New manan ff as I love u updated part 25 pg 53 29/4/16 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
rohan is such an evil. . Black spot on d name of frnship.n that psycho ayesha is so much irritating. . .but d best part is that manik found nandu finally .Thnx for pm :) stay happy
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
nice update
finally suspense hd ended
rohan n ayeshan hd gt nuts too pyschos
finally manik had reached there
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Ohhh god dat so cute manan kisss... So pure plz update new part soon plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
that's nice...
itss so horrified.
finally but manik find nandu..so happy.
hope they do some awesome work..
n yaaa the hug awesome ...
n thanks 4 this..
waiting 4 next..
eagerly
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Superb update Dr... 👏
Wonderful u penned it perfectly...😊😊😳
Eagerly waiting for the next update... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Wonderful!
glad that manik reached their in time
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
ok thanx for ur response but m little disappoint also some people don't comment but no worried from now i will not sent pm to anyone m writing this on my interest if u like also heartly except if not also it is expected by that i will know how is my storytelling
So enjoy next part

Part 12


Manik slightly broke the hug and place his lips on her . Nandini was taken aback with his act she was numb to react she didn't respond whereas Manik was kissing her slowly to assure that she is with him it's all true he is not dreaming .
Nandini was feeling blissful as she never felt like this to anyone his lips on hers where make her feel like in heaven slowly she also respond the kiss that was assuring him that she is fine .It look like never ending kiss they both living that perfect movement without caring about environment they both zst need each others nothing matters them now

After breaking this kiss Manik look directly into her eyes there he could see lot of confused question but in that moment he himself was confused. Manik cupped her face and ask lovingly" Nandini are u alright ? " In which she simply nooded

Manik was looking at her without blinking his eyes there was so much pain which nandini could see. Manik wanted to say her that these few hour was worst than death. Now only he was feeling he got back his lug

" Manik plz open my hand and legs it's paining " she says a pain in a voice

Manik opens her and make her to stand but she was too weak she can't even stand properly . Manik notice the wound and bruises in her body he zst wanna rip that person head who had done this . He was hurting him countless tum.

" Manik how do u that i m here " nandini was curious

" I will say afterwards first we should go out of here " He says while getting out of here

They were about to get out they see Rohan standing outside the door.

" Look who is here as expected Manik malhotra u came to save ur fiancee but u came alone to rescue her i must say u got very good brain but i thought u forget to use it now u have to also die i can't risk my life" there was anger in his voice with a evil laugh

" U think m that fool " Manik mocked " If u forget then let me remind u m the Manik malhotra the detective and a criminal like u who can't even use 1% of his brain" he says with a smirk

" Oh m scared i m really scared now tell me what should i do i should surrender to u" he says dramatically

" That is the best option for u surrender yourself otherwise i won't left u in any condition to have option" he was still holding nandini

" U can do nothing Manik because u are all alone and we are more than u u can't be free " he says with a outmost grin in face

Manik let nandini sit in the chair . " So what say one on one if ur a man than" he says a determination in his tone .

" Y not i will love too " Rohan except the challenge

Soon they both start to fight Manik was not giving any chance to hit him by rohan . Rohan is loosing from him but he was not giving . Manik was on fire his anger was rising passing second . He was beating rohan like that he is going kill him


" Maaannnikkk" he listen the nandini screams and aburtly turn to her the front site horrified till his breath stuck.
By getting the chance rohan start to hit him but manik don't response he was freeze in place. Rohan was hitting him bitterly.

" Rohan leave manik plz " nandini bitterly
crying
" Oh poor nandu don't wanna see him hurt then go out of his lyf i promise nothing will happened to him" ayesha told her as she was placing knife in nandini neck so manik couldn't fight

" And if u both back off this case then he will be safe " this tym rohan says . Manik was lying lyk a death body drench with blood

" I promised i will go away from him i will never come back in his lyf plz leave him plz" she was joining hands in front of them

Ayesha left nandini and she sat down and kept manik face on her lap.
" Manik plz wake up plz for my sake see i have to irritate u and i want our fight plz wake up" she was crying continuously

Ayesha drag her to outside the room when someone catches nandini hand it's none other than manik . Rohan was continuously hitting on his stomach but he didn't let go of her

Just when ayesha going to hit both hand with a wooden stick she stooped with a horrified expression .

Police fire the gun in her hand . Rohan tries to escape but he got caught both ayesha and Rohan got arrested.

Nandini goes as fast as possible to Manik and helps to get up zst then Manik says something which makes her stunned " No matter what u will never leave me " nandini has tears in her eyes " i will never leave u Manik " she says
" Promise" still reconfirming
" Promise if i want to also i can't leave u" she says with a slight smile
Without saying anything he hugs nandini in which she also give in happily

There hug was broken by the voice of inspector " Thank u mr malhotra u have informed us on right tym i must say u are very intelligent noone can solve this robbery case but u solved within some period of tym now both of them will have the charges for robbery , kidnapping and attempt to murder case" he says while shaking hands with him.

Manik goes near ayesha and rohan and says " Rohan i had a doubt on u very first day itself but to arrest u i need prove " Both of them look at manik in shock expression " But how do u know " rohan spoke up.

"I have seen u many tyms in mr singh office but i choose to ignore u as i thought u are not that important but i know some inside person only planned to robbery because the robbery has been in such a way that it looked like planned from a long tym without inside person it's impossible after get detailed in this case when i got to know about pune old office i was sure this robbery was related here and i can find the culprit here itself . When i first saw u in hotel i was confirmed it was u only but i don't have better proof so u next day when i asked manager about u he told ur his regular customers who visit for the business trip whose room also book in the company . But when nandini was vanished i was tensed in her vanishing also i found something fishy on u because i saw last night u near her room . Morning i sneaked to ur room and got this document of planning . I was searching for nandini in the corridor i found ur this bracelet which i saw last night and that time i confirmed in vanishment of her also there is ur hand . I quickly rushed to the camera room and checked the recording there i saw u and ayesha were taking nandini in the car from basement. I probably don't know where u took her but i remembered the old office and immediately call police and rushed here . How can u be so fool that I can't find u " he said in one go with anger filled voice

Both look down in embarrassment Manik hand over the document to police and says them to take away. Police takes them

Nandini hold manik hand he looked at him surprisingly. " Manik ur hurt lets go to doctor it's bleeding " she said while caressing his wounds

" Nandini m n only hurt but look ur also hurt come lets go " he says with a concern

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Doctors do both dressing and give some medicine to them . Nandini called her mother and lied that she was stuck in work so it will take time to come them home . Her mom happily agreed with that.

Nandini and manik are both in the hotel room having there dinner in manik room as both have ordered there dinner they are feeling weak

" Manik have the medicine then i will do ur dressing " says while giving her medicine and he makes annoyed face

" No i don't medicine it's bitter " he makes a face

" Manik don't behave like a child look i have eaten right so u also u won't get better if u don't have it " she tries to convince him but he turns his face

" Manik i told u take ur medicine right now " she says sternly in which he makes a puppy face and eat the medicine

" Now happy " he keep the glass aside and make a face

" Very happy wait i will bring the dressing for u and i will do ur dressing " she says while getting up

Manik hold her hand " sit na i want to talk to u something "

Nandini became serious " yes manik tell me "

" You know nandini when i couldn't find u i thought i forgot to breath y u became so important to me when i saw u hurt i felt something inside me died and when ayesha told u to leave me i thought i will die that movement " his eyes was moist

" Shhh manik don't ever say that " she placed finger in her lips " Thank u Manik for being in my lyf thank u " she was looking into her eyes .

Both of them looking into each other eyes when manik both hand goes in her arms and he slightly lay her down and come top of her tuck the hair in her ears nandini was looking at let him do whatever he want . Manik come closer and kiss her forehead then eyes then cheeks and slowly comes near her lips and sealed his lips with hers




Ok guys this is nxt update i haven't pm anybody so if want to comment then comment if not then don't i won't bother me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
awesome update
finally tht jerk r arrested
super detective manik
so finally they r together
continue soon
stay blessed
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg!! such a lovely update...u penned it soo beautifully...m totally in love with ur ff...
as always manan scene is pure bliss...must say that ur story is just mindblowing...i just can't describe it in words..hats off 2 u dea...
ur the best writer...m totally in love with ur ff...
plss update soon...cant wait more
eagerly waiting for next update
keep writing

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