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manan_0711

@manan_0711

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Ty for d pm...

oh my god...dat was Pataka wala update...

I became breathless coz of continuous laughing...

Shit u was abt to fall down frm my bed I was laughing lyk a maniac... part a was so damn awesome...I couldn't stop laughing...

god nandu in drunken state is damn cute n funny..

manik oh god hw did he manage her...haha haha...

cabir toh gaya...finally nandu knws dat she is not hallucinating...

Ahha finally every one knws who us d owner of d company...

manik...he in front of everyone kissed n said I love u to her...haww...manbir r seriously gonna pay for dis...

Plz take care of yourself...

Get well soon...

Continue soon...

'll b waiting for d update...

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#152

zonni my bachaaa its awesome dear ...

superrr se v uppperrr😉...

hahaha our nautankii nandu 🤣 ...

I like dis nandu very much full on dramaqueen ...

poor manik he is suffering 😆and that apartment wala scene😳 m blushing very hard ...

and after that nandu got jhatka its hilarious...

finally he said I love u and nandu get to knw its not her hallucinations but real...

update soon..!!!!👏

and come to DM need to talk

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shazia

@lilmissshazia

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#153

It was just fab ...
Ur story is amazing..
Unique...
Wonderful...
Amazing..
Continue soon...
I really like the drunk nandini...
It was damn cute...
Luv ur story too much...
Update soon

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100nam

@100nam

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Its so cute and hilarious

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shruti_gupta

@shruti_gupta

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Wow...amazing update ...
Drunk nandu... It was so funny...
And nandu and cabir scene was awesome...
I just loved it...
Waiting to know what will happen next...
Plz update soon...and thnx 4 the pm...

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Woww yrr damm awesoem...
Completely enjoyed it..
I mean so much fun..hehe.
Seriously nandu is fun on nautanki...
Omg what a song selecting...which she is singing during her drunken state...
Hehe..omg he puked on manik..
Driver seen was damm comedy...poor man...pehle monster manik then our mini monster...bhag gya.
Apartment part was hot...spevially mr. Grey part...
She us giving him hard time to control...aww.
Morning was like a dhamaka..
Poor pizza boy...me hi jaate hu kaise apni hasi control li he mene...bechara ka pizza bhi gya or wallet bhi...
But the truth is out that she is not hallicuating...
She is seriously really dumb even after seeing tgis much she think she is still hallicuating..
Unbelievable...
Omg so finally manik enter as an MD...sab bhi band baj gye...
Aww he propose her in front of eneryone...great.
Cabir part was also amazing...specially water splashing part...bechara gya kaam se...heheeehe
Stairs part was great...manik lifted her..
Haww nandu's appa is there...
Lets see whats nxt.

Awesome update.
Enjoyed it alot.
Update soon please.
Love...mini

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shweta...

@shweta...

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#157

It's so much fun reading ur story

I laugh giggle and make weird expressions while reading ur story

I know u r late but this update was just worth waiting

I mean alll the things which was hallucination for nandini camae true

She couldn't believ e that manik loved her the manik malhotra loved her and she should also not deny that fact that somewhere she does the same

But the end her appa gosh now what is going to happen

She asked her father if he was a virgin seriously hahahhah

And now her father saw her in manik's arm

I hope all goes fine

The precaape I couldn't understand what it says

Waiting for the next part

Plzzz update as soon as possible

Waitinggg. Eagerly...

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Myra

@Farheen_siddqui

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#158

OMG... How do u manage to write so well...???

Seriously! ! Beautifully expressed by u..!!!

Loved it. ..

Hallucinations. .!!! Hehehe no it was reality. .

Manik Malhotra. . MD.

His own apartment !!

These all came as a shock to Ms. BHOLI Nandini Murthy !!!

Cabir bechara.. got a nice one in the name of hallucinations.

I loved the part yar !!! It's awesome

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Angel

@asangel

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Sch an amzng updt... really vry fnny... chrctr of nandu is hillarious... jahaha drunk nandu is superb... nd poor mnk... Fnlly he cnfssd...nd trth reveals dt he is nt hr hallucinatn... Bt nandu must be angry on him.. i mean wt mnk did is nt good so she mst be more angry na... Wse mnk lvs hr a lot bt kissng any grl without hr prmissn nd dn cvr up dt act by namng it hallucinatn is quite embrrssd fr any grl... Bt must say u r suprb... Thnks fr dis wndrfull stry nd plz post nxt one soon...jst cnt wait

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iamash

@iamash

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#160

just awesome
commendable, fantastic, fabulous
etc etc. jo bolo vo kam hai.
in love with ur writing nd obviously this ff.
eager for d very nxt chapter.
hope u update d nxt chapter soon.
nd yes
get well soon...

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