MaNan SS : Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Rabtaa [on Hold] note-35

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Hi Friends, I am Purna. I am posting here 2 New Story of MaNan written by me. Hope u all Like them.
My writing skills is very poor and I am writing on my phone so ignore all errors...



Special thanks to my friend Stuti Gupta for editing my poor writing.

Prologue- Page-1
Part-1 & 2 Page-2
Part - 6 Page-6Part-8-Page-12


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Prologue
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
This is my favourite song. love this lyrics and also believe it ki meri zindagi mein bhi koyi aayega jo mere Sirf mere hoga.
Meri Life main yeh kabhi nahi hoga koi nehi ayega. Now point of this waiting for someone coz whole world thing my wait is finished coz today is my wedding day. For World today is dream wedding day where most beautiful love story finding there destination.
One of beautiful fairytale comes true every girls dream man most India most popular rockstar and business tycoon married one most common girl. For everyone it's a love story which made in heaven. All friends and colleagues jealous on they don't imagine it A simple girl a common girl Nandini Murthi got opportunity to marry The Manik Malhotra.
Dream wedding with her love ones every girls dream which is happening on my life every think that. some how I am also want to believe it but it's not true it's just big drama on my life just like a movie.
Yes today is my wedding with India most famous business tycoon and Rockstar The Manik Malhotra which is every girls dream. For the world it's a love marriage just like fairytale. A common girl meet a prince charming and both fall in love and the stay happily ever after. But for me it's a business deal. Yes My Marriage is a business deal which I accept for my family for their secure future and he I don't know why he do it. It's not my business so I don't ask him. I don't know what is my future what I face after this marriage but I have to do it. Now I am ready for my for my unknown future. Now I am standing my Amma Appa's pic. Please Amma Appa you know why I took this steps it's necessary u understand me plzz don't angry with me plzz give me ur blessing it's important for me please always stay with me.
Nandini kitni time chalo bhi
tumhara hone bhale patidev tumhare intezaar main palke bichakar baithe hai or tum Apne apse baatye korrehi ho.
Abhi aaye Navya. Just 1min please.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start
lookinf forward
hw tere destiny gong to have
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice starting ...cntinue soon ...
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Nice start ...update soon. .😛
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Originally posted by: bhagupur

Nice start ...update soon. .😛



Thanks...
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Part - 1
Part-1
Chale Navya.
Hum to kabse yehi kay rehe hai aur tum hi to nehi sun rahi ho abhi chalo or kitni wait karao gaya apni Manik ko.
Nandini Pov
Meri Manik this is a most funny word in my life. Manik kabhi meri nehi hoga it's impossible.
Aiyappa please give me strength always mere saath rehna I need u. Now every steps it's more heavy than previous when I take this discussion tab se abhi tak my heart and Brian frighting to eachother.
'Tanu ruke re Tanu ase nehi Bhag te' Chachi's voice break my never ending thought processes.
Then I saw Tanu is running to me.
So I site on my knees to match my princess hight area Tanu meri princess tum bhag kue rahi ho u know na doctor uncle say to u don't running it's not good for your health.
'Han Nandu kabse to hum tanu ko yehi saamjha rehe thi . But teri princess meri baat to suniti nehi hai'-Chachi say to nandu
Tanu pout her face.
Chachi-Ha ha amma to kuch nahi lagti teri to sab didi hai na main to esehi chiltate rehti hu. Ja main abhi kuch nehi kahungi kisise.
Chacha - area Sannoji kitni drama karti hai aap.
Chachi - O to hai agar main Shahrukh se mil pati na to main bhi aaj bari actress hoti. Chalo koi nehi Shahrukh na sahi Murthi ji sehi.
Nandini - acha meri princess now tell me why u running.
Tanu-I just want to say u jujuuu is looking soo handsome.
Nandini - ok to jiju looking handsome or main didi ko to koi Bhuli gaya hain.
No didi u also looking awesome- Tanu say
Navya - Don't worry Tanu kuch saal baad hum tere liye bhi handsome husband dunlayenge.
'Rishab now u take care tanu no bhag na no masti take care u both ur medicines all is ur responsibility got it Rishab '-Nandini said to Rishabh and he say yes to Nandini his gesture.
Aiyappa u know yeh dono ke liye main ye saadhi kar rahi hu please inke upar ur blessings hamesha banake rakhna.
Just then Cabir come to them ofoo kitne emotional scene abhi se kue chal raha hai bidaai abhi baki hai or Madhubala I send to take Nandini or tum to gayab ei hogai.
Then he saw Nandini wow Nandini u looking superb (Manik tu to aaj geya on his mind).
Nandini abhi chale or intezaar karay na Manik toh hume kaacha chaaba jayega. You know na The Manik Malhotra never ever wait for anyone.
Yes its the time. I said to myself it's time for my new journey.
Then we going to Mandap
Chachi- Saachi mai Murthy ji bilkul biwas nehi hora hai hamari nandu ki aaj saadhi hai.
Meri jaise baad naseeb jisko bhagwan ne maa baaki sukh nehi diya aaj mere paas mere 3 bache hai. Bhaiyya or bhabhi ki Jane ke baad Nandini or Rishabh toh mere liye thai hi. But Nandini ne Tanu ko lake meri maa sun ki armaan bhi puri kar di aaj mai Complete hu.
Chaha- Shanno ji samahliya apne apko ko. Hamari asu Nandini ko kamzor kor degi. Aaj uski life ki most important day hai or hum toh khush ho na chaiye kitni acha pati mila hai use. Manik kitna acha hai kitna Pyaar karta hai Nandini ko. They t made for each other.
Amms - Shanno or nitin tum dono kya kar rehe ho mandap pe chalo. Abhi itna emotional hoge toh sare rituals miss kor doge.or apni beti ki kaanya daan nehi karna hai kya.
Nandini pov
now I come to the marriage Hall it's Amazing like dreamland. All girls r staring me like I made such a big crime I took thier opportunity to marry most handsome guy. Only my hearts knows meri halat unse bhi buri hai. Now my eyes fall on mandap where the most handsome groom just like a greak god standing for me. My heart is beating very first it's want to believe it is real this dream never break but my Brian shouting on my heart it's not real not lose ur heart.
Now he give his hand to I took his hand I also stand beside him now all my family members r looking to us and give blessings to our future my Amms eyes r full of tears and with lots of hope my brightess future. Then we sit on mandap .
I am sitting left syd in manik
"Dulha dhulhan jaimala ke liye khde ho jye "pandit said
Now truly my marriage is start.
"Kanyadan ke liye ladki pita or mata aage aye"said pandit after jaimala.
Now my eyes r full of tears then chacha and chachi came on mandap.
Then chacha placed my hands in manik's hand n pour the water
I offer you this most precious gift of my
daughter to take as your own, to
cherish and to protect.plz take care of her" chacha said to Manik.
Manik assure him with his gesture but only my hreats knows he not meant it.
Gadhbandhan ke liye ladke ki bhan aage aye "pandit
said
N mukti came close to us she is not Manik real sister but more than sister she the the members of fab5 Manik best frnd
Gath Bandhan The scarves placed around
the bride and groom are
tied together symbolizing
their eternal bond. This
signifies their pledge before
God to love each other and remain faithful"".pandit said
n mukti tied the knot
But for its not the symbolising our eternal bond it's the symbolizing our marriage deal.
"Ab dulha dulhan ki mang me sindur bhare "pandit said
n gave sindur to manik
""Putting sindoor is not just a ritual,
but signifies a long life for the husband.
a woman has to
adorn sindoor till the time her
husband is alive. . It is
believed that Goddess Parvati not
only protects the husbands of all the
married women who put sindoor, but
also wards off any lurking evil. So,
the next time your wife applies it,
she is indirectly praying for your
long and healthy life.""pandit said
Manik fills sindoor in my maang
I don't know what symbolizing it's on fake marriage but still corner of my hreats want believe this marriage and also believe it that is my destiny my Aiyappa's decided for me. "
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update...
Thanx for pm...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A unique and beautiful story line
Great Going
Keep it up
All the best

Update soon and also pleasePM me for chapter updates :)
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Part - 2
'Vivah sampaan hui ' Pandit said.
Abhi dulhaa dulhan apne se bade ki ashirbaad lelijiye. After taking blessings we goes on stage then guests congrats us.
Now year ki big wedding is happening here so kuch toh dhmaka hona chahiye na so now its Time for celebration our style of I mean The fab 5 style Cabir announced.
Then Mukti and Aaliya start dancing on
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan, chittiyaan kalaiyaan
Cabir and Dhruv dancing on
Dilliwali Girlfriend
Now Navya's performance time she is very excited from long time for this act she dance on
tang tang tang... ho jogiya
tang tang tang... ho jogiya
Jo na karna tha kargi
Main bhi kit jya ke margi
Jo na karna tha kargi
Main bhi kit jya ke margi
Aachi khasi jattni changi
Ghani bawri hogi
Main ghani bawri ho gai...
(Now Mukti Aliya join with her all r enjoying and dancing Navya take me with her)
Roz sabere.. neem andhere..
Ghar se bhaagi me bhagi ghar se thaare waaste
Bina baat ke ke..
Beech raat ke ke..
Neend se jaagi me jaagi neend se thare waaste
Duniya ke bole?.. tu jaan de!
Mhaare dil ki jaan le
Main ghani bawli ho gai...
Jo na karna tha kargi
Main bhi kit jya ke margi
Aachi khasi jattni
Changi ghani bawri hogi re
ghani bawri hogi..
(Now others girls also joins us all guests enjoy it alot.
Cabir and Dhruv dragging Manik with them now trying to push me on Manik.
We r not comfortable it but we act like we r very happy)
Tu kaise chup chup reheve hai
Na kahana na hi kahewe hai
Chal koi na ib tu rehn de
Sabse se lungi inne kehn de
Main ghani bawli bawri.. bawali hogi re
Main ghani bawli bawri.. bawali hogi re
Yahaan wahaan se..
Navya take chachi with her chachi dance with chaha
Now all of fab5 and chacha chachi all my cousin Friends r dancing.
Suddenly music is stop then I saw Navya.
Navya - Baas karo sab abhi bhoot hui sabki dance but aaj jinki kaash day hai abhi unki performance ki time hai
What Manik and me and say unison.
Yes Navya is right all fab4 also take her side now we r helpless. Manik look at Cabir his angry glares.
Now all guests r joining with them Manik look at me he understands I am not comfortable so he tells everyone we r not dancing but I want sang a song only for my Nandini.
My Nandini really. Kaash yeh sach hota.
Then everyone cheers for us.
This is Nandini's favourite song.
Manik start his song
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
[How Manik knows about my favourite song why he sang it.
It's just for making our drama more real or he really mean it. off my head is now full of many questions. Nandini stop thinking just enjoy real or fake it's ur marriage just forget everything and enjoy your favourite song]
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
[Manik sang song looking at me his eyes makes me weak ur favourite Rockstar sang for u what's matter is not real. It's is true I am his big fan from college life one time my only wish is only one meeting with fab5]
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
[Now I remember my first meeting with Manik at my office 2 year back he came their for meet with Cabir. Cabir is my boss. He is one of partner my office. Cabir introduce me with Manik and he gave me his autograph. and we take one selfie. Main kitni kush thi us din]
Sa ni pa di na sa...
Meharbaani jaate jaate mujh pe kar gaya
Guzarta sa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
Tere nazara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Takdeer ki kashtiyon ko, kinara mila
Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri sauhbat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
Tere milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maanu mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tere milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maanu mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
[Then we never talk to each other but when we decided our deal then we talk to each other some private things our like dislike just for we look perfect couple but I never say him my favourite song. For people we r dating from our first meeting but our deal starting from 2 month ago but our first selfie is convenience every one abut our relation.
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi hai marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
He finished his song all clapping. All r thinking I am so much lucky to have him.
It's bidaai time Chacha chachi tanu rishab amms all r so much emotional this time I am also feelings so bad not for bidaai for lies I never thought to tell any lie. Nandini Murthy jo khabhi jhoot ko support nehi karti today I am telling lie all my precious people but only for their happiness.
I didn't know it's my real bidaai or I will back my home very soon.
After bidaai me and Manik sitting in his car. Manik broke the silence between us Nandini as our deal ur Mangalore house property problem is sloved those promoter's not disturbing ur amms. I am also taking India's best doctor for Rishabh his treatment starting very soon. Thanks Manik only one word I found on my mouth.
Don't thanks me Nandini it's our deal this so we r sharing give and take relationship so don't be thankful on me.
Then we r back to our silence zone.
One more thing Nandini I also taking to best nursing home of Mumbai for Tanu. They aurse me Tanu will be fine very soon it's first stage so 60% chance for good. They r searching a donor for bone Marrow Transplant . As my promise I will try my best.
Nandini - I know Manik u will and don't worry for me I am also doing my job perfectly.
Manik - Nandini most important thing never give any clue to any one I mean any of single person to dout us. Ok I hope u understand.
Nandini - Yes I understand I also don't want to share it with anyone. I don't want my family knows this. Manik can I ask one thing?
Manik- u can.
Nandini - how long we do this marriage drama?
Manik- I am also don't know but when my problem is sloved then we figured it out. Then Cabir help us to clear all thing. And I am already tlaking to Cabir u continue ur job when u want.
Nandini - Thanks Manik. I want continue my job from next month.
Manik - Ok

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