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Suprabha

@shaanmaan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#171

It was an amazing update
finally nandu knows
about manik's feelings nd
the truth is out now
its more exciting to know
what will come ahead

update jldi
waiting

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parul.pandey

@parul.pandey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

ohhh goddd

haste haste pet me dard ho gaya

jadoo hai yaar tumhari writing me

accha ek baat batao nandini sach me to pagal nahi hai

thoda doubt hai mujhe

uski harkato se lagta hai ki wo pagal hai

cabirrr bechara dono taraf se fas gaya

manik to already use nahi chodne wala tha

aur nandini ne to suru kar diya uska ilaaj karna

navya navya ye tumne jo bhi kiya theek kiya

manik samne to aaya warna nandini to pagal ho jati

and appa ohhh goddd ab nandini ka kya hoga

hahahaha

thanks dear

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pnlove

@pnlove

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#173

your story is just awesome

loved it to the core

waiting for the next update eagerly

get well soon

about the story i liked every bit of it

and the most interesting part of your story is nandini she is so funny i am in love with her

Edited by pnlove - 10 years ago

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samyukta poudel

@Samyukta_p

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#174

i have been waiting for this post fr so long ...but my wait was worth it

amazing

lovely

super duper awsm update

but nxt time say itna wait matkarwana

love d drunken nandu

mainly her call to aapa ...that was 2much

n aaba nandu ki ghussa kaam karwado bichara manik majnu ki tara use pyaar karta hai

update soon n thanks for pm

love

samyukta😊

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star_struck

@star_struck

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#175

So now the thing is..that I read your story after mid-night..so it was it is my birthday and girl you made it really really special for me..tysm for such a great update..

I only know how I've escaped from my friends siblings to write this comment hehe..

But wooow what a update re..right from her drunken state to her reality state..it was way more amazing...loved it!!

Lalten..lamp hehe..I got it :D

All the songs you selected were bang on..okay I'll tell you I read that Malik tere bande hum..as Manik tere bande hum..hehe..you know na lamp hi hun mei...

Hehe kya jatka laga hai nandu ko..phele hallucinations ka..fir manik loves her ka...and than he is her Md...uff poor innocent soul!!

Now looking forward to her shaitani dimag!!..hehe kya jhol kregi woh..

babu dhang ka promo toh de detti.. I'm really greedy for this one!!..hehe...

PS-I loved Mr.Grey ka Manik :P

continue soon
thank for pm..
love you Aqsa :* ^-^

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music_manan

@music_manan

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Hi,I jst go through ur all parts. It's awesome n vry good. Chapter 3 is hilarious n beautiful both. U penned down the nandini's character vry beautifully. It's interesting to see Tht she will be able to take revenge or accept his love. Get well soon n take care of yourself. Waiting for ur update.

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Absa hasna

@Hasi-Pani1

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Omg!! what an amazing update..
i have no words to say...am totally speechless...its jus WOW update...u penned it so well dea...manan scene is pure blisss...finally manik confessed...hayiii maar dala!! n nandu ka gussa chad gaya chathper...
hope nandu realise her feeling soon...
plsss update soon dea...cant wait so long...plsss try to give update regularly...
m eagerly waiting for ur next part...keep writing...
n hats offf 2 u dea...ir the best writer

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dhrits_24

@dhrits_24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Ohhh Myyy Goooddd...2 looonnnggg parts...👏 Thank u 4 dat

N what are u up2 girl...u cracked me up badly...I had a hard time controlling my laughter...😆🤣😆🤣😆🤣😆🤣😆🤣😆🤣😆🤣...like seriously

Ok cmng to the update...CaVya romancing n Manik interupting 😆🤣 sounds like deja vu bt in a different way, through role reversals😆🤣instead of Cabir interfering in MaNan's romance it's the other way round,...😆🤣 Navy'as Rakshash n Manik's Madubala continuing n poor soul Cabir being shuttled between the two😆🤣...n wait - this was the only thing left to crack me up more badly - A Drunk Nandini 🤣 n the songs...seriously tl me girl what got into u while writing - what songs 😆🤣 Sarkayeliyo khatiya 😆🤣 Mera Piya ghar aaya 😆🤣 n the epic one - Raat akeli hai 😆🤣 She called her appa 😆🤣😆🤣😆🤣 n the cab driver - free k slaps pade bichare ko n he ran away 😆🤣

N finally Happy Realization time for Nandini😛 I loved Manik's entry as the MD n also his confession. Now waiting for Nandu's confession😉 N how nicely Manik handled her...he did not cross his limits for Nandu's trust...I hope everything gets sorted soon between the two...they both r sooo cute...n wait did Nandini's Appa really arrived...whts gonna happen...*bitting nails*...

U really cracked me up badly with this update...plzzz update very very very sooonnn...MaNan-ish lamba vala update...grt work👏...tc😉

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#179

that's very interesting yar .. super duper awesome.. n loved to the core.. wat a dialogue yr... nandu k dialogue just killed it...n our lover boy manik isss shooo nice.. finally secret revealed.. n m damm happy... n itss ok dear u don't hav to be sorry... n yaaa u r mind blowing n fabulous writer .. luv ur writing skills... vry shock note or end h soo.. eagerly waiting... waiting... update soon... thanksss 4 thisss.. :-) :-) :-).;-) :-D :-) ;-) :-D.;-):-) :-D ;-) :-).;-)

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Arunima

@jesse93

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Nice updates dear, after a long time though but it was damn funny yaar.
I mean Nandu 50 shades of Grey and House M.D. walon se kuch zyada hi influence hogyi hai shaayad, but whatever just love her a lot and Manik toh Manik, always my sweetheart.
Love you honey, continue soon and take care.

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