New manan ff as I love u updated part 25 pg 53 29/4/16 - Page 5

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Hasi-Pani1 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg!!! mindblowing update...its just WOW!nandu ne kiss kiya..i jus loved it...thanks for the lovely update nd PM...u penned it so well ...hats off dea...the way u write is jus awsm...
plsss update soon...will be waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Hehehe...are u Punjabi????


Vaise good update :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
kiss n all...
love is in the air...
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Manik was teasing her! Hahahaha
Thank god Manik ne mana kar diya for that rishta!
Nandu kissed him! I know its a cheek kiss but still!
Eeep! So excited!
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Love, Pari :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
It was superb. ..
Do continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
yesss its quite nice..
loved it ..
very cute couple like seriously...
shooo nyc...
n plsss do continue...
itsss nice..
thanksss 4 this
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
guys m too exicted so m posting nxt part i hope u all enjoy and hit like buttons and showers of long long comment plz


Part 7




Nandini house



Nandini is jumping in happiness and came running in the house and shouts: mom mom mom mom where r u ?


Nandini mom(comes hurried from the kitchen and ask worried): kya hua nandu sab thik hein naa tu chilla kyu rahe hain

Nandini rotates her mom in excitement: mom mom i m happy today as if m flying in the sky


Nandini mom: nandu beta stop mujhe chakkar aare hain aur tu aaz itni khush kyu hain aur tera chera dekh toh kitna glow kara hein

Nandini: i don't no mom y m so happy but m feeling m too special ( she climbs in the sofa and start to jump)

Nandini mom : nandini come down otherwise u will fall down

Nandini : no mom aaz mein nahi girungi as if someone will catch me takes me to clouds (and she starts to sing thinking about manik confession)

Aaj mai upar aasman niche, aaj mai aage jamana hai pichhe


(Nandini jumps from the sofa and starts to dance with her mom)

Tell me o khuda abb mai kya karu, chalu sidhee kee ulatee chalu (she goes to god and pray and do front and back steps)


Aaj mai upar aasman niche, aaj mai aage jamana hai pichhe(she goes to garden and try to jump and touch the sky and sleep and look at stars)

Tell me o khuda abb mai kya karu, chalu sidhee kee ulatee chalu
(looks to sky and talk with god and go forward)

Aaj mai upar aasman niche (Yu hee bin bat ke chhalke jaye hansee Dole jab hawa lage gudugudee)
(air passes through her skin and feels manik touch and blush)

Sambhalu gir padu, arre arre arre arre arre tauba kya karu Chalu sidhe kee ulatee chalu...
(tries to walk in the singal wodden piece fall and laughs at her. her mom drags her to the house put she runs to the dinning room and stand up in dinning table)

Aaj mai upar aasman niche, aaj mai aage jamana hai pichhe ( her mom hits her head with palm as nandini starts to dance in table)

Tell me o khuda abb mai kya karu, sar ke bal ya kadam se chalu Aaj mai upar aasman niche...
(her mom makes makes a pout and goes from there and sit in sofa and nandini comes and says sorry and makes her dance with her)

Jhume ja mauj me rukna naa janejan, dekhu yeh tarang rukatee hai kaha Mai bhee ter sang inn lehron pe chalu, sar ke bal ya kadam se chalu Aaj mai upar aasman niche, aaj mai aage jamana hai pichhe

(While dancing with mom she remembers Manik and sees him singing as they had an eye lock but her mother break her trnces by shooking her and ask her what and she says nothing and goes to her room and goes to window and look sky)


Tell me o khuda abb mai kya karu, chalu sidhee kee ulatee chalu ( she goes to her bed and drifted to sleep by remembering him))


Next morning...


Nandini was sleeping peacefully when her alarm phone rings. She gets up with a sweet smile on her face and she looks that without changing clothes she slept last and start to blush thinking about her sudden kiss. she look at the time it's 8:30

Nandini: oh freak aaz mein late hogaye hey wait a minute aaz manik nahi aaya mujhe jaageneko ( she feel bad as he didn't came to wake her up she aside these thoughts and goes to shower hoping Manik came for breakfast)

She wear a beautiful simple black shirt and a skinny black pant and puts a little makeup and open the hair. she was looking simple yet elegant and goes downstairs

Nandini: gud morning mom

Nandini mom: gud morning beta are wah aaz toh bohat pyaari lagri hain kuch special hain aaz

Nandini: it's nothing like that mom and mom Manik nahi aaya

Nandini mom(sarcastically): beta teri tabiyat to thik hain tu kabse useke bareme puche lagi kal se bohat azeeb harkatein kari hein

Nandini: mom meri tabiyat bilkul thik hain aur mein Manik ke bareme is liye puch rahi thi woh mera patner hain naa toh case ke bareme discuss karna tha ( nandini ne jhut bolne mein phd ki hain)

Nandini mom: mujhe lagta hain meri beti paar kisika but a saya lagaya tu kab se kam ke liye serious hogaye(control to laugh)

Nandini( gives angry glare to her mom): mom aap taunt mariho mein jo pucha sidha sidha jawab dighe

Nandini mom: ok ok sry manik nahi aaya lagta hain aaye ga bhi nahi

(Nandini feel too bad that he didn't came and became worried bcz of yesterday her sudden reaction he didn't came nandini was cursing her for her impulsive act . Without eating anything she goes to office)

Nandini mom: arre ese kya hua abhi tak thik thi kuch gadbad hain eske aur manik ke beech mein pata lagana hoga

(Nandini takes an auto and goes to her office and she feel embarrassed how to face manik. She reaches her office and goes to cabin .when she goes inside the front view melts her heart and a small smile crept on her face manik was sleeping in the table and all file around him. Nandini mentally slaps for her overthinking and feels bad also by her childishness manik have too work whole night. She slowly goes near him and ruffle his hair and she slightly observe his feature his sharp jaw his pointed and his kissable lips . Nandini have sudden urge to kiss it she want to taste it her hormones are betraying her. She slowly leans downwards to him as she is very close to him his hot breath pacing her lips and suddenly manik opens his eyes and nandini straighten her self she looks down with embarrassment as manik didn't exactly know what she was upto he a too sleepy eyes due to constant working whole night and when he sees nandini gets up and ask her)


Manik: nandini tum kab eyes (rubbing his eyes )

Nandini(still looking down): woh mein ( but interrupted by knock on door)

Manik: come in ( someone come inside by which manik eyes widened and jaaw drop)

person:manik


phew ok plz plz plz plz silent readers and others plz like it and do comment how do u like today part plz shower ur love...



sry guys cannot pm anyone
Edited by sarutask - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
wow...superb update...
i jus loved it...u penned it soo nicely...i have no words to say..
its jus wow update...the way u described song is jus mindblowing
hats off 2 u...ur such an awsm writer...plsss update soon dea...cant wait more...m eagerly waiting for next update...keep writing..n thanks for the PM n lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
wow nice update
thanks for pm
interseting update today
but plzzz in english
who s this new entry girl r boy
most probably girl i think
or b4 luv story starts, villian entry
watever it s
but suspense is superb
update soon
cant wait to see whos that
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Nice update...continue soon...make Manik realize his love...

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