MORE THAN FRIENDS..!? - PART 12 PG 63

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Well guys...hie there...

I'm Apurva...and it's the very first time that I'm trying to write something...

Please try to bear with me...and do give it a chance...


MORE THAN FRIENDS...!!!




PROLOGUE


This is a story of a sweet little girl who belongs to a middle class family and is very jovial and bubbly in nature. She indeed defines beauty. She was never a scholar but always an average scorer. Well how can she even manage to score when all she does the entire day is to pamper her child like best friend ;her neighbor who lives in a huge mansion exactly opposite to hers. They always used to hang around together, play cute but healthy pranks on every one, share their lunches , have sleepovers, and what not. Fighting with each other was like their daily routine, they always used to have cute fights on nothing and everything but at the end of the day one would always find them running behind each other ... one running for apology while the other faking anger. Even their parents wished to always see them like this. Happy with each other. But who knows what destiny has planned for them.

These two have always been the best of friends since their childhood days, they were in the same class ever since they were 1st graders. They were more like a madly in love couple than best friends, they would understand each other more than anyone else and if you dare to mess with one the other wont think twice before digging your grave. This was their bond , innocent like a child's first cry, and pure just like the one from the fairy tales. But do fairy tales and happy endings really exists? Will they ever be able to find their happily ever after?

Well I really don't know if I have written good or even up to the mark as per the other stories on this forum but I just wanted to give it a try . This is just a PROLOGUE... I have always being reading stories from here but never dared to write one but finally I did it... And the only thing I want right now is your feed back...

If you all liked it even a single bit then please hit the like button and leave your comments n please tell if I should continue...depending on the feed backs ill decide if it should be a OS, SS OR A FF.

Thank you...!!!

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Alishba145 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept
Continue soon
All the very very best
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alishba145

Nice concept

Continue soon
All the very very best

Thank you so much...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is indeed very beautiful.. I really like the concept..do continue soon..

Thanks for the pm
All the best..

Loads of love
Mahi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel2015

This is indeed very beautiful.. I really like the concept..do continue soon..

Thanks for the pm
All the best..

Loads of love
Mahi

Thank you so much dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like the way you write and the first part was good
I like how you didn't potray her as the Number 1 student, it isnt easy to keep up with good grades if You don't study regularly

Excited whether they are aware of their Love for each other or are still in denial mode

Do continue!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chair1992

I like the way you write and the first part was good
I like how you didn't potray her as the Number 1 student, it isnt easy to keep up with good grades if You don't study regularly

Excited whether they are aware of their Love for each other or are still in denial mode

Do continue!!!!

Aww thank you so much
That was really sweet...
N ya i wll sure cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii Apurva
fabulous update
Thanks for PM
it's nice nd unique concept
continue soon
update soon
b'coz can't wait long after reading prologue

Lots of love,
Samruddhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting that child lyk best friend must be manik? :D

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