New manan ff as I love u updated part 25 pg 53 29/4/16 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarutask



tx a lot for ur appreciation that means a lot to me if u like this ff that much sure i continue plz do me a favor that plz make this ff to acknowledge to everyone that Will be really grateful to u

Will surely try to ...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: amrutha.shetty


Will surely try to ...😊

umm really tx
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And her phone rings. ...
Hey I read your story .. It was very nice. ..
Plz do pm.me next timd
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣 🤣 hahahhaha what a ghost convo 🤣 I am laughing like crazy
Hahahahahha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
so guys this is part 5 i hope u all enjoy and comment heartly

Part5

(Nandini close her eyes and manik leans to her and slightly put his thumb on her lips. She is loosing and shivering by his touch)

Manik: nandini

Nandini(still closing her eyes):hmm

Manik:tum kya sachme vampire bangaie ho kiska khun pike aaiye ho (he rub the red liquid from her lips and gets up from her)

Nandini (suddenly opens her eyes and with a jerk wakes up and asked in confused tone):what?

Manik(shows his thumb and ask): yeh kya laga tha tumhare lips pe sacheme vamipre toh nahi bangai. oh main kaise bhul sakta huh tum woh pehli insan ho zo logo ka khun piti hain specially mera.

Nandini(narrow her eye brow and angirly says): main nahi tum mera khoon pite ho at least tumne yeh toh admit kiya mein insan huh tum toh sachme vampire ho

Manik(leans closer to her and husikly says in her ear):acha mein vampire hu toh mein tumhe sikata huh agar vampire ko gussa agaya toh wo kya karsakta hai

Nandini(being nervous):k...y...kya (she starts to fumble and getting shiver by his proximity she move backwards)

Manik(leans more closer to her):main kya karsata huh

Nandini:ha..haan(moves more back she is geeting shiver and suddenly she falls down from sofa and manik laughs)

Manik:hahahahahahaha ab aye chuhiya pahad ke niche hahaha kahatha na mujhse panga mat lena hahahahaha (he was laughing like a mad and nandini was in ground still shock and becames more angry by manik laughing she gets up and shouts at him)

Nandini: what the hell manik tumne mujhe jaan buj ke niche giraya aur yaha pagalo ki tarha hasre ho

Manik(stops laughing and says):oh hello maine tumhe nahi giraya tum khud hi girgae kisne kaha tha piche zaneko

Nandini:toh tumhe kisne bola tha aage aaneko

Manik:mere aage anese tumhe kohi current lagzata tha kya zo piche gaye

Nandini(absent kindly):lagzata nahi lagra tha tumhare pass aane se mujhe shivering hori thi (and suddenly she stops and thinks what zst she said and bites her tongue)

Manik(in confused tone): what mere pass ane tumhe shivering hoti hai

Nandini(start to stammering):no...ma...maine esa kab ...kaha mei toh ye ...keheri ... ki mujhe thoda uncomfortable laga...

Manik(realize the his closeness made her uncomfortable and says): woh m sorry mujhe joke bhi limit mein karni chaye tha i hope tumhe bura nahi laga

Nandini(smiles at his concern and says):its ok bade bade office mein ese chote chote bate hoti reheti hain (in a dramatic way and both starts to laugh)

Manik:mujhe nahi pata tha tum itni interesting character ho

Nandini:tum bhi utne bure nahi ho jitna mein consider karti thi

Manik:well thanx for compliment and btw tumhari smile bohat acchi hain zese tumhare smile say sawan ayega (she smiles more)
(suddenly its raining and both becames suprise and by this nandini starts to remember his compliment and blushes unknowingly)

Manik:are wah tumhare smile toh wakai powerful hain see its starts raining.

Nandini(goes near balcony and sees children playing in the rain and turns towards manik and says):manik let's go and play with children look its so fun

Manik:no nandini we are not going anywhere otherwise we will catch cold (but nandini is too stubborn and drags manik out of building and start to play in rain) what are u doing nandini thand lagzyegi lets go inside

Nandini: no manik i don't wanna go inside its so much fun if u wanna go then go

Manik:if u don't wanna come i will go inside badme bhukhar hogaya toh aunty tumhe nahi chodegi

Nandini:wo meri problem hain

Manik :ok then (and he runs inside)

(Nandini goes to children and ask to play with them and all the children became happy.suddenly one child come and says to nandini)
child:di let's sing and dance

Nandini:but i don't know how to sing and dance

child:its ok di zst follow us and all starts to sing

Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom...
Ghode Jaisi Chaal Haathi Jaisi Dum
O Saawan Raja Kahaan Se Aaye Tum
Ghode Jaisi Chaal Haathi Jaisi Dum
O Saawan Raja Kahaan Se Aaye Tum
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom (Nandini is enjoying with the children when someone starts to sing and she turns around and see manik and become happy)
Koi Ladki Hai Jab Vo Hansti Hai(children pulls her and start to sing)
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
(manik comes near her and dance with them and start to sing)
Koi Ladki Hai Jab Vo Hansti Hai
Baarish Hoti Hai Chhanar Chhanar Chhumchhum (nandini became and excited by holding his and sings)


Koi Ladka Hai Jab Vo Gaata Hai
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Arre Koi Ladka Hai Jab Vo Gaata Hai
Saawan Aata Hai Ghumar Ghumar Ghumghoom
Koi Ladka Hai Jab Vo Gaata Hai
Saawan Aata Hai Ghumar Ghumar Ghumghoom

Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Ho Ho Ho Ho
Hey Hey Hey Hey(both tries to do do different weird act and children starts to laugh)
Baadal Jhuke Jhuke Se Hain
Raste Ruke Ruke Se Hain
Kya Teri Marzi Hai Megha
Par Hum Ko Jaane Na Dega(
Aage Hai Barsaat Peechhe Hai Toofan
Mausam Beimaan Kahaan Chale Humtum(both remember they are stuck in office)
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Koi Ladki Hai Jab Vo Hansti Hai
Baarish Hoti Hai Chhanar Chhanar Chhumchhum
Koi Ladka Hai Jab Vo Gaata Hai
Saawan Aata Hai Ghumar Ghumar Ghumghoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Ho Ho Ho Ho
Hey Hey Hey Hey
Ambar Jhuka Jhuka Sa Hai
Sab Kuchh Ruka Ruka Sa Hai
Chhaya Samaa Kitna Pyaara
Saawan Ka Samjho Ishaara
Aise Mausam Mein Tum Bhi Kuchh Kaho(nandini remember their close proximity in office and blush)
(manik comes holds her hand made to see him)Tum Bhi Kuchh Karo Khadi Ho Kyon Gumsum(both have eye lock and lost in another worlds when children voice break their trance) )
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Ghode Jaisi Chaal Haathi Jaisi Dum
O Saawan Raja Kahaan Se Aaye Tum
Ghode Jaisi Chaal Haathi Jaisi Dum
O Saawan Raja Kahaan Se Aaye Tum
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Koi Ladki Hai Jab Vo Hansti Hai
Baarish Hoti Hai Chhanar Chhanar Chhumchhum
Koi Ladka Hai Jab Vo Gaata Hai
Saawan Aata Hai Ghumar Ghumar Ghumghoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Chakdhoom Dhoom Chakdhoom Dhoom
Ho Ho Ho Ho
Hey Hey Hey Hey
Ho Ho Ho Ho
La La La...
(all of them enjoying but suddenly nandini feels someone tap on her shoulder)

sry guys for the crap bear with me and plz don't do kanjusi in comments
Edited by sarutask - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Wow!
Awesome!
Loved the chapter..
Waiting for the next chaptper
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
great update
keep up the good work :)
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
different concept ..
lazy nandu n dedicated manik
update soon
Edited by lovemylyf - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
its just amazing..
nyc n cute..
just update fast .
thanks for this..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
guys m really disappointed by all ur reaction noone has the interest to this ff guys i need all ur support to continue this ff but seems lyk noone can support me

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