MORE THAN FRIENDS..!? - PART 12 PG 63 - Page 10

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Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

just now i read all part one in go...
it was amazing...i jus loved it
u penned it so well dea...
while reading only one word came from my mouth is jus wow!!
the way u write is jus outstanding...
plsss continue soon
eagerly waiting for next part

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Here's the update guys... hopefully I've written it long enough this time.

And I am really sorry but I cant promise to give you updates during the week days cause I really don't get time .

But I will sure update during weekends without fail. And longer ones possibly.

For now enjoy the update...have a happy reading...!!

CHAPTER 4

Jealousy...

After finishing their breakfast with enough tender and care.. they were about to step out of the door just when their mothers made an entry from front. They were forced to stop their footsteps from moving ahead when they saw Mansi and Priyanka shooting them angry glares. Not able to make out the reason for their anger Manik questioned them In a confused tone, " What's wrong? Why are you both staring at us like that? We are just going to college...!". " Ohh really manik? You forgot so soon? The mess you have created yesterday in your room... you have to clean it, and only then you are allowed to step out of this house..!" Mansi ordered them in a stern voice. Hearing this both of them instantly shot their eyes wide open trying to make out if what they heard was really true or not. Having it confirmed finally they changed their expressions from shocked to a adorable puppy face having a sad look and turned their heads towards Priyanka who was silently standing there and watching all this. As soon as they turned their heads towards her even she in an angry voice started shouting at them avoiding their puppy faces. " Don't you dare try to escape out of this. Have you even seen the condition of the room, it seems as if it was hit by a cyclone..!! There's no space left to even place a step inside it."

"And now that's it I don't want to hear anything from the two of you. And these cute expressions of your's aren't working today so save it for later. So quietly walk in and start with your work. The sooner you finish the sooner you get to go.!!!"

And with this having no other option left they both hung their head down and walked in quietly. Soon they were in his room along with the necessary items needed for cleaning. As soon as they entered the room even they were left all baffled cause they really hadn't felt the need to spare a glance at the room after that night and now that they have finally seen it even they were left with their eyes popping out of their sockets as the room was no less than a dumping yard, in fact even a dumping yard might have been more organized compared to the present condition of the room, cause it was just horrible...with a capital H...!!!

Nandu just stood there in the door while wondering how much time its gonna take to clean this all up, how tiring it will be and all the other possibilities. She was feeling tired already by only looking at all the work to be finished, and this was noticed by manik. Understanding what was going on in her mind without waiting for her to put it in words he decided to ease the atmosphere a little bit for her. He quickly picked up a cushion lying near his fit and aimed it on her head. And she was shocked not able to understand what was happening. She was hell angry now, there was already so much to do and this guy standing here was not even a bit serious ... in fact he wasn't even out from the mood of last night. This made her even more furious and she started running behind him with a cushion in her hand while scolding him and saying all kinds of abuses that came into her mind.

Nandu: You jerk, you fool , you're such a waste fellow you shameless creature do you even understand what are we here for. We've gotta clean this shit outta here and instead of helping me you want to continue with this pillow fight ?? seriously how can you be such a kid manik? I'm warning for last time if you don't want to help me you can just walk out I wont stop you... but just don't increase my work..!!

(she said this while running behind him all over the room ,climbing on top of the bed , jumping on the couch, while continuously bombarding him with cushions. While he was just running for his life which was now in danger. )

As soon as she finished saying this he instantly turned around and stopped there itself causing nandu to lose her control and crash into him. He held her by her shoulders and gave her support to stand again. He lovingly looked in her eyes and said...

Manik: Nandu ... My chotu monster just chill doll. How much tension do you take. I did that only to lighten your mood but look here toh you are planning to murder me. Calm down meri jaan itnaa gussa itna tension mere chotuse baby ke naak pe? Why do you take so much tension when you know that I'm there with you? You know na I wont let anything happen to my baccha ... then?

So just relax now okk? We will manage it together. Cause when MANAN is together ... there's nothing to fear..!!!

And this finally bought a smile on her face relaxing the frown on her forehead which was caused due to stress some time ago. But still she wasn't totally satisfied. And sensing that before she could start with her non stop rants once again manik stopped her and asked her to start her work as they had wasted too much time already. And agreeing to him they both finally started of their work with of course a lot of teasing , fun, cute fights and what not.

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Here on the other side there were five people waiting for them in the college continuously glancing at there watches, cell phones and every single medium which could possibly tell them the exact time. They didn't even spare the passer by students , as they would randomly pounce on anyone asking them for the time thinking that might be there's some problem in their watch. But they were disappointed again after realizing that their watches are indeed showing the right time, its only their two dumb best friends who are late... .in fact TOO LATE..!!

It had been three hours now that they had been waiting and now it was the limit of their patience. They tried calling them almost more than a hundred times now yet not a single call was answered nor call backed. And now they were hell pissed. So they decided to barge into the malhotra mansion.

(LOCATION :~MALHOTRA MANSION)

All four of them had reached the malhotra mansion and without wasting a second they strode towards the room where the duo was happily relaxing now not at all aware about what was going on in the world, nor they knew in what trouble they are now..!!

The 4 of them reached his room and banged open the door with a loud thud which didn't really seemed to affect the duo who had crashed themselves into the bed after a hell lot of tiring work.

As soon as they all entered the room the scene they saw melted their anger to a certain limit while there was just one person among them who was left hell pissed after seeing this all. And that person was none other than alya...!

(Yes alya as I earlier said has a huge huge crush on manik but manik doesn't even give a damn about it. Infact he gets irritated with her stupid cheesy acts, all the mushy mushy things she tries to do to get him. But he has to tolerate her only for the sake of their friendship.)

Seeing the duo so cozily sleeping in each others arms all of them actually had forgotten their purpose of barging in like this. They were busy admiring the duo who looked really tired and they felt to just leave them alone and let them rest and they would handle them later once they wake up. Cabir Mukti and Dhruv were just about to turn and leave the room when all of a sudden Alya stopped them and gave them a disbelieving look. She expected them to do something, or at least wake them up so that she doesn't have to see them like this but to her shock they didn't do anything. But she was in no mood for leaving. She started shouting on top of her voice not caring about anything or anyone else.

Alya : What the hell guys...!! how can you just simply leave ? did you forget what are you her for? We all were so worried for these two and here they are happily dozing off in each others arms and you people are just leaving them like this??

(cabir quickly pulled her out of the room closing the door of the room shut so that they don't disturb the sleeping duo.)

Cabir : listen alya.. I know why you are reacting like this. But this is just not the right place nor the right time. We all know that these two can never get so careless unless they have a reason, and can't you just see how tired they look. Why can't you just let them be?

( hearing this alya was left with nothing else to protest and prove her point... but still she didn't just feel like giving up...)

Alya : But cabir we can at least wake them up..?

Cabir : No..we are not waking them up. They are tired let them sleep. And do not argue any further.

( every one knew what was the reason behind alya's such behavior but they chose not to start the topic now as it can create a mess again and spoil everyone's mood which they didn't want to happen.)

While these two were busy in arguing ,due to the noise there was one person who's deep and beautiful slumber was disturbed. But he chose not to wake up as he didn't want to disturb the sleep of his cute chotusa baby who was sleeping peacefully in his arms cuddling into him with her head dug in his chest ,arms wrapped around his waist with a leg placed across his both legs forbidding him of any kind of movement. She was sleeping carrying a cute pout on her pink rose petal like lips with her messy hair was spread across the pillow giving her a wild and sexy look. And he was getting vague ideas while seeing her like this. They might be best of friends but at the end of the day they are two people with opposite sex. Their proximity at this moment wasn't helping him a bit it was doing wonders on him and filling his mind with dangerous thoughts which he hadn't experienced with anyone else before. He was continuously repeating in his mind having a self talk with himself, "control manik malhotra control, she is your best friend your jaan, you are not supposed to get such ideas about her, yeah its wrong just calm down please. Just relax... breathe in breathe out. In and out..in and out...yeaaahhh...!!!". when he thought he was finally successful after almost 10minutes of efforts of trying to control his half awaken urges when he felt her head moving more into him digging in his neck, he could feel her calm hot breaths over his neck with her soft lips slightly brushing over his nape creating havoc in his senses, he felt all his efforts effortlessly flying out of the window. Suddenly again he flet a movement in her body when he felt her hand repositioning from his waist slowly moving towards his chest while softly caressing his body in the way. Her hand finally rested on his left chest exactly where his heart was placed and that was it for him he couldn't take it any longer, her proximity was torturing him like hell and he didn't want to lose control over himself and end up doing something he doesn't want to. He felt his adam's apple move, and without wasting any more time he carefully untangled himself from her and placed her head on the pillow giving her another bunch of pillows to hold under her instead of him so that her sleep doesn't get disturbed. As soon as he was done with it he rushed into the washroom.

(do I need to tell you what happened in then?? Naahhh..!!:-P I don't thinks so...)

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While this was happening inside the room there was something totally opposite happening outside.

Cabir , Dhruv ,Mukti ,Alya all four were in the hall waiting for the duo to wake up. CabRuvTi were happily relaxing in the hall while munching over the snacks brought by the butler as Priyanka and Mansi were at Nandu's place. Whereas Alya was restlessly pacing to and fro in the hall. She was really jealous this thime as she had never seen them like this before. She had seen them together always but only while holding hands, cuddling each other in a friendly manner, protecting each other , but never like this before. Her insecurities were growing with each passing second.

Alya : what the hell on earth are you guys planning to do..?? its been soo much time already yet you guys aren't ready to pick your asses up and go to them. What's wrong with you people how much more time do you want to give them??

(she said in an angry irritated voice and continued...)

Look guys if you don't wanna come and just sit here and simply increase the temperature of the seats then you're most welcomed but I ain't standing here anymore, I'm walking in and waking them up right away.

Saying this she was about to walk away when suddenly dhruv held her by her arm and stopped her.

Druv : Alya what are you doing ?its been just 20 mins since we are here, don't forget they are our friends before anything else. Just let them be.. or else you wouldn't want manik to again get angry on you right?

( dhruv tried to find excuses to stop her and make her understand and not want Manik to be angry on her she backed off immediately as she knew how dangerous his anger is when it comes to such things specially his nandu.)

Alya : Yeah you're right I don't want that to happen.

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Inside the room

Manik had now come out of the washroom and was sitting on the bed besides his angel. And was busy admiring her. How cute can someone be..!? ...he thought. That's when he saw her moving a bit and slightly trying to open her eyes while stretching her hands upwards indicating that she was fresh again now...!! She finally managed to open her eyes completely and saw the most desired sight once again and that was of her BEST FRIEND, for the second time in that day after waking up and she mentally declared it to be the best day till now.

He slightly inched forward towards her giving her a lovely peck on her forehead wishing her, " Good evening sleepy head..!!" with a charming smile to which she replied cutely in a baby accent, " I'm not a sleepy head you monster, but anyways good evening...!!" she started with a cute angry tone but she ended wishing him enthusiastically again, to which he slightly chuckled and wrapped his arm around her shoulder pulling her in a side hug to which she happily reciprocated...

Manik: So now you happy ? we finally finished the cleaning business..? that to perfectly before time..!!

Nandu : Yes my monstu... I'm soo happy but this is all because of you...if you weren't there then god only knows what would have I done..!! thank you shoo muchhh...!!!! (saying this she quickly pecked his cheeks..!!)

Manik : Areyy what have I done.? If you have forgotten then let me tell you that this punishment was given to both of us not you alone... so I had to do it na? how could I leave my baby alone to do all the work.. baby was already so tired..!

Nandu : So what Manik? I know you have never done such things before, nor have you even imagined of doing it, but you did it for me only. Isliye thank you...!!!

Manik: C'mon jaan you know I can do anything for you and this was toh such an easy task, and how could I let you do it all alone. I must be MANIK MALHOTRA but before that I'll always be your monstu and baccha get it?

(saying this he just quickly pecked again on her forehead and eyed her not to say anything further and she obeyed like a good girl and simply bobbed her head in a yes.)

Soon they both got off the bed and got freshend up turn by turn without knowing what was waiting for them.

Soo... I hope you like the update...

I hope I didn't get over board and bored you guys...!!!

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Wow awesome update dea. ...

Awww...dat was such cute n a lambaaa update...🤗thnx for dat...no words for MaNan...how cute can they b...Alya jealous😆Cabir n Dhruv giving her brains😆...m soo loving dis...Plz cont soon...Wid lot of MaNan, and some MaNanBir and MukNi also😊😉tc..

Firstly ...sorry for a late Comment...I just read your story ..it was an amazing update...such cute buddies they are...iam loving manan..and you write so well...plz continue soon..and thanks for the pm...

Loads of love
Kajal 😉

Aww so cute update.
Wow hope they soon realize their feelings for each other n don't want third person between them pls.
Continue soon

Awww!!! Such a cute ff till now!! I just love the way you write!! The Bonding between MaNan aww! So cute!! Do continue with the amazing job!! Thanks