MaNan SS : Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Rabtaa [on Hold] note-35 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter - 5
Malhotra Mansion:
Jst shut up harshad!!! Get out of my house right now!!!
Manik said to harshad angrily
his eyes were shot red past memomries strts haunting him relas brother in law its not only your house its Meera's house too and moreover let me tell your pretty wife abt her
so called sasuraal harshad said evily
Manik : stp it harshad jst go away or else u knw me
Harshad : tch tch tch Manik !!! Take it easy yaar usse bhi toh sacchai pta lgni... Manik grabs his collar n punches him Nandini is shocked from all these things she had nvr seen this side of Manik ystrdy fab4 handled him bt today his anger is on cloud 10 tears starting welding up in her eyes meanwhile Nyonika comes there!!!
Nyo : both of you stop it!!!!! I dnt want any type of mess in my house nandini take manik away rgt now she shouts whch scares nandini she shivers bt compose herserlf immediately and Harshad you also go to your
house!!!!nyo says n smiles evilly

Nandini holds Manik's hand bt he jerks her hand so harshly that her bangles pierces her wrist and bloods starts oozing manik moves towards bar n grabs a bottle n move out from
Mansion Outside malhotra mansion
rain starts as if god is also crying on the fate of this
innocent soul (yes guys manik is vry innocent bt the situation has made him this when we strtd living dual lyf hme khud ni pta hta same goes with manik too) he bend down on his knees n strts crying vry loudly

Chalni kar de seena mera
Chalni kar de seena mera
Chalni kar de seena mera
Daag saari goliyan ni ajj mera jee karda
Marjaneya ni aaj mera jee karda
Marjaneya ni mera jee karda
Marjaneya ni aaj mera jee karda

He gulps down whole bottle n shouts loudly
whyyy!!! Q sab mujhe chor k chale jate h!!! Q

[Mushqil kar de jeena mera
Mushqil kar de jeena mera
Mushqil kar de jeena mera
Hanste hanste mit jaaneya ni mera jee karda
Marjaneya ni ajj mera jee karda
Marjaneya ni mera jee karda
Marjaneya ni ajj mera jee karda]

manik starts remembering his childhood
when Nyonika and his dad were fighting ovr something n aftr that his lft n nvr came back
then he remembers how on evry functin of school his misses them vry mch coz none of his parent were nvr prsnt for him while other students come along their parents
the only thing whch kept him alive was his meera di n dadi for both of them he was star of their eye his dadi use to pamper him a lot she use to tell him nightmare stories bt due to her sudden fall of health she
died bt then her meera di nt di bt his Meera maa

[ Rabba mere, mujhe ghar pe tere
kadi bula teri chaukhat pe
De de aur jo dard ho baaqi
Rula mujhe rajj rajj ke aaj mera jee karda]


Meera Maa jsne usse itta bda kiya
he lvs her vry mch
he strts remembring her wrds
Manik dnt bully others
manik why did you fight with dhruv and cabir
wow manik this song is awsommm
q meera di q aapne mujhe US bheja
aaj sb sahi hota lkn...

[ Ki ajj mera jee karda
Ki ajj mera jee karda, jee karda, jee karda
Ho.. ik waari deedar ko tere
Ik waari deedar ko tere
Ik waari deedar ko tere
Lakh waari katt jaaniya ni ajj mera jee karda
Marjaneya ni ajj mera ji karda
Marjaneya ni mera ji karda
Marjaneya ni ajj mera ji karda]

Flashback
(manik comes to know that meera loves Harshad. He nvr liked harshad
Meera : Manik i love him
Harshad : manik i knw you hate me bt trust me i love her alot
Manik was speechless coz his sister happiness lies him
Harshad so unwillingly he accpts dt thing aftr that Harshad and Meera got married
n Maniik for her sister's happiness ready to apologise n accpts Harshad it was one day b4 rakhi Manik was vry happy coz fab4 has rockd a concert n for the frst tym Manik was gng to buy a gft for Meera {frst tym
isliye coz Meera has nvr taken a gft qki woh manik se bdi hti h} bt this time he buys a gft
he enters Malhotra Mansion n straight away went to
Nyonika's room for tomorrow rakhi grand celebratim bt
what he saw was enough to boil his blood
nyonika n harshad were making out
uske paaron talen zameen seesakh jati hai
Nyonika : manik what are you doing here!! Switch off the lgts
n get out


Manik comes to his n create a whole mess of his room suddenly he strts crying
Di mujhe pta tha yeh Harshad accha ni h lkn apki khushi k liye maine usse accpt kia
kse btaunga m apko yeh sach
meri khud ki maa chiii
n while crying his drifts into sleep

[ Le loon balaayein, balaayein teri
De doon duaayein, duaayein...
Le ja, le ja tu abki baari
Saansein ab hain haari...
Ki aaj mera jee karda
Marjaneya ni ajj mera jee karda
Marjaneya ni mera jee karda
Marjaneya ni ajj mera jee karda]


nxt morning
manik goes to Meera's house
as soon as he sees Harshad , he grabs his collar Harshad was going to slap him
bt meera comes in btw n stps both of them
harshad makes another story while manik he was not able to react due to this fiasco
meera faints n the nxt things was another shock for him Meera was pregnant
Meera writes a letter to Manik in whch
{Manik tmhe mri kasam tu USA chala jaa yaha tra koi future
ni h aur m tre khne pe Harshad ko toh chor skti hoon par
apne bacche ke pita ko ni})

[ Chhalni karde seena mera
Mushqil karde jeena mera
Chalni kar de seena mera...
Hmm... hmm...]

meanwhile it was 2 hrs now Manik has lft the mansion n
Nandini was getting restless
she comes out of the mansion n what she saw nxt was enough to stop blood pumping in her veins Manik was sitting on his kness fully drenched
Nandini goes
towards him n places her hand on his shoulder he looks up n nxt moment he hugs her by her waist n strts
sobbing Nandini was somehow controllinh his tears coz this time she has to be strong she also bends down n wipes his
tears
Nandini : Manik pls ghar chaliye
Manik : Nandini Harshad jhuth bol rha tha mri Meera di esi ni h
woh toh Nyonika aur Harshad ...
he suddenly stops bt agn speaks
tum mri baat mano plss
Nandini understoods ki something is wrng bt dsnt asks
anything Nandini : Manik i trust you
n that was it for Manik
he hugs her so tightly ki nandini got hurt bt dsnt speak nything andar chaliye Manik ,!!! Nandini pleads
n both moves inside
as they came inside nandini gvs manik his tracks n askd
him to change aftr changing Nandini was sitting on bed
when Manik lies on bed n keeps his head in Nandini lap
Manik : Nandini sb mujhe chor k chale jaate h tm ni jaoge na
kbhi pta h Nyonika woh kbhi mri maa bn he ni payi n he
snifs Nandini : m apko kbhi ni chor k jaungi Manik
kbhi bi ni!nandini promse

slowly slowly bth drifted to sleep manik in nandini's lap n
nandini in sitting postion while her head on headboard
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
awesome update
manik is in too bad state
cant see himlike tht
bt nandu was there for i to cure his pain
lovely update
tht erk n nyo gng to have bad to bad conditions
continue soon
stay blessed
keep loving
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
awesome update
too good
emotional too
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
oh god now harshad also joined here
please do continue
loved it
bye sumi

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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Awww very nice
Update
Buddy
It's ausom
Yaar the it
Represents
I can feel
that pain
Please regular
Update karna
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Love
Diya😛😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Loved it
Waiting
Please update soon
Thanks for pm!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Read all parts in a go...heart touching... Plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Update soon
ths ws so emotional yet beautifully penned
Knight99 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Loved it
Waiting for update
Thanks for pm
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
i just hate these harshad-nyonika duo yrr...how can they fall so low😡😡
i hope manik remembers everything when he getsup in the morning😊
update soon dear
tc😊

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