The Elevator- MANAN SS... CHAPTER3A,B on Page21 - Page 19

Oh wowiee wat an update
i ws toh most of the time rofl
nandini is so much fun
hallucinatns...hehe
she is attrctd twds him na toh why dont she say this to him
intrstng story too
nxt part jaldi plZzz

Mind blowinggg

Amazing!
Fabulous!
Superb!
Spellbound!
Bechara manik can't control around nandu..
Drunk nandu was awesome..
The most funny part was when she asked her father whether he is a virgin..
Hahaha! That was really funny..
Did manik really lose his control and did that with nandini!! :o
the pizza delivary part was also funny..
Finally manik confessed his love to nandu..
The last part and precap is quite interesting..

hahahha wht an awesum chp yarr serriouslyy i was laughing was a idiot coz i was sitting with my parents n bhai when silently i was reading ur chp n smiling n sumtyms burst out in laughing cozz of nandus song yarrr ahhahah i cant tel u how much i enjoyed n yaa u didnt pm me yarr tell me wht shuld i do ??? n yaa pls update loving her was red too n yaa when u gonna update the next chp tell me pls i m again dying to read the next chp of elevator as the precape felt like shit shit... so pls dnt make ur fans wait allot n update asap i knw i m being greedy but kya karu i m nt able to live without reading ur story yarr

Loving her sweetness and his love... looking forward to seeing what happens next...

It was a mind boggling update... uh NAILED it girl... it was a rocking update... seriously... the craving manik, cavya romance, navya's plan to get back on manik, drunk nandini, her singing sessions, then her maniac dance, manik controlling his anger, feeling to bang his head somewhere, then sometimes getting mesmerized by her pretty glowing face, then the taxi driver fun, then the apartment romance, the morning hangover, manik's sweet good morning coffee for nandini, then pizza and flowers for her, revelation of some truths, confrontation in the office, manik's love confession, nandini's self respect coming in between, then nandini having fear of stairs, manik trying to help her, then confessing his genuine love and now nandini's appa's entry... amazing... what an update... HATS OFF... uh are a superb writer... FLAWLESS... uh write sooo very well... great going... loving this story sooo damn much... thank uh soo much for the pm... really appreciate it... please continue very soon... will be waiting sooo eagerly for your update... keep up the wonderful work... best wishes to uh... stay blessed... :) :D

Beautiful - keep writing n we will keep waiting for the next chap. Thank you.

I loved ur story..bt only one thing..dnt make things to go so easily...i mean what manik did with her after that she shoulf be angry with him..and you are showing her too much mental and dramebaz..pls improve her character a little...sorry i dnt wanna criticize u..loving ur story from the bottom of my heart..bt u need to improve her character...everyone just cant say her mental...as u showed cabir alya and navya three of them were saying her almost mental...

What did do ? Kya mind blowing update tha ...by god ek Dum jhakass..maza aa gya ...
Samajh nhi aa rha how u manage to do all dis lyk humour toh har ek line m tha ...u should join aa comedy show top show bnn jaega Vo...
Coming to the update
Nandini & Navya bond was superb
Cabir Manik & Navya awesome trio
Manik teasing madhubala maaza aa gya or Jo Manik ne maze liye cabir uff dat was damn funny

Selection of songs the best part of the update ...hats off to you 👏 👏
Songs were superb ...mujhe itni hasi aa rhi thi bs puchna mat meri mom ko paga m pagal ho gi 🤣 🤣 ...
50 shades of grey part was so thoughtful superb
Pizza boy kya scene tha bang on 😃
Manik's confession was awww...moment but he totally deserved nandini's reaction ...
Cabir Ki kya waat lagi nandu ne he totally deserved it manik's partner in crime.

And do take care of ur health...

P.S. - I am big fan of urs a tight hug for my side luv u

Marvalous update... U really penned it down beautifully...
I toh jst lovee ths...
Drnk nandu, uske anataksari nd poor manik jst too good thn relisation b/w hallucination nd realitx ... Nd finaly manik propose hr nd reveal his idenitity... the climacophobia concept also nice...
Lets see hw manik manage nandini nd nandu kaise manik se reveng leti he... Sound intrstng...
Cant wait.. post asap... Nd do pm me...