MORE THAN FRIENDS..!? - PART 12 PG 63 - Page 11

Originally posted by: NAVYA64

Awesome update

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Cute it was :)

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Wow awesome update dea. ...

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Originally posted by: dhrits_24

Awww...dat was such cute n a lambaaa update...🤗thnx for dat...no words for MaNan...how cute can they b...Alya jealous😆Cabir n Dhruv giving her brains😆...m soo loving dis...Plz cont soon...Wid lot of MaNan, and some MaNanBir and MukNi also😊😉tc..

Originally posted by: angel2015

Firstly ...sorry for a late Comment...I just read your story ..it was an amazing update...such cute buddies they are...iam loving manan..and you write so well...plz continue soon..and thanks for the pm...

Loads of love
Kajal 😉

Originally posted by: baani9

Aww so cute update.
Wow hope they soon realize their feelings for each other n don't want third person between them pls.
Continue soon

Originally posted by: parthholic

Awww!!! Such a cute ff till now!! I just love the way you write!! The Bonding between MaNan aww! So cute!! Do continue with the amazing job!! Thanks

Hey guys I'm back with the update...I know its too soon compared to the last updates... :P but I just got some free time so decided to use it wisely...

Well I really have no idea how bad or good this update is... but I would definetly want you guys to let me know if you liked it or not...

So happy reading...

CHAPTER 5

[Soon they both got off the bed and got freshend up turn by turn without knowing what was waiting for them.]

Both were soon ready and were moving down towards the hall to grab some evening snacks as their stomach had started growling with hunger. They got out of the room and started walking downstairs having their hands entangled while manik had his other hand placed around her neck pulling her more closer, she was completely leaning over him and he was happily supporting her by carrying all her weight on himself. The were just too much engrossed in each others company that they totally failed to notice their surroundings. They were laughing, giggling over their own lame jokes, randomly throwing punches at each other and slapping each other's arms. They just weren't bothered about what was going on around them, but there was someone who was again furious watching them like this... and yes it was none other than alya..! seeing them like this again just couldn't control herself anymore and decided to call for mukti druv and cabir. She was just about to turn back to look for them when she saw them already standing behind her and smiling like fools as if they have lost some screw of their head. And seeing them happily admiring the duo she again got even more furious as expected them to react at least this time. But little did she know that MANAN were already everyone's favorite pair which they would never like to see apart. She was hell pissed and so she started shouting on them to take out her frustration...

Alya : What the hell guys ? what's wrong with you ? you are still standing here like statues and there they are enjoying themselves...!! Aren't we supposed to yell and be angry at them? Have you forgotten already?

Cabir: Oh just please for god sake alya just please shut up and give your brain a little rest. Why are you behind those two poor souls ever since morning?? They haven't done any serious crime.

Mukti : Exactly alya.!! They are here now anyways, we have got ample of time to get back to them. And I'm sure they must be having a valid reason. So just calm done alright. Please for sometime keep your feelings aside and try to think from their perspective too.

Dhruv : Yes alya just calm down..

( while these four were busy arguing among themselves ,manik and nandini had already walked down and spotted them and now they were standing right behind them. Their sudden appearance at his place made them confused and they couldn't stop their curiosity and jumped in between the conversation.)

Manik: Guys? What are you all doing here? is everything ok? And what are you all talking about? Did we miss anything???

(he said while putting his arm around her waist and pulling her in front of him and resting his chin on her shoulder almost back hugging her and swaying her along with him.)

Cabir: (while stammering ) No...noth...nothing... nothing happened yaar. Tu bhi kya puch raha h..? hame kya hoga? Kuch nahi..! kuch bhi toh nahi..

Manik: Accha? Toh tell me one thing... why are you stammering ? (he said with a winning smile indicating a " CAUGHT YOU" look.)

Cabir: Stammering? Me ? nahi toh..

Achha who chod tu yeh bata...subha se kidhr tha? Do yoy have any idea how much worried we were? And you? Didn't even find it important to inform us once what ever the matter was? We tried calling you so many times... but no use... cause you guys didn't even bother to check your phones right?

And with this manan realized what they have done... they forgot to inform them ...how could they be so careless..? they thought to themselves and hung their heads down with guilt. Making a cute pout , with extremely adorable irresistible expressions asking for an apology , "Sorry" they said together and started explaining everything to all four of them trying to justify their carelessness. Everyone went all awe on the way they were telling them with such cute expressions that melted all their anger within a minute. The immediately forgave them and pulled them into a hug after knowing how much these two poor souls had to work. While alya was standing aside and watching all this happen with eyes full of jealousy. But our cabir having no idea what was going on in her mind, unintentionally decided to add fuel to the already flaming fire.

Cabir: So ... pillow fight haan? Who be raat me akele? Are you sure the mess was only because of pillow fights or...you know many things can happen between a girl and a boy... who are all ALONE in a room, you know...what am saying...things can get WILD... and out of control sometimes...which can...

(he said all this with a smirk purposely stressing on specific words taking full advantage of the situation and teasing them. But before he could continue he was rewarded with a punch straight into his stomach along with the angry glares which manik is actually famous for...!!)

Manik : Cabirrr... (he growled at him while punching him again but of course while making sure he is not too badly hurt.)

Although alya was angry and in her jealously mode that time but she thought it to be the perfect opportunity to try her luck with manik. So she quickly moved forward and attempted to stop the fight and started with her buttering session, overloading the atmosphere with all her mushy mushy talks...

Alya: Oh my baby must be so tired na?? you had to clean all that stuff only because of this nandini ..!!

(alya said while clinging onto manik, putting her hands around his neck trying to pull him closer while all this nandini was only trying to control her smile seeing her best friend in such a situation with a irritated expression on his face as she very well knew how much he hates it but she didn't knew what are its consequences going to be this time. And alya continued...)

But you know what? If I had been in her place na... I wouldn't have even let you touch anything.. I would have done it all by myself..after all how can I trouble my baby na?

(and this was it for manik to handle... first cabir and now this alya...oh god why me???- he thought..!

And seeing his changing expressions after hearing what she finally said all the smile on nandu's face faded and now she was scared thinking what her monster will do to alya.)

Manik: Listen alya...(he started saying in a stern yet a soft tone maintain a cold expression while pulling her out from him and pushing her a little back so that she is no more clinging onto him.) First of all stop calling me baby..!! I'm not your baby... the only thing your are supposed to call me is MANIK...that's it. And secondly... what did you say? Because of nandini? Like really? Ok then let me tell you... it wasn't nandini alone responsible for the mess but me too... so I was bound to do that. And even if wasn't, yet I would have happily done that for her, cause I can do anything for her and this was just not a big deal. So stop trying to make it look like one, and one more thing, how many times have I told you stop trying all these cheesy things with me dammit. We are friends and that's all we can ever be. So stop ruining our friendship...

(he started of with a dead serious tone with his eyes tured red due to anger...after all she dared to blame his nandu...how can he even think of sparing her...he was spitting fire and all alya could do was tremble in fear...she never expected him to burst out at her like that...but as his words started registering in her mind his anger started making sense to her and she cursed herself to push the wrong buttons at a wrong time. And just when he was about to say more he saw nandu's scared face... and that was enough to tell him what was going on in her mind and then just to the situation a bit easy he started moving towards nandu and pulled her in a side hug a started at her lovingly making a cute apologetic face...and continued speaking to a;ya but this time in a much calm tone while still starting in his nandu's eyes and keeping her in his embrace...)

Manik: And one more thing, you really need not care about me, I have got my nandu for that.. right nandu?

(and with this he quickly pecked her forehead and gave her his charming smile. But suddenly mukti spoke up...)

Mukti: Whoooah guys hold on..!! Too much of action drama and romance for the day but for now I guess my choti will be hungry... she has worked so much since morning , I'm sure she has not eaten anything ...kyu choti?

(she said while pulling her choti i.e. nandu from manik's embrace and hugging her, while manik made a sad pout and seeing that cabit hit him behind his head and said...)

Cabir : Mr.Manik Malhotra , she sure might be your best friend but kindly do not forget that she is our choti too... infact my cute little chotu si, golu molu si, chubby cheeks wali sister... Haina nandu??

(he said it while pulling her from mukti side hugging her to... to which she happily reciprocated at first but then when he started calling her names, the chotu monster in her awoke and she started hitting him on his chest trying to push him away so that she can more properly hit him but he wasn't ready to leave her, she was making all sorts of efforts but cabir had finally managed to hold her both hands in place and started apologizing to her but she was just adamant and not ready to understand. So finally mukti jumped in between instead of manik and pulled cabir's ears making him cry in pain and loosen his grip on nandu. Nandu was free now and was jumping in air calpping her hands enjoying the scene having a broad smile on her face.)

Mukti : Bol... karega pareshaan meri choti ko?

Cabir : Arey no no never.. I'm sorry I'm sorry baba maaf kardo please...

And with this all burst out laughing and mukti finally left his ear which had turned red by now.

Everyone now with smile on their faces left for having the evening snacks. All of them took their places on the chairs placed around the table in the garden. Manik and nandini were sitting together side by side followed by cabir on nandus left side with mukti and dhruv sitting opposite to them.

Everyone was laughing , feeding each other and having fun forgetting the incident that happened just a while before and were enjoying to their fullest.

They were finally done eating and all had started moving inside the mansion again just when dhruv stopped in the middle while everyone started at him confusingly.

Dhruv : Guys... Where's alya?

And that was enough to make everyone panic...

End...

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Awesome update dea. ...

Nice update yaaa ...when will they realize their feelings hope so soon ...nd only thing i can say for this update is Alya ko bhul gae he log ROFL ...🤣continue soon..