New manan ff as I love u updated part 25 pg 53 29/4/16

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Posted: 10 years ago
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guys wanna have some fun for manan tedhi medhi love life😊
So here are the character sketch...

Manik Malhotra: A frustrated man with his job and with his so called patner nandini. He works in detective agency and always end up in getting in a mess in every case.
Solve every case by his intelligence and hardwork but credit takes nandini. As luck never favors him. Wanna get rid of her by creating every possible torture to her but as destiny bound them together...😛
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Nandini murthy: A happy go lucky girl. Her luck supports her always. Hates manik for his so called attitude but
loves to irritate him. Gets out every mess whatever he created. Too lazy / and depend upon others for her job.

They both love to hate each others but they are like can't live with each others and without each other.
how they will fall in love? and their tedhi medhi love lif
e makes everyone life tedha😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so guys give ur views as that . only i can continue my ff
Edited by sarutask - 10 years ago
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so guys here is short and sweet part

part1

A beautiful girl is peacefully sleeping in her small bed... dreaming about her happiest part of torturing her patner...
(so her dream)
nandini:how dare u? u came in my cabin without my morning coffee
manik:I m sorry nandini.
nandini: how can u call my name I'm not ur patner anymore to call my name. I m ur boss so say nandini mam and now get lost...and bring my coffee...
manik:ok mam
nandini:i said get lost
manik:ok mam
nandini was hell irritated by now so she grabs her vase and throws to manik...
in real
manik:ouch! what the hell are u doing nandini
nandini(in sleep):again i told u to call me mam not nandini m ur boss
😡 so give respect
manik was now hell pissed with her and shouts:nandini get up... with a jerk nandini gets up and looks front and became worried but calms and ask to manik
nandini:what are u doing in my house in early morning ?
manik:to take u for romantic date. (replies sarcastically)
nandini eyes.popped out and ask:what?
manik:you dumbo and idiot as i no u don't have the gud memory power but as a gud job patner i came to remind u that yesterday boss gave us a new case to both of us so for that we ha to work together unfortunately
nandini:oh ok ya i remember that mr singh house robbery case right
manik:oh thank gud at least u remember that otherwise ur in ur own dream world
nandini:behave properly manik m ur patner not ur employee
manik:and u cant be my employee also that must also should have some standard but y boss always in every case trapp with u
nandini:m also not dying to work with u its my bad luck to be pair up with u
manik:then back off i can alone handle this case and if ur with me also i have to manage alone ur zst waste of time...
nandini:y should i back off ur afaird that this time also boss will give me credit
manik:listen(but interrupted by nandini mom voice)
nandini mom:nandini manik come down for breakfast
nandini and manik gives angry glare to each other and manik leaves the room
nandini pov
hey bhagwan is bhoot se mujhe durr hi rakhna and nandini leaves for washroom to fresh up...

so guys say how it is...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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guys as m really excited for these ff but i need ur support guys to continue this ff otherwise i will discontinue it plz criticisms are heartly excepted and thank u
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so guys here is the second part i hope u all like if their is any mistake then plz ignore... tell ur views

part2

After taking the cool shower and getting dressed up nandini goes down to have the breakfast. She goes to downstairs and see manik is having breakfast ignoring him she quietly sit in the chair and have her breakfast...

After having the breakfast they both head towards to their office. They sat in the car quietly..

Nandini was looking out of the window and taking moring cool breeze when manik broke the silence and says...

manik:nandini who...(but cut by nandini in the middle)
nandini:u don't have to say sorry manik. there is my fault also...
(manik was confused and says)
manik:y should i say sorry to u 😒 what i ve done
nandini:really manik u don't have to say sorry for ur morning behavior ur so rude...
manik:miss nandini murty how come u had the misunderstanding that i goona say u sorry for moring behaviour...

nandini:o ya how can i forgot the great arrogant manik malhotra cannot apologize to any one if he done mistake also ... then y r u talking to me

manik:i also don't have interest to talk to u m zst discussing about case if u remember that...

nandini:that u can discuss in the office also... i don't wanna discuss here in the car. i don't have mood...

manik:listen miss nandini murthy we don't work according to ur mood so keep ur drama aside and zst focus as a professional not as childish understand

nandini:ya ok fine...

They reach the office and goes to their cabin.. manik is completely focused on the case but nandini was filling bore and sleepy.

nandini(to herself):oh god kitna boring hai mujhe bohat nind ahari hai aur is bhoot ko dekho kitna concentrate karke kam karaha hai...
ese toh kuch farak hi nahi padtha uff main nai karne wali kohi bhi case study.
meh sojati hu jo karna hai woh ehi kare (and nandini drifted to sleep in her chair)

manik is completely focused on the case study so he didn't notice nandini sleeping.After long 4 hours of case study and and ready of the case when he looks for nandini and sees her sleeping peacefully...
He was hell angry with her but suddenly an idea comes in mind and smirks
manik:so nandini murthy credit paneka bohat shock hai na boss se ab esa credit milega tum zindagi var yaad rakhogi zst wait and watch
(he slowly goes near her and takes out his mobile phone and clicks her photo and after that throws glass of water on her face nandini gets up with a jerk and shouts)
nandini:what the hell are u doing manik? don't u have manners
manik:i have but u don't sleeping in duty hour is strictly prohibited but see ur sleeping so peacefully (shows her photo) and if u don't want ki that this photo to boss then complete ur work otherwise (he says with a smirk)

nandini was hell shocked so she simply nodded and start to do her work. she was dam pissed up with manik but she doesn't have other choice..
manik was kneely observing her as his work was finished so he thought to take a short nap. he sat in the chair closed his eyes suddenly someone enters in their cabin. seeing the person nandini gets up but the person stops her to talk and goes straight to manik and says

voice:mr malhotra y r u sleeping in chair if u say i will arrange a bed for u
(nandini was having hard time to control her laugh)
manik was irritated and shouts(in sleep):don't irritated me get out...

voice:manik get up this is ur office not ur house ur sleeping peacefully (shouts) i said get up
by hearing the voice manik gets up with a jerk and he was hell shocked to see the person in front of him

manik:bo... boss!



so how this plz say something
Edited by sarutask - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahahahaha!
Poor manik!
Loved their cute fights..
Just waiting to watch what will happen to manik
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: suraiya77

Hahahahaha!
Poor manik!
Loved their cute fights..
Just waiting to watch what will happen to manik

tq u 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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guys as m writing this ff with my own interest and will as m craziest fan of the manan so i will not force u all read my ff i know that m not a gud writer but guys i really wanna knows ur all view whether i must continue this ff or not if u say i will discontinue it plz freely shares ur views.. and one more thing as i don't know anyone in this forum then plz send me the buddy request if anyone interested then
Edited by sarutask - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wt to tel i cant cntrl my laugh

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