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parthadmirer

@parthadmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

First sorry dear m late in commenting...

but your story m totally addicted towards it..

so chapter 59...

wooo awesome...

manik getting jealous of abhimanyu...😆

he tried reasoning his jealousy many times like saying how could abhi can smile with nandini as she is the employee...

but he failed evrytime by DJ...😆

he is missing nandini a lot but because of his ego he is not admitting it...ufff manik is manik...

but last sixer was awesome ...

dhruv acting as hurt and new lead with nandini is abhi...

wow manik to gaya...

very nice dear...👏

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Woww...beautiful update...
The way u r expressing their emotions r commendable.
Keep it up.
Loved it a alot.
Update soon.
Love...mini

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Princessud

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Wowww superb web 'll manik realise ""plzz update next part plz tysm fr such a wonderful swt story 😉👏👏

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parthadmirer

@parthadmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Chapter 60..

wow amazing again..

its fum to see manik jealous and in jealousy the things he do its just awesome...

manik and mukti are both pissed off seeing nandini and abhi...

one side manik went to DJ to get his answers as to why she chose abhi..

DJ playing smart.. gives the reason and leave baffled manik behind..😆

on the other hand cabir pulling mukti leg and she finding it difficult to handle..😆

so manik is again ready with his new plan to keep nandini near him.. party...

but abhi answer to the play was mind blowing...

both manik and mukti were burning of jealousy and dhruv and cabir ROFL...😆

and yess manik scolding dhruv that he cant take care of himself...😆

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parthadmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Chapter 61..mind blowing update...

manik rehearsing for play and was not able to concentrate looking at nandini..😆

nandini for a while was holding herself but then broke down ...

but was there to console her and encourage to fight wfor her self respect...👏

nandini knows manik so well that his friends even dont know..

cabir also realized the same thing..

soon manik will too realize...

manik could not see the pain and tears in nandini eyes thats why he went back home..

and at night again came to her house to soothe himself...

wow... amazing..👏

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

I read all parts of your story. ...all ways waiting for next...this is amazing story.👏

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Superb..
Very we'll written...
Manik's jealousy then the way Nandu understood manik's problem...
Cabir is correct.. They are meant for each other...
Waiting for manik to realise...
Thnkz 4 the pm

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amrutha.shetty

@amrutha.shetty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Y first romeo Juliet play rehearsal I wanted to see Oliver jenny rehearsal ...nd y tht kiss in play ...fir to.nandini abhi k scene me b hona chaiye bas ...nd nandini instead of feeling uncomfortable during her scenes should do it perfectly nd show him how it felt ...update the next soonish ...plz can't wait ...

Lots of love❤️

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HTA111

@HTA111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Wow fantabulous totally awesome update

Manik is restless as ge cant tolerate all this and thought of his Nandu in abhi arms is killing him though he is romancing with aliya yet his eyes were on his Nandu and he hesitated for a while and Nandu couldn't bear all that so she went out crying

Continue soon and thanks for pm