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Posted: 10 years ago
Very Emotional Update๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
I hope nandu will be fine
Varna manik ka kya hoga?
I read your story
And i like it
You are very good writer dear๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Keep writing
Update soon
take care dear๐Ÿ˜Š



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Posted: 10 years ago
An emotional update๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Firstly Manik shutting Alya up๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
2ndly the accident๐Ÿ˜ญ
The emotions of Manik
And the song
Perfect
Loved it
Uodate soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
sry for being late...
really lyked it...being a new reader but still feels that i m connected with it frm so long...u r too gud...luved it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
i don't know what to say
i only say that u have amazing writing skill
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Posted: 10 years ago
nandini in hospital??hope she s alright

hope abhi n manik become frnds

hope fab 5 be back
if not nandini will be blaming herself
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plzzz update soon I can't wait more๐Ÿ˜ฒ. Ur story is very amazing continue soon as fast as u can.๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago

hola guys am back with the next update loved your comments on the previous one. hope you like this one too. one little addition stop saying don't separate MaNan as i won't i know what i have to write so be patient and enjoy ...

silent readers are as usual silent so its a waste talking to them so i have come with a solution those who will comment they will get PMs others won't and this is final no changes. update dedicated to my loyal readers and commenters

enjoy and comments awaited


Part 41

"pain is what makes you strong it heals you from inside it gives you courage to fight but what if hen you see your loved on in pain and the soul reason is you how will that make you feel"

Manik was so helpless he never thought this could happen with him the girl he loved was lying inside and he can't even do anything he was totally drowned like someone took his soul away cabir, mukti, Dhruv, alya stood there seeing manik. abhi who was totally shocked to see his best friend in this condition came towards main hold his hand and jerked him towards him "what han...what have you done did you see her? You are manik Malhotra whom she loved and today she is in this hospital because of you? She was sad since two days she was worried my lady... my nandini?" Abhi choked "she is my best friend I came here just for her and in two days she is here I was here to see her smiling face an you took it away from me?" he looked at fab4 "you and your friends I can't believe this girl she accused her of her parents and you were holding her hands. nandini's parents have you any idea what have you done to my girl you broke her manik Malhotra the singing sensation and you did this" abhi was talking an talking but manik didn't even responded how can he when his heart was dead his mind was not working he stood there as a statue "abhimanyu please calm down can't you see his condition" said cabir coming an holding manik abhi moved away "manik.." cabir called him Dhruv who was standing a bit far came ahead "buddy..." he patted his shoulders manik came into his senses hearing dhruv's name "Stay away from me" shouted manik and dhruv looked at him "manik" said cabir stepping forward "cabir tell him to stay away i don't want to see his face" and then looked at alya who was standing at side and weeping "waoo so you are crying for what that nandini might be alive after such major accident you always wanted this na" she looked at manik "manik please i ma sorry i never wanted this i know i have harmed her but this was never my intention your friendship really is important to me and i don't want to lose it am really sorry" "wow friendship alya you really believe after all this i want to even talk to you or see you face u are only here because you are part of fab5 that's it keep far far away from me and Nandini" " manik bs kr yar hospital hai" said mukti manik looked at her and then turned to see the OT door it was still closed and the red light was on his heart sank he was hell worried when he saw Chacha Chachi and Rishab coming and realized they are here for Nandini he didn't even informed them. "Abhi nandini how is my nandu?" Asked Chachi running to him he gestured that she is in the OT chacha and chachi heart was totally drenched in pain seeing there girl in like this Rishab seeing manik ran to him and hugged him he was crying manik started weeping more when he asked about Nandini in his sign language "buddy yu are a big boy na big boys don't cry nandini will be fine trust me" he nodded and hugged him. Chachi seeing manik came to him and saw his shirt in blood "manik yeh" manik looked at his shirt then at the door and he was weeping to hard "manik calm down kuch nhn hoga usko dekhna nothing will happen" "hona bhe nhn chahye Manik Malhotra" a voice came from behind everyone turned to see it was Jia standing she slowly came forward and stood in front of manik "Nandini told me you were not talking to her you were ignoring her i told her to go and talk to you an here i hear she is in an accident and now in this condition what did you do manik? she shouted manik was helpless kia btata vo galti uski tu thi why he did all this he thought he will protect her but where it bought all of them no one would have ever thought about it and him never how can he harm nandini she was his life "Jia... vo...main..." he couldn't speak words got lost when abhi stepped in and told Jia everything she was shocked she looked back at manik but he was gone everyone looked everywhere but manik was nowhere...

time passed it felt every sec is like centuries after 12hours of long surgery the doctors stepped our everyone ran to ask them but doctor khurana asked about manik cabir tired calling him but no luck everyone did but manik was unreachable now worry was increasing where is he when they saw him coming he was not in a good state like he has been crying alot and they saw Mary walked beside him as his eyes fell on the doctor he came running to running to him "dr khurana how is she?" "Manik relax calm down i haven't told anyone yet was waiting for you" "tu doctor manik is here now tell us how is she" asked jia manik with a little hope that she is okay now looked at the doctor "manik look you have to be strong you all have to be" "doctor stop this round round talks tell me" shouted manik in frustration and cabir took hold of him making him calm "the surgery was tough to much blood was lost we tried or level best but the injuries were to deep her brain skull was damaged she slipped into coma while in the surgery and..." manik was startled he fell back only the word he could hear was "COMA" his heart stopped beating he sank on the chair his nandini his life how can this happen the the doctors kept talking but manik was not listening anything only the word in his mind were coma ...

"manik look at me" shouted cabir he looked at him "cabir...vo...Coma" "manik she is fine she is okay doctor said she gained consciousness after she slipped in coma she is fine she is better" manik looked at him in disbelief she is okay?" "Yes she is" manik nodded again to ask him and he nodded to tell him that yes your nandini is fine manik got up "doctor she is fine right nothing major" "no manik she is fine she is in ICU still we are keeping a check on her head injury because we have to see when she gains consciousness then how she behaves as injury was too deep" "sure doc anything but you sure na it's nothing major" he smiled "no manik its not ab tum mujhe choro ga tu main uska checkup kro ga na" everyone smiled hearing the doctor "one last question can i see her" he smiled again "not right now but in some time i will tell you young man now let me go" he nodded and let go of him "btw manik" he turned and called him back "change this shirt vrna mere hospital vale kahen tumhra operation na kar dne" and laughed manik was so relieved that she is fine jia and chachi stepped towards him and hugged and said sorry to him jia said "i knew you won't harm my little girl and you didn't thanks manik" "it's okay jia ap mere side late raho ase he tu paka I will let nothing happen to her" jia smiled "acha now go change ase rahe i won't let you meet her manik shook his head "abhi aya " and ran from there mary who was standing near the little holy place in the hospital pray to lord Jesus when manik saw her he ran towards her "she is fine Aunt Mary she is okay" manik shouted hugging her she was so happy with the news "thank god lord Jesus listened my wish she is fine now and your smile is also back" "okay right now no talking i have to go change she will wake anytime and i want to be at her side so let's go home" she nodded and they left for home but manik called cabir and told him to inform about if anything happens...

Manik was all ready to go when cabir told him she is now shifted to a room and is doing better manik was so happy when an idea struck his mind he quickly called someone and then smiled...he was so happy his love is finally getting better and when she will open her eyes that will be the best part manik happiness will be on cloud 9.. He told Mary he is going to the hospital and she blessed him also to keep her informed about Nandini...

Manik reached the hospital and saw the van standing there means the stuff he asked as arrived he asked them to follow him he called cabir to come at the entrance "Oh My God what is all this manik?" "This is for Nandini i want her to open her eyes in all this" cabir looked at him "tu waqai pagal hai " "i know ab chal" they walked in and saw everyone standing manik gestured asked jia, Chacha and chachi to go in the nodded in a yes he took a deep breath nd stepped in the sight in front of him was enough to make him cry she was all wrapped up in bandages and wires he slowly walked towards her and in a scared way touched her arm like she is a doll and if he touches her she will break... tears started flowing yet again he kissed her hand, forehead, eyes, cheeks, and dropped a small peck on her lips "precious am here nothing will happen to you" he was looking at her and crying he slowly wiped his tears and moved out and call the people in within few mins her room texture was fully transformed into a beautiful room the walls were decorated with different roses, lilies and orchids different bouquets of flowers were placed everywhere on the right side of the bed a pink wall hanging was placed where precious was written in glitters ,the couch was filled with different teddy bears and the celling of her room was filled with different fireflies jars and stars hanging around Manik smiled "my precious you will wake up in heaven for sure"

Everyone who was outside were thinking what is manik doing inside since so long they wanted to walk in but cabir stopped them that let him do what he is doing. Manik was restless he was checking her again and again that is she awake or not when he heard a cough he turned to see it was her she was waking up he rushed out "guys she is waking up call the doctor" everyone rushed in but got stuck on the door seeing the look they were totally lost as if they entered into heaven "Nandini" manik called her she was trying hard to speak "ma...maa...n...ik" he smiled fully "yes yes am here precious open your eyes" she started Coughing manik looked around for water when the doctor stepped in "doc see she is awake" but how can he see as he was lost like others admiring the room...


"she is alive, she is fine, she is recovering all the words surrounded him love really changes you from being arrogant to loving and caring but does your one mistake really doesn't make any effect after all what happened"


ignore errors if any ...

P.s You want update of "Mr Malhotra will see you" now today so comment and tell


That's all for now


love Sehr:)

Edited by sehrmemon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing update
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was really amazing.
Penned it very well ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for pm!
So finally nandu is fine
Now waiting for her reaction towards manik
N pls update Mr.malhotra hahe

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