MaNan SS : Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Rabtaa [on Hold] note-35 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's an amazing story... I'm loving it... though the start us not soo pleasant but I guess everything will get better... thank uh soo sooo much for the pm... really appreciate it... please continue real soon... will be waiting eagerly for your posts... keep up the wonderful work... best wishes to uh girl... :) :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
yaaa its so awsm uodates..plz do it next part ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
This is a very good update. ..hook up instantly. So he had a sad past. .she'll take care of. ..very nice interesting. ..keep it up. 👏 THANKS.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
aww poor manik
glad nandu is there for him
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Thank you so much all of you for liking it.
Happy Reading...
Chapter - 6
Next Morning!manik woke up first
he then sees he is sleeping in nandini's lap n nandini in
sitting position a smile crept on his lips
he recalls previous night,how aftr meera di someone for the 1st tym aftr so many yrs took care of him he adjusts Nandini on bed n cvrs her with duvet
Manik pov
you are too naive for anyone Nandini so pure bt you dnt knw
how ppl are here i'll not llet you attach to myslf
qki usse tmhe srf dard he milega bt you dnt wry m bahot jldi
tmhe iss fake rltnshp se azzad kr dunga
pov ends
Manik dnt wanna face Nandini aftr previous ngt incident
so he immediately gets ready for office n leaves
Mansion:9:00am
nandini woke up n found herself in duvet, a smile crept on her lips bt she became horrified on nt finding Manik in the
room so she moves downwards bt their also their was ni
sign of Manik
on seeing Nandini ,Nyonika evily smikerked
so my poor daughter in law kissi ko dhund rahi ho abhi srf 3 din hue shaadi ko aur yeh haal h. Kya keh rhi tum
pyar shaadi fighting together
bas 3 din mein sb gayab hahahahaha !!! Bt still maa hoon na ohh maa i m toh nt worthy for this word naa!! Well tmhara so cld pati office chala gya bina tmhe btaye!!!tch tch
tch abhi se yeh haal!!!nyonika laughs evily
nandini dsnt say anything to her rather she dials manik's
numbr bt he dsnt respond
second by second she was becoming restless
aftr lst nyt incident she was horrified what if Manik ne phr
kch esa wsa kia atlast she calls cabir and narrates him whole lst night
incident cabir assures him ki he will take care of him
Cabir house
cabir calls Alya n Mukti n narrates them evrything and asks
them to be with her till evening
Cabir pov:
so I was right Nandini cares for him any how i have make
them one bt firstly i have to see manik
At malhotra office:
Cabir enters in Manik's cabin,and bursts out
Cabir :what the he
ll is wrong with you Manik !! How can you be so careless!!!
Manik:tu kya keh raha hai yaar mere kuch samaj nahi aa
raha
Cabir : tu nandini ko bina btaye office aa gya woh bhi usse
akela uss Nyonika ke sath chor ke! 3 din hue h sirf shaadi
ko aur ek bhi usne shanti se guzara
buddy she is not use to all these things!you have to be with
her always
cabir spits the beans out!!!
Manik: ohh freak! How can i be so selfish so careless!!!! M
abhi jata hoon!
cabir: nahi tu rehen de! Maine mukti aur aliya ko bhej diya
hai
Manik : dnt worry yr Cabir m jld se jld inn sbse usse azaad
kar dunga
i dnt want her to get attach with me!! Qki usse srf usse
dukh he milega
Cabir : that means you are already attached to her(winks)
Manik : cabirrr!!!! Shut up
Cabir :ok ok hulk!! Chill m chlta hoon!!
cabir lefts manik's cabin
meanwhile in malhotra mansion
mukti and aliya were accompanying nandini bt she was
least present their mtlb she was physically
present their bt mentally she was engrossed in manik's
thought
In car cabir:
i knw manik you have feelings for her and vice versa
n i'll make sure ki tm log jldi realize kro
In evening mukti and aliya leaves!!
meanwhile in Harshad's house
Harshad : look who is here mrs.M
kal toh aapne mujhe apne ghar se nikaal diya tha aur aaj khud ayi hai
Nyo :ohh shut up harshad!! First tell me kl tum mere ghar q aye the.
Harshad : I just came to see the new
bride oops the hot chick n smiles evily Nyonika : ohh that
commoner!! Jld se jld hme usse ghar se nikalna hoga
Harshad : chill mrs M jb meera raste se hatt gyi manik bhi ni ata hmare beech toh yeh commoner kya cheez h
Nyonika :its not easy Harshad !!! Their bond is so strong!!
Harshad : dont worry mrs M jb meera ko theekane lga diya toh iska bhi intezaam ho jaega
Nyonika : ohh ya meera n her
daughterchahahahaha jo usse ni pta lgna chahiye tha woh
pta lg gya n bechari... Laughs evily
Harshad : upar chali
gyi!!! Hahahaha
both laughs out loud
Lekin usse pehle mrs M thode bahot maze toh lunga main
uss hot chic se
Nyonika :ohh Harshad !! You n ur mind...do whatever you
want bt i want her out from my life!!!
Harshad : mrs M leave
them lets continue with ours
n they started with their making out
10:30pm malhotra mansion
Nandini was waiting for manik n while waiting she slepts
their by her head on table manik enters mansion and saw
nandini waiting for him, he smiles
manik moves upstairs n freshenup
he comes down n wakes up nandu
nandu: arre aap aa gye m abhi khana garam krk lati hoon
they both soon finishes their dinner without speaking
but manik was so much happy because after so many years
someone was waiting for him for the dinner they both enters
their room
Nandini: main couch pe so jati hoon aap bed pe so jayiye
Manik:ni m couch pe sounga tum bed pe so
nandini: bt aap itte chotu couch pe fit kse honge
manik:m so jaunga tum bed pe so jao
nandini: ek kaam krte hai dono bed pe so jate hai
manik: lekin
nandini cuts him in middle
I TRUST YOU MANIK
nandini lays on left side and manik on right side
manik: m sorry nandini!! Kal raat ke liye
nandini: its ok manik!! M smj skti hoon hmdono naa toh
husband wife h naa he frns h toh aap mujhe q btayenge
manik got hurts with these words
sahi toh keh rhi hai yeh but why m feeling so loww!!! His
thoughts were broken by her sobs nandini was crying n
manik gets worried
Manik : what hpnd nandini why are you crying
Nandini : i knw hum log ek dusre ke kuch ni h bt i really care
for you!! Please m apke aage hath jodhti hoon aage se esa
kuch mat kariyega
Manik : m sorry nandini!! I knw you are
not used to it and m aage se soch smj ke react krunga
nandini gets angery: so mr malhotra likes to fgt soch smj ke
react krnge huh!! She says dramtically she then makes a
angry pout and moves towards balcony
manik didnt knw what to do coz for the first time
someone's tears matters to him n all these things are new
for him so he msgs cabir
cabir: omg manik malhotra is worried for someone's tears
that too a gal (winks) all the best bro
stat your manaofy session
so guys here the next part
so think how manik will manaofy his wife
what are those things jo meera ko pta lg gyi
what harshad is upto
what cabir will do nxt
Next morning is gonna bring something for nandini
is it good or bad
n i knw you all might be thing abt that chot of nandini
so wait for that also
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Awww thank
you for
updating dear😛😛😛
it's ausom
Wow both
Have feelings
for each other
Now am waiting
What kind of
Twist is coming
And again thanks for Updating
Now update regularly
and next part asap
Eagerly waiting
Love
Diya😛😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Loved it
Waiting
Update soon!!!!
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
nce update
both r having felings for them
wh cabir is gng to make them one
jrks hrshad n nyo
waitng for further updates
hw manik is gng to console his wife
wt is gng to happen in nandu life
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
wow its nice
pm me
love it
continue soon

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