The Elevator- MANAN SS... CHAPTER3A,B on Page21 - Page 10

wow...such a long update...

Waise is she actually hallucinating
all those thing?
God what happened?
Kuch samajh me ni aaraha,
but I like it, actually love it.
Bas ab jaldi se next part,
can't wait to read it.

why? why? why?..I read both chapter together and I know chapter 2 was really long..but why it ended..I never wanted it to end!!..I loved it soo much..!! poor nandini hallucinations hehe!!..kuch bhi mtlb!!..manik kitna sharif banta hai..aur kitna chalu hai hehe!!..pagal kr diya nandu ko!!..hahaha..I just can't stop laughing and blushing na!!..hehe loved all kisses..ghr mei bhi ghuss gya!!..can't wait for the realisation hitting nandini..bechari pagal hojayegi!!..manik ki real identity ptta chali toh..toh ptta nhi kya hogga!!..uff too much fun!!..loved cabir and alyas reaction on maniks loveria!!..waiting for party fun..!!...

Please continue soon..!!..


Ps-I too love Alu Arjun..but I've watched only dangerous khiladi and lucky the racer :P

chala..chala dimag abhi chala..abhi samja muje ss ka naam elevator kyun hai...*-*...hehe!!..hass mat..!!

PS-tub light bhi nhi phool-jadi hun mei!!..time lagta hai analyse krne mei calculate krne mei!!.. :P

Superb... what an update... hehehe the kiss in the elevator... and then nandu's confusion about it being real or just her imagination... awww poor nandu... I mean what a brilliant concept uh have come up with... I was like what was that... I myself got confused that what was actually happening... but finally I got to know it was all for real and nothing was her imagination or should I say hallucinations... I loved the part where manik held cabir's neck for teaching hallucination stuff to nandini... and manik's craving for nandini well it's like she is oxygen to him... it was very extraordinary...I am dumbfounded... I mean seriously this was one hell of a post... just commendable... It was beyond the limits of brilliance... it was that awesome... uh have an amazing talent... your creativity is just mind blowing... uh always just amaze me with your such incredibly excellent and beautiful post... I loved it sooo sooo much... hatss off to uh... I bow down before uh and your talent... well done... thank uh soo much for the pm... really appreciate it yrr... please continue very very soon... waiting sooo sooo eagerly... keep it up girl... best wishes... :) :D

Awsm..loved it..poor nandu..she is so innocent.. And manik mr prfct..he really rocks..continue soon
Thanks fr pm

I love your story. Post the next part soon. Waiting eagerly! <333
Read it twice already. :$

Next part plzzz

VERY NICE ONE

Heyyy...when will u update?cant wait more dea...desperately waiting...update soon