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ishu92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Woooh... I literally crying yar. Very nice update. Waiting eagerly for next

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AsthaVerma92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#312

Omg our nandini yaar she is so unwell so critical bichara manik...

Update new part soon

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Apurva

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Posted: 10 years ago

#313

Amazing update dear

Loved the way uh penned everyones emotions so perfectly and beautifully

I wonder how nandu inspite of going thru all this took his name...??

But i guess thats what the true meaning of love they. Share...

Ur last few updates have almost bought a flood in my house... Soo many tears... :'(

But camt deny that they were awesome as usual

Uh nailed it again dear...

But i hope she is fine soon...

Wll b waitin for the next part

Cont soon dear...

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suraiya77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#314

Plz don't let nandu happen anything
save her!

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Amazing! I read the last two chapters now and I was amazed by the way you have described their emotions! You are truly an amazing writer! Please update soon!😃

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

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Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Emotional.. U penned it so beautifully.. Nandini in coma !! Which i didnt expected.. Nywy going good..

LOVE YA

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#317

Wow great and emotional update

loved it hope nandu recovers soon...

update soon

keep up the good work :)

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Teja

@himateja249

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Posted: 10 years ago

#318

Awesome update.👏👏

U penned it down beautifully.👍🏼

Continue soon😊

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beautifulchaos

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Posted: 10 years ago

#319

Hi there!!

Comparatively new to the Forum... Stumbled upon your story and i am hooked...

Amazing update.. the ff has really gained the tempo in the last three chapters..

I was actually not very happy with Nandini responding to Manik's touches and advances.However, I was jappy when Nandini blasted him off... But he is incorrigible ain't he??.. Don't they say be careful what you wish for!! He cursed her and he got it..

I still don't have in my heart for Nandini to forgive Manik. After all he has done and said all he deserved from Nandini is indifference -- not even hatred or anger for the way he had treated the innocence soul.

I know they are fated and eventually meant to be together... However please make Manik repent profusely and win her back after a proper retribution... Love can not be restored on the ground of annihilated self respect-- Nandini's self respect that Manik trampled under his proud feet..

Update soon...Shall look forward to read more of your work..

Edited by bitasta - 10 years ago