New manan ff as I love u updated part 25 pg 53 29/4/16 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
hey continue wth this
if they end there show wth out prper end
hope for the s2
so u write this ff to make manan live by dz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Please update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Plz yaar plz cntnu ab toh it is sure ky2 s2 aayega so chill yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
plsss yar..
already show se me khud upset hu..
plsss don't do naa..
I really like that story...I really want to u to continue...


plsss do continue..
I want to read...
plsss pls...
update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Hey
Please don't stop writing!
See, the show also ended because of which we are all sad but only writers like you people can keep is sane by writing FF and SS!
Please don't stop!
Or we'll go mad! 😆😆😆
Continue soon!
Love, Pari :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
ok i will continue this ff i hope u like and enjoy


Part 11

Nandini was running like a maniac asking every staff about manik but she got negative response for every passing second she was panicking however she had to find manik. After running sometime she sees manik who was talking to the manager and takes a signs of relief she was about to call him but her voice remain in the throat as someone placed hands over her mouth her eyes was horrified slightly she felt dizzy and she passed out


Manik was talking to the manager about the related of case but he couldn't concentrate as his mind was still engrossed in the nandini thought he couldn't get out of the night incident from his mind . He was feeling guilty as he was too much rude to her he zst want to see her and say sorry . He was getting restlessness as she was not showing up from morning he zs want see her once
but something he was not feeling right at that movement he felt something is wrong happening if he dont do something on right time he will lost something precious .
Manger sensed the Manik restlessness and ask" Sir r u all right u seemed to be lost"

"Ummm ya m fine" he reply getting out of the thoughts " anyways tq u ur information can help us for the progess of the case"

" it's my duty sir if u need any help u can ask me anytime sir i ve some work i think i should leave" he says while saking hands with manik

" ok and tx once again " he says with a faint smile

Manager leaves from there leaving a restless manik . Manik was continuously pacing from one place to another he was getting more panic he was waiting for her but she didn't show any shine to come more than restlessness anger was rose in him . Manik was continuously trying her cell phone but she was not picking it up his anger was getting higher and higher he thought she was avoiding him because of last night incident. He throws his phone in frustation " What the hell she thinks herself can't be she a little responsible towards the work behaving small than a school child if she is angry with me then she can't ignore her work i have to talk to her i have to zst go and talk in her room " by saying this he leaves from there


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Nandini slowly opens her eyes and find the place quite unfamiliar she tries to get up but her hands and legs are tied in the chair. Her head is paining badly as soon as how she came to realize how she came there she became horrified.
" Help some help Manik where are u plz get me out of here " tears starts rolling down from her eyes reaching towards the cheeks

She listen someone laughing to her
" tch tch tch tch tch tch poor nandu shout as much as u can but no one can hear u " and again start to laugh

" Why u tied me here u i had done y do u wanna kill me" nandini was feeling helpless


" U very well what u have done taken very precious thing from me and u still say what u have done " the person shouts in anger

"what thing i have taken from u" she was confused

" U have taken my life from me i wanna show u how much it hurt when someone cut some body part the pain m feeling now as u cut my heart from my body " the person anger rose

" Plz leave me i have not done anything to u" she was crying bitterly

" Beg how much u can beg first i thought to kill u soon but seeing u like this begging i want to see u beg for ur life i will kill u slowly with no mercy" smirks at nandini and takes out the knife from table

" What are u doing don't come near me i said don't come" Nandini was terrified

"Aaahhh" she screams that person cut her both shoulder when the person going to plant knife in her stomach someone catches her hand nandini closes her eyes in frightened

" ayesha are gone mad or what are u doing this was not our deal u promised that u will not kill her now because now if she will dies we will have face trouble" another person shouts on the tops of his lungs still holding her hand

" Rohan leave my hand she have taken manik away from me she have to die" she was trying to get out of his grip

" listen ayesha if u will kill her now manik cannot be urs so stop behaving like a maniac first we should clear this mess manik can reach here any movement we can't underestimate him we should leave the place as soon as possible" he says calmly in which she nooded.

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Manik was getting panic attacks as she couldn't find nandini anywhere he was searching her every where but couldn't get any sign of her. Manik wasn't getting positive vibes if he didn't do anything fast he will loose her and he didn't want to loose her. His heart was not beating he was being breathless . He was trying her cell umpteenth time but no answer.

Manik was running here and there like a maniac he zst hope she is fine . He reach to the corridor and ask one of the staff by showing her photo.

" Have u seen her" he was getting restless

" Yes sir i have seen her " he says while remembering the pic person

" Where and how much tym back " he got some hope

" about an hour back she was running as if someone was following her she looked very tensed and continuously asking some Manik" he says as he was little terrified with manik

" anything else from where she was came running " he was more curious

" Yes sir from there empty corridor" he point towards to the empty corridors

" ok thanx " he immediately rushed from there

" Nandini where are u plz come m missing u plz her god make her safe and sorry for last night i won't do it again" he thought while running to the corridor

Manik again tries her cell phone when he heard nandini phone ringtone near . He looks here and there and found her mobile there. He was picking up it when something catches his eyes .

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" Rohan i can't believe this that u can do this u r my best friend but u can go so low that u don't have the value of our friendship also why u did this why " nandini was shocked that her best friend done to this her

" Nandu nandu nandu " he let a sarcastic laugh " ur so innocent u believe on anybody blindly " and again he laughs

" But y u did this ur my best friend right and how can u do the robbery ur from the rich family then y" She was feeling disgusted by him

" Correction miss i m not rich i was rich when my dad got bankrupt by that singh he betrayed my dad who got heartattack and admit in hospital and that time i decided to take revenge and i got that chance i got job in his office i won his trust and planned this robbery and make him come road he never doubt that can do this but he hired detective that to my best friends and i thought to proctect myself i should be careful and i kept every information to distract from that case but ur patner is really he haven't distarcted a bit zst then i came to know about ayesha and i called her give her the proposal if she will handle this case i will help her to get manik " he says with a proud grin

" And i readily accepted his offer by this case if i can get rid of u then y not it is not a big deal for me i zst want Manik other things i don't care about " ayesha says coming back with victory smile

" 1st when i listen to her condition I was shocked but y not if i have to sacrifice my best friend it was honored for me " he let out a evil laugh

" So from morning first flight i have came to distract u from the case but to ur bad luck u heard everything after sorting out everything u have to die and only me and manik" she was more than exicted

" I can't believe people can go so low i feel disgusted one tym ur my best friend i know whatever happened to ur family was wrong but u can't be called human being also" nandini eyes were blood red due to anger and she spits in floor

" Thanx for the compliment babes zst wait we will be both in sometime and both goes outside

Nandini was feeling helpless she wish Manik was with her. She zst once to see him once looks like her world is finishing she closed her eyes and remember the moment spend with him. she was still sitting like a soulless body when she heard door opening and sees familiar figure coming out from the dark . Before she could figure out the person runs and takes her in bone crashing hug by knowing the touch she thinks her wish has been fulfilled and utters" Manik"

Manik come inside sees nandini like a death body he felt like someone snatch his soul from his body he sees the wound which was hurting him 10000 time painful to her without thinking much he rushed to her hugs her when he heard his name from her mouth as if someone filled lyf in him . He slowly brokes the hugs and place his lips on hers




Phew ok guys this is another update finally suspense is reviled and manik is with nandu so happy and guys i take too long tym to update this so plz comment and don't do kanjusi and haa silent be alerted


Edited by sarutask - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
wow amazing update
so many things r revealed now
feeling happy
Seriously how that aisha can be low digusting
And i like manik rxn and u described it very beautifully
Its true that we cant see our love in pain for that we can bear 10000 times pain behalf of them
Ur ff s really going well
thank u for ur update in english
Thanks a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
hi
thanks for pm
suspense khatam hua
rohan aur aisha dono pshyco hai kya
koi nahi ab manik dega unhe accha wala dose
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
OMG!!! They kissed!
Manik is and always will be Nandu's saviour!
I hate Rohan and Ayesha >.<
I felt so bad for her!!
Continue soon!
Thanks for the PM
Love, Pari :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
wow that was amazing...
hurt to see nandu get hurt...
manik finally found his nandu...
keep up the good work and update soon...

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