New manan ff as I love u updated part 25 pg 53 29/4/16 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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😛 thank thank thank for ur response and love plz support me as ur supporting me ⭐️


Part 8


Someone enter inside the cabin "Mannnikk" the person excitedly hugs the Manik.

Manik was the still in the state of shock as if he was dreaming. Nandini was looking all this in confuse manner.

After coming back to the senses he ask still not breaking hug " ayesha what r u doing here?" and slowly brokes the hug

"Because i was missing u baby" she replies casually and kiss the manik both cheeks and says " i love u baby and i missed u a lot " again hugging him back .
Nandini was feeling something burning inside her and she zst want to rip the neck of that girl she was thinking " how can she hug and kiss My manik" and mentally slaps herself " are u being insane or what nandini how he is ur manik.. Why are feeling bad she does whatever to him either kiss or hug does that put any impact on u ?
"No i don't care whatever he does whoever this girl is to him .I m Nandini murthy who don't care anything and i don't have his impact on me." she mentally convience herself but her heart is burning as if someone put kersone up the fire..

Manik was being numb don't no what to do he zst stand still and look at nandini but she has turned her face around without looking her face also he can make out her eyes was moist and that was cutting his heart in 100 pieces.. he zst want to take her in his arm and wipe up of her tears. He was blankly looking at nandini when she turn around he can see the pain in her pain and gesture a no to her.

Manik slightly break the hug and ask " ayesha what is all this and y the hell u came here ?" "I already told naa that i was missing u" tries to be cozy with him and keeps her hands in his chest but manik jerk it off.

" What's ur problem manik y r u behaving like this"? now she is too furious and angry for the manik behavior

"That's what am asking ayesha what is ur problem and y r u behaving like this" he retorted back

"O com on Manik as u don't know anything y m here becoz i love u and i know u also love me" she tries lean upon him.

" I ur dreams miss ayesha i have already told u that i don't feel anything for u then for god sake leave me alone" Now he was hell pissed up with her he zst want to get rid of.

" how can u say that manik all the way I came here to meet u as soon as i got ur address and ur behaving so cold with me" she was furiously telling to him

"Ayesha i don't bloody care from where u came but i m telling u thousand time that i don't feel anything for u ur zst mine gud frnd so better be in ur limit" manik says showing his finger to her and anger was visible in his eyes.

Nandini was witnessing there argument slightly suddenly she felt light that manik doesn't feel anything for that girl

" Manik u have no right to reject do u how many guys are having the dreams with me but i zst want u ur only mine" ayesha says in full on egoistic tone

" No miss ayesha m not urs m not ur bloody private property who u zst can claim urself got that now get out" lastly he yells to her

Ayesha grabs the collar of manik in anger " who the hell u too yell at me no one has the right to yell at me and ur my bloody property ur zst mine u understand ur zst mine" she says on the top of her lungs.

"Ayyyeessshhha" he shouts at her and about to slap ayesha when nandini grabs her hand and gesture him No. By looking her pleading eyes his became soften and put down the hand and slowly smile at which she smiles back

In fear ayesha closes her eyes but nothing happened when slowly she opens her eyes she sees nandini catching manik hand and he became soften by seeing them smiling he was pissed off

" Manik y u stop comeon hit me hit me " she pushes the manik back

"Ayesha i said behave otherwise i will be very bad to u" he says in ever serious tone

" There is more thing to happen show what can u do" she again tries to push him

Now manik has the limit when he was going to retorted back Nandini comes in middle as she knows if she dont stop them it will be a mess

" Guys stop this we r in the office don't be childish stop fighting " she says calmly looking to manik to which manik nooded and he calms down

Ayesha start to clap her hand " Wow one says to stop and another stop without aruging huh so much care and love"

" What are trying to say ayesha?" manik couldn't get it in what she was trying to say

" Oh Manik do be so innocent as u don't know anything" she mocked " because of her only naa ur going away from me " he tightly hug Manik " Manik don't be fooled in her love u no naa i love u more and i no u also love me but because of her so called love u cant see ur true love" she starts shading crocodiles tear

Manik jerk her and says " i said enough is enough one bad word against nandini i won't spare ur lyf u will be destroyed"

Nandini was overwhelmed tears start to brimming in her eyes she was too happy he cares about her too much

" Why Manik why manik y do u care about her so much what does she have that i don't have y she matters to u" ayesha was too furious

" She matters to me dammit " manik shouts at the top of his lungs

" Manik she is zst a s*** who took u away from me who is she to u this bloody bit" before she could complete her sentence she gets a tight slap by manik

" Zst shut ur bloody mouth i told u one word against her i will not spare u and u told to me then listen carefully she is my fiance and i don't have any feelings for u" Manik says in anger

Nandini was stunned by declaration she was neither sad nor happy she was being confused she was this was a dream but deep down she knew that she dont want to wake up..

"Now u got who she is to me and now get the bloody hell out of here" he says being furious

" Sorry to dissapoint u Mr Manik malhotra i not going any where" she says in a stern voice

"Come to the point ayesha" he was totally pissed off

" I m also working in this office and my dad is one of the senior board members of the office so i will be here and u don't have the right to throw me out of this office" she says with a smirk in her face

" And u have too pay for this slap and ur so called fiance get ready to live a hell and one more thing ur only mine and noone has the right upon u" while saying this she was glaring at nandini and strom out of there cabin leaving both totally shocked

After sometime manik comes backs to his senses and goes near who was still standing like as a staute he was confused how to talk to her and about his sudden confession

" Nan...Nandini woh i m sorry all this happened because of me she was simply accusing u" he said in low tone putting his head down and hand on the ear gesturing a sorry to her

Nandini comes back to senses " its ok Manik it's was not ur fault u didn't mean to hurt as u really care for me " she says with a genuine smile

Manik was relief that she was ok and she,was smiling a heavy load came down from his heart but he didn't no why he was feeling sad when she was sad

" Manik y did u tell ayesha that m ur fiance" she asked as soon this question came in her mind

Manik don't know how to reply this as he himself don't know y he told this too ayesha there were many mixed emotion in heart

" Nandini u know this ayesha is actually psycho and she is mad about me due to her i have to leave the delhi because she always do crazy stuff one day she tries to jump to my room and that to from terrac as my window is near the terrace and she initially feel down and she was gone to come when she came back to her senses her parents pressurized me to marry her and i escaped from there without giving my address to anyone" he said while looking to her

Nandini gulped down the air when she heard the crazy stuff of that girl " but y u lie that i m fiance i don't get it " she some how managed to ask him

" Actually if she knows that i don't have any girlfriend then he will surely tries some weird things to get me so u r the only one whom i can trust fully and if she once no ur not only my girlfriend but also my fiancee she will back off" he says in obvious tone

" But she haven't back off she is working in this office itself" she says in a worried tone

" Don't worry nandini we will something sort for this problem u don't have to bother " he he says in concern

" Manik if u don't mind we can continue this" says with smile

" What" he was not getting

"This fiancee ficaso if she will see always us together then she can't pressurized u" she says

" Are u sure nandini if u feel comfortable u don't have to take my problem in ur head" still not convinced

" Yaa m totally sure for i can do this" she says with bright smile

" Thanks nandini acha i will go and fresh up" he says with a even huge smile

" ok"

He was about to leave when something stuck and turns to her

"Nandini" he calls her

" Yes Manik what happened " she asked casually

" Woh nandini " looking here and there

" say Manik " being doubt

Suddenly he kisses her and says" pay back for yesterday " runs to nandini living tomato red nandini behind
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
wow amazing update...
another soha in the story hope ayesha goes away soon and doesn't cause many problems in manan's life
keep up the good work and update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
good
thanks for pm
manik ne bahut hi acche se aur strongly handle kiya aaisha ko
nice
storng manik accha lagta hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
awesome update
too good
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
thanks for ur update in english
today am happy that u really undtstd me & updated in english
thanks a lot
continue soon
becoz we all knw that thr will be twist & turns r thr
really eagerly waiting for ur update & long plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
AWESOME UPDATE
LOVE IT
PLEASE NANDINI KI TARA MUJHE THORA JEALOUS MANIK BHI CHAHI YE
CONTINUE SOON

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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
wow...
awesome threesome...
love it.
ohhhooo ki bat h..
nandu is jealous n manik iss aww..
so sweet .
wat a sweet lie...
nice...
update soon
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
very nice updates
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice updtate
psycho ayesha loved it
becoz her ly they may get closer
loved it the pay back
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u guys for ur appreciation and plz bear this chotu sa update from me grammar mistakes plz consider and love as u all love till date




Part 9


That day passed within in blink of eye both manik and nandini hasn't face ayesha whole day . They both were out for the investigation of their cases . For the first nandini is showing some in interest in work . Nandini is behaving good professional relationship with the clients and case . It manik totally suprised or shock as he never saw this side of her she always tries to run from the work or do some stupid work which used to irritate him more but today he quite impressed with her dedication towards the work he always used to think her stupid and dumb but she's quite intelligent .

Otherhand nandini is feeling out of the world she has a feeling something change inside her. Today she want to impress manik. She was loving to work with him even his frown and anger or his so called attitude making her smile . Due to dedication manik is prasing her and more and more she like to work zst for one his small comment either is good only . She is feeling she has won the world zst when he is beside him.

They are going to pune for their case investigation for the more proof and evidence . Nandini was too happy as she is going alone with him by road. It was evening when they started journey as they were busy collecting the information whole day and according to that they will get next clue in pune so giving second thought they rushed to pune.

It was already night 9 o clock they both hire,a cab to pune noone has talk till now morning incident but only regarding case they are discussing and now both were tired so both were silent .Both of them loving this silence as this silence is also giving a shivers to their body

Breaking the silence nandini phone rings

"Hello" pick up the call without looking to the caller id she was enjoying outside cool breeze

" Nandini where are u? " Her mom asked in panic tone

Then nandini realize that she have forget to inform her mom and curse herself anyhow she manage and say " Mom actually m going to pune "

"What pune sudden how and once also u haven't informed me huh how can u be so irresponsible nandu and how u thought i will give u to go alone" she was shouting

" Mom relax don't worry that actually it was all sudden we have to rush for the case mom don't panic by tomorrow night we will be back " she says in calm tone

" We with whom ur going nandu?" Her mom was confused

" Mom me and manik now don't worry"
She says in ressuring tone

"Oh thank god if he is with u i don't have to worry and have food in proper tym and give manik a lots of love from me " she says

" ok bye mom"

" ok bye my beta"

" What was saying auntie" he asked immediately when she hung up the phone

" Mom as usual saying take care and give lots of love to Manik " She replies casually

" Oh auntie told u to give me lots of love but nandu how will u give me lots of love huh" he was back in mischievous mood
he didn't know y but he was liking to tease her he zst love her facial expressions

Nandini realize what she told and turns into the crimson " woh nothing like that zst mom told so i was saying that only" she replies by hiding her blush

" So my fiance don't want me to give lots of love" he says in,a teasing tone and makes a fake pout

"Manik sometimes ur too much its zst we are acting and ur pulling my leg" she says with a frown

" Ok nandini sorry on a serious note thank u so much how much i thank u also it's not enough" by saying this he says her

Nandini is shocked by his sudden act but she gives in slowly smile and says " Don't say thank u manik for u i can do anything this is zst a small thing"

" Really?" By saying this he brokes the hug and ask " why u can do anything for me?"

" becoz now i understand that ur are a very good human being and so care about me so much " she says with a genuine smile

Manik comes near her holds her hands and says " u know y i care for u ?"

" No" she gulp down her saliva feeling him so close
because ur special nandini u have the power to ressolve every problem ur magic stick zst one round and every where happiness" he says without breaking the eye contact

They were looking each others without breaking the eye contact when suddenly they came back to their senses by sudden jerk of car

" What happened" Manik asked being furious

" I think car bonet has been warm look the smoke is coming " driver says looking to bonet

" Now what to do " Nandini asked being panic

" Dont worry madam i will get some water to cool it down " driver says getting out of the car

" Ok plz come have to reach there in tum" Manik says in a serious tone

" Ok i will try " he leaves

" Manik now what" She was worried in alone highway

" Nandini don't worry driver will come and we will go zst relax" he says and she simply nod

After sometime nandini was feeling suffocation inside the car so she get down from the car by seeing her getting down Manik also get down

" Nandini what happened y u got down"
" I was feeling suffocation inside the car"

"Nandini m bore" by saying he makes a puppy face

Nandini couldn't resist his. antics and smiles at him " So what should i do if ur getting bore then"

" Then let's play a game " he says some excitement in voice

" What type of game" she was confused by his plan

"Look nandini as we know are faking this fiancee fiasco but if it was all real and actually we are getting married then u want ur fiance must propose u right" he says in obvious tone

Nandini was totally shocked what manik was upto as she has always seen manik anger rude and stubborn side but now which manik she's seeing is totally different he is care free, sweet ,caring and mischievous but she was liking it

" What do u mean by that I dont get u"? She asked shock and suprise tone

" Dont take me wrong it's zst if u were my real fiancee then which way i would . propose u " Manik was enjoying her expression as he was doing knowingly all this to looks her antics

"Ok then" Still in confused state

"Then i want to propose u now"
" What are u mad or what in the middle of road " As soon he heard this her eyes widened

" Nandini i told u its zst a game its all fake y r u panicking"

"But" without giving her chance manik sit down on knees and start to say

"Nandini murthy i know u r most irritating and dumb girl i have met in my whole lyf but when i got chance to know u . ur the most amazing girl for which every guy can come come down in their knees u can all people smile ur smile is most precious treasure for.me i can't see u cry it's pierce my heart u change me nandini u taught how to live life before u came to my luf i was zst breathing but u change everything and now ur my world I Love U nandini.
Will u marry me? " Manik says in one go he whatever came from his heart he was still holding her hand looking her eyes

Nandini was lost what he told she this all could be true and unknowingly she says" "Yes Manik i will marry u"

Manik takes out ring from his hand slide in nandini finger by looking to her

Nandini turns crimson and turns around without shifting the gaze manik wakes up and pulls her by waist and she was zst lost in his touch and manik slowly kiss her shoulder and nandini hand clutch manik shirt..



Phew guys plz comment heartly and thanx once again

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