When Arrogant Meets Smart-MaNan FF thread 2 link page 140

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hello guys ...Am here with a new MaNan story its my first time that i have written a story all cx of MaNan ..its a different version from the show i hope u guys like it an appreciate it ,,here is the prologue ..do share your views ...as many views an reviews will encourage me to write more...do leave your comments about it :)

Prologue


Manik Malhotra the guy of dreams, he is smart, dashing, yet arrogant he never take others above him always think that everyone should listen to him... He has nothing in life yet he has everything. ...which are his friends whom he loves more than anything an can give anything for them and his music ...his life... music is the one thing that calms him down... gives him happiness...Yet sometimes he is alone cx the one thing that he needs is family love which he never had nor got ... What will happen when Mr Arrogant will meet someone totally opposite to him? Will he be able to make her listen to him also or she will change his life. ..

Nandini Murthy the girl who's one smile makes u feel that you never were sad in life...she makes u feel perfect cx she is one... a bubbly girl with a golden heart. for her everything is extreme when she loves someone she loves like crazy but when she hates someone no one can change that view...she lives in dreams yet knows what is reality...she is one of a kind...What will happen when this smart, bubbly Nandini will meet Mr Arrogant will he be the one for her? Will he change her or she will give him a lesson never to forget n change him...?

Both of them have a different life ,,come from different worlds ..One is from Mumbai belongs to a rich, powerful family for whom emotions are nothing. Other is from a simple town of Mangalore where hearts matter more than money. ..how will there life shape up when they meet each other in Space Academy one of the prospectus music institution where life begins, everyone's dream college.

Let's start the journey of love, hatred n passion which i hope will be happening for u all

Do share your views about the prologue

Love


Sehr :)


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Sanskruti164 thumbnail
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Wow
Awesome love it
Continue soon
Pm me plz
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I like the prologue!
Waiting for the update!
Please PM me :)
Love, Pari :)
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Awesome prologue dea. ...
Loved it
Continue soonnn
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hey, loved the prologue... totally Manan!!
Liked it the way you wrote it so well ( no abrev, well described, intriging...)
So waiting for the first chapter. 😊
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thankyou for the appreciation ..your comments really give me hope an boosts me up to write more so keep commenting ,,,here is the first update for u guys hope u guys like it...

P.S: those who want PMs buddy me

Its 6am of a Sunday morning in Mangalore the dusk is spreading creating a beautiful atmosphere with slow cold wind flowing around an there is a girl wearing a pink jump suit walking across a beautiful lake she seems to be in herself only putting her headphones on an listening to music ...she was a beauty a fairy landed from heaven in this world. ...when the cold breeze touched her cheeks a smile creeped on her pink lips...she was a painter's dream to paint...a poet inspiration. ..

She stood by the lake took her arms up high n welcomed the sun ...the rays of sun touched her face an she smiled took the fresh air breath inn an opened her gorgeous blue eyes ,,,she kept staring at the beautiful scenery n then moved towards her home...

In the middle of a beautiful mountains n trees stood a house small yet beautiful. ..a garden full of all the flowers that a person loves ...an aura spreads around telling that this is what heaven is ...on the side of the lawn was a swing covered with flowers n bells ... as the house was beauty outside it was no less inside...this was the home of Nandini Murthy ...she lived with her little brother n her Ams or say her grandmother the people she loved the most after her parents died ...as she entered the house she saw hustle going on everywhere her Ams was packing stuff an her brother Rishab was helping her n servants were running ere n there...

Tomorrow was the day Nandini Murthy was moving to Mumbai city of dreams ...she always wanted to be a musician as her Ams is one ...for her music is peace, love, happiness so she took admission in Space Academy a college where dreams become reality... Am home shouted Nandini as she entered the house...servant bought a glass of juice for her she smiled n took it an said to Ams why she treats her like a princess she can make juice for herself ...Ams just smiled...Nandini sat on the near sofa an took the newspaper kept on the table an started reading it..she was not only a fab musician but was an excellent student in academics too just as her father who was a scientist..She was bright an vigilant with a combination of sootiness an purity which was the soul of her music which she got from her mother. She is moving to a new phase of life where her Ams is there to support her always...

On the other side of the world in London at 3am in a disc music was rock high...the atmosphere was intense people were dancing like crazy an in the middle of it stood Manik Malhotra dancing with his group of friends his every move was sensational every gal was ogling on him...one guy dancing right beside him told something in Manik's ear he gave a smirk ...n moved towards the counter an his friends followed him.. stood with him 2 girls an 2 guys... all dressed to kill...gals were hot n ****y n boys were too handsome to define ..

One guy wearing blue denim with white tee messy hair was Dhruv ..Manik's buddy.. he was Manik's life he protected Dhruv as a brother cx Dhruv was a bit quite one yet with Manik he was a open book...

With him stood Cabir or say Cabira which is the name Manik uses to call him cx he is the master of mischievous ...where he is fun awaited...he is funny an a charmer yet he is pure by heart...

The girls every guy wants but they think those guys are not meant for them with Manik stood Mukti she was one mystery no one can think of what she had in mind she was one book which could only be decoded by her friends...she came from a troubled family but her friends were everything to her...

An last but not the least stood with Mukti was Alya ...A fashion Diva ..she thinks she is the most beautiful one n only give importance to herself n her friends obvious. ..she likes Manik but for him she is just a friend...

Life bought these 5 people closer when they all were lonely n troubled an they became FAB5 ...the band of music ...the friends for life..

today in London they were celebrating the success of one of their concerts...party was going in full swing when Manik received a call from someone he didn't wanted to talk but had no choice that was his mother Neyonika Malhotra. ..she was not a mother Manik wanted she was one person who gave Manik everything then took it the other sec ...for her relationships were give n take only. ...Manik attended the phone. ."What do u want Neyonika at this hour?" "Manik do u even know what time is it an u r in a disc partying ur concert ended hours ago u should be on a flight back to Mumbai that was the deal u know right"...Neyonika shouted ... Manik took the phone away from his ears hearing her shout. .,"Manik r u even listening to me" exclaimed Neyonika. .."Yes i heard u Maam but i guess u have forgotten that i party after every concert so why is it a shock to u... go to ur office women i will reach home as per the deal which is tomorrow night bbyyee Neyonika"... Manik smirked as he hung up the phone on shouting Neyonika an moved towards his friends...

"What happened Manik who was it?" Asked Cabir... "Who else yar Neyonika as usual making my life hell" said Manik... "She wants us back home" continued Manik..."So what bro chill we will go but tonight is the night to party so let's enjoy" told Dhruv to cheer Manik up ...an it worked Manik smiled..."Btw Manik ere are so many girls looking at u for just one dance an u are not even giving them a chance not fair yar" said Mukti distracting Manik from Neyonika ...Manik laughed hearing this... Cabir continued "Yes Manik we are friends for so long u never had a Girlfriend an here all the girls are begging u to be with them" ...Manik looked at them an said "These gals are fun u can enjoy with them dance party that's it ...an girlfriends my friend Cabira r for u not for me I hate to be in a relationship nor ever want too...there is no such girl for me who makes me be with her"... an winked at his friends all this while Alya stood there listening to Manik's point of View..."Come on guys now let's move towards the dance floor" said Alya... They all partied the night n then retired to their rooms to rest as they have a long day ahead...

Manik never had a girlfriend...he didn't believe in love... so will Miss Murthy change his point of view? She was all set to move to Mumbai an there Manik was about to take a flight back home... will they meet on the airport? How will be there first meet? To find out wait for the next update...

Do share your views..

Love Sehr:)

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I loved the description of Nandini and her family in Mangalore!
And Manik's too. I hope Aliya is positive!
And Manik doesn't believe in love? Well, he hasn't met Nandini yet 😆
Can't wait to see their first meeting!
Overall, awesome update!
Do continue soon.
Thanks for the PM :)
Love, Pari :)
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Great update loved every bit of it.
Keep up the good work :)

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Plz update soon I can't wait
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part 2

The day started with the news of Nandini n Rishab moving to Mumbai. ..Ams gave them her blessings n told Nandini to make her proud an also to take care of Rishab ...Nandini was moving to her Chacha n Chachi who were like her parents she use to live with them in summer holidays... Mumbai was like a second home for her yet moving there was a different thing n she was excited...

On the other side in london Manik was sleeping in his comfortable bed unaware of the fact tht his flight is in the next hour...he was in his dreams when he heard a loud knock at the door someone was banging the door ..Manik got irritated an shouted "who the hell is it""Do u even know Manik its only an hour left for our flight get up" shouted Cabir ...Manik woke up at the instant listening it "ohh God am late...Cabira 2min" shouted Manik an went to get ready...this is Manik always Late...

Everyone was waiting for Manik n he came like they still have hours to leave..."let's go guys" said Manik...an looked at everyone who were giving him loud angry glares. .."What guys stop staring now u guys are making late lets go" said Manik. ..everyone without arguing left cx talking to Manik will be a waste of time...

Mumbai welcomed Nandinu Murthy with open arms she took a breath of fresh Air as she stepped out of plane...the smile she had n the twinkling in her eyes showed how excited she was... collecting her luggage she moved with Rishab towards the exit lounge to wait for her Chacha n Chachi when she got a message telling her that they are on there way but will be a bit late due to traffic. she was sitting n waiting for them whe Rishab must be hungry as he haven't eaten anything since the flight "Rishu u want something r u hungry" asked Nandini. ..Rishab couldn't speak since he was young after the accident which took away her parents...he through his expressions said yes...she told him to stay put she will get something for him n moved towards the cafeteria. ...

Meanwhile the flight from London also landed an down came fab5 the aura that was formed as the came was wonderful as if a bunch of high class musicians are coming after their tour ..."yar i want a coffee didn't had anything an u know the coffee in flights is really not upto the mark i want a Starbucks " said Manik with n irritating tune as they collected there luggage ..."no way we are going home have coffee in ur mansion an we all are hell tired Manik" said Mukti..."mukti let him have one just see his face the anger shows if he didn't he will kill all of us with his glares"said Alya...and Dhruv n Cabir smiled and in union said "yes"...Manik looked at them with irritation an told them to wait at the exit he will be back...

At the cafeteria Nandini ordered her self cold coffee n a sandwich for Rishab. ..as she was moving after taking her order someone called her from behind she turned around to see who it was. ..the waiter came towards her handing her the change she forgot to take she smiled n said thanks an turned back to move towards the lounge...some one hit her on her shoulder making her fall an moved towards the counter. ...Nandini tried to balance her self from falling but the coffee n sandwich fell from her hand an spread around the floor making her hell angry she turned around to c who it was but couldn't see as he was facing the counter only she saw his black Jacket where 5 was written . ...as she walked towards him to scold him some people came an she couldn't see him she was very irritated an suddenly she saw him taking a cup of coffee n moving towards the exit lounge...she walked beside him an hit him making him trip n his coffee fell down..."What the hell..." as he turned to see who it was he saw a girl wearing a yellow top with jeans long hair covering her face which couldn't tell who she was ..."when people don't see this is what happens" said Nandini...showing a thumbs down sign n smiled...she had one beautiful smile making any one to fall for her... Manik was in her trance when realised she is walking away n got the idea what really happened "hey u listen what did U just said..." but before he could complete it was too late she move away only he could c her bracelet on her right arm alphabet "N"was hanging through it..."who the hell was she n why she said that i didn't see n walk". ...he was thinking when some one tapped on his shoulder ..."Manik where r u we are waiting since so long?" Said Cabir .. "nothing lets go" said confused Manik n they moved towards fab5 to leave for home...

On the other hand Nandini was happy to meet her Chacha n Chachi n proceeded towards her home...

As both the cars moved towards there respected houses far away someone was sitting an writing a story of a girl an a boy who will give a new definition to love, who will not only be together but will fight all the hurdles n in the end love will conquer it self...

Manik An Nandini left just to meet again...will they come face to face? Excited... even i am...

Do share your views


Love


Sehr :)

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