New manan ff as I love u updated part 25 pg 53 29/4/16 - Page 7

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NAVYA64 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
awesome update
loved it so much
wow!!!!!!!!!
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
ye kya engagement ho gai
mubarak ho sabko
thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
awesome update
jst loved it
the way he propsed her simple super
bt he his saying jst afun
so lets see they cn go through thier feelings through this trip
continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Cute lobe story! Superb story line ! Aww manik porpose nandini . . . Midway marriage proposal is damn romantic :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Wow!
Amazing chapter!
Loved it..
Manik is proposing nandu for marriage!
I wonder was it really a game or manik just proposed her in reality..
Waiting for the next update..
And thanx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
thank u thank u for ur love and support


Part10



Manik without breaking the gaze gets up and pulls the nandini by her waist . By this nandini back crashes in manik chest manik slowly takes out the back hair and put one side of her shoulder .Nandini closes her eyes and thighly clutch his shirt . Manik moves down and start to put wet kisses on her shoulder. He turns nandini around and kiss her neck while nandini zst moan his name .

Suddenly reality strikes to him and manik leaves nandini and back off. Nandini who was still on the spell of manik kisses slowly opens her eyes sees manik going back soon she realized what they were upto.

There was an awkward silence was between them noone has try to speak to each other both were feeling embarrassed. Soon the driver also came with water and again started their journey. They weren't able to meet their eyes . After sometime they reaches outside the hotel . After paying the driver when they were about to move enter manik held nandini hand

"Nandini m really sorry all what happened i don't did it knownly it all happend suddenly trust me i don't want to hurt u but i don't know how i lost control myself actually it was my fault i don't have to play that stupid game but plz forgive me plz ur special to me i don't wanna lose u" He says by lowering his eyes
her heart filled with happiness when he told that he didn't want to lose her as she became special to him . Her heart knows whatever he told was true and she trust him fully but she was confused within herself she was confused with her own feelings unknownly she is changing for him.

"I trust u Manik i really trust u as u don't do anything that will hurt me and plz don't ask forgiveness plz" By saying this nandini was smiling him at his concern.

" Really nandini u really trust me" He says with a wide smile on his face

" I trust u more than anything in this world" She says lovingly to him while he zst look at her with an amazed expression.

"So friends?"Manik ask forwarding his hand

" Friends" Nandini also give in with excitement

"Ok now lets go in " He says while taking the luggage

"Ok" Nandini also happily carry her bag

Just when they are going inside nandini tangled with the bag and bump into a guy . They both falls at once and nandini is top of that guy. By seeing this manik became angry and immediately pulls her with force.

" Ouch manik what are u doing y did u pulled me with such force its paining" she says while rubbing her arm

"Like nandini seriously u fell on the top of any random guy and u expect i will leave u like that" He says while being furious

"Manik" she was to going to say something when the guy interrupt in between

"Oh ho chill guys y are u fighting like tom and Jerry and m sorry" the guy says while geeting up

Both manik and nandini turn around to see the guy

"Oh my god nandini" The guy excitedly hug nandini

"Rohan i can't believe this its u oh my god so long yaar .I was really missing u" Nandini also hugs tightly in excitement

By seeing this manik hand turn into fist he was not liking someone rather than him touching nandini " What the who the hell is this guy y is he hugging nandini and look at nandini she also hugging him back looks like they were separated in khumba fair(mela) . How long time they are hugging no passage of air also as if someone joined them with fevicol .Leave u idiot leave nandini otherwise u have to pay i said leave" He was angry and furious.

Manik can't see more and goes between them " Looks like u guys know each other very nicely" He asked sternly

Both broke the hug and nandini excitedly introduce him to Manik " yaa we know each other very nicely his name is rohan he is my best friend "

By seeing nandini smiling manik also smiled.
"And her X-Boyfriend" Rohan interrupt her in middle

By listening x boyfriend manik face fell down his smile faded away.

"Shut up u joker manik don't take him seriously he always jokes and the x boyfriend thing we were not very serious before that he is my best friend" She says while pulling rohan cheeks.

"ouch nandu it's paining how u came to pune" he asked while removing her hand from his cheeks

"Some official work u tell how are u u forget me right from 2 years no phone nothing no contact u simply vanished " She makes cute pout

"U know na nandu dad and his work m zst fed up and don't be angry bird m sorry " he makes a puppy face

" Aww i can't be never angry on u " and again hugs

Manik anger reach its peak and things" how much she have to hug him and he is simply taking her advantage" manik goes in the middle and says " If u forget m also with u" Both brokes the hug and nandini introduce manik

" Rohan he is manik my" but cut by manik in the middle "Her fiancee" manik says while holding nandini waist by giving his famous singnature smirk.
Nandini eyes widened by listening to this.

"Oh nandu u have done the engagement any ways congrats by the way u to look very gud together" he says with genuine smile

"Thank u" Manik says on the behalf of both

"Ok i have to leave i have some work and bye beautiful" by saying this he kisses nandini hand and manik has has urge to punch his face

As soon as rohan leaves nandini ask" What was that manik y u did this?" she was angry on Manik.

" What i did?" he asked being innocent as if he didn't know anything

" Don't be innocent manik y u told that m ur fiance to him y u lied u no this is all acting"she says pointing his finger towards him

Now manik couldn't bear his anger " oh really nandini u fell bad that i lied to ur x boyfriend y because he will misunderstand u u still like him.

"Manik don't change the topic from which connection to which connection u r joining" nandini couldn't understand his behavior

"I m not changing the topic say u still like him",his eyes was blood red

"Enough manik it's impossible to talk to u" she was pissed off

"To whom than its possible ur x boyfriend " he mocked

"Go to hell manik m going to my room i don't wanna see ur face" she grabs her bag and leave

"As if m dieing to see ur face " he shouts from the back and leave towards his room

Both goes to their room as both start cursing each others they are angry with each others and thinking about each other drift to sleep

NEXT MORNING

Nandini gets up as she was still angry on Manik for his behavior. She goes to bathroom and fresh up. After changing the dress she goes outside for breakfast when she heard some noise in the empty corridor she closely listen to noise

Two people are fighting on something she goes more close to know exactly what was happening there. She listen to the conversation and freeze on her place

Girl-I told u to kill nandini as soon as she reaches here but u can't do one work properly

Boy-listen m not ur servant so stop ordering me first let me get out of this robbery case when this case will closed i will do ur work

Girl-i have already told u don't worry about this case i will handle it do as i say zst kill her

Nandini was silently listening to their conversation when she moves back a rod will fall down by the sound of that their conversation has distracted and look towards her both were shocked

Nandini-i can't believe u can do this i will not leave u i will tell to Manik

The guy catches her and says" not soon babes u itself invited death to to u"

Nandini pushes him and runs from there

Girl-what are u looking me if manik knows he will not leave us go catch her

Nandini runs and looks for manik everywhere but couldn't find him .
Suddenly she sees him who is talking to manager takes a sigh of relief and when about to call him she was stopped as someone keep hands in her mouth and put chloroform and takes her away




phew guys plz lamba comments as this took to much tym to write and think who has kidnapped nandini will manik will able to find her stay tuned
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
awesome update
suspense????????
please update soon
eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Wow!
Amazing!
Jealous manik was awesome..
The last part was shocking..
I think the boy is rohan..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
omg seriously my heart rate s increasing while reading d last part & i scroll down to read nxt but u finished d part
plzzz continue soon culdnt tolerate this suspense yaar
plzzz plzzz
u knw how to guv twist & turns
thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
nice update
jesouls manik
nice to see this
suspense???????????????/
it killng
continue soon
thks for pm

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