manik : kya yaar Maanik
manik tune shaadi kar li n btaya bhi ni tri behan bhaag gayi isme mri kya galti mujhe toh bulaya hota oh hy mrs. malhotra m manik's step sister husband
bt to my dismay she ran away with another guy with my
daughter whole family is drama company manik: shut up harshad
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
hey nice update yar
i jst the read this ff in wattpad few hrs back
bt again happy to read in if also
it was awsome update
cabir their to bring them together
bt y mnaik made to marry her
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
nice update dear...😊
the way nandu controlled manik was amazing yrr😛
i think manik is developing feelings for nandini..i hope they realise it soon😛😃
thanx for the pm
tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
awesome update...
can't wait for them to accept each other...
hopefully hearted doesn't create more problems...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Nice update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
I just read all chapters in one go. Story is developing by each chapter. I'm liking it. 😛 continue dear...and Thanks for sharing this. 😃👏


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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
interesting update
awesome update
loved it
cont soo
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Very well written . Jst read all the chapters.. Pls continue and update soon.. Pls pm me from next update.. Thank you take care.. 😊

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