A MANAN FF. LOVE THE PUREST EMOTION IN THIS WORLD.link th 2 pg 146 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
read all the parts in one go...
amazing...
beautifully penned...
too emotional
waiting for manik's past...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 3C.

Sometimes destiny brings tough tasks in front of us which we think is bcz of our bad luck that's why this is happening to us and we start predicting the consequences of it without knowing what actually is planned for us.

Location: Malhothra Mention, Time: 11:00am

Manik's pov

Where I am y is my surrounding so white am I dead or alive O Man! Where the hell am I. I am just standing in middle of nowhere and everything is white I cant even locate some one over here to ask about this weird place. "chn chn chn" what was that it was like voice of some ones bangles "chn chn chn" I again here this voice so I just start walking towards the direction from where this voice was coming the sound was becoming closer and closer I think I almost reach there but when I saw the sight in front of me I just froze over there it was really really beautiful it was just like a garden which was full of red roses and birds of almost all colors were flying in the sky in its middle was a very enchanting fountain which was making it more bewitching I have never seen such a beautiful place in my entire life but then I saw something, my eyes just stop over there they where not willing to move from there I saw a girl wearing white color salwar kameez was siting on fountain, ,laughing and playing with water and her bangles where making beautiful sound but that sound was nothing compere to the sound of her laughs it was so melodious I have never hear such a melodious voice. Seeing her like that my lips automatically curved into smile and unknowingly word "beautiful" escape from my mouth although I could not see her face all thanks to her long silky hairs which were covering her face but still my heart was saying she is the most beautiful girl in this world I want to see her right know so I just called her "hey listen" listening my voice she turn her face towards me. What the hell! this light ahh move this light right away I want to see her face hey hey listen ahh I just then opened my eyes sun rays were falling on my face making it difficult for me to open my eyes properly it took me whole min to come back to normal I found myself in a familiar sourrounding that was my bedroom so it was just a dream I was sitting at the same position on balcony's door and my guitar was in my lap I again rested my head on balcony door what a dream man! Manik whats wrong with u how can u dream something like this it was so fascinating but that girl who was she what was she doing in my dream and just bcz this idiot rays of sun I couldn't see her face damn my head is paining like anything may be bcz I had cried so much last night what cried! I have to be strong yes I can not become weak again I cant let my destiny to harm me again never ever I am The Manik Malhothra I am not weak or neither I will be weak yes. " Ramesh bring my coffee and breakfast" I just went inside the washroom and stood inside the cold shower I was thinking about my life how lonely I am everyone thinks how lucky I am I have everything but the truth is I am the most unlucky person who has nothing I was in my thoughts then suddenly the flashes of that girl whom I saw in my dream start coming in front of my eyes and unknown smile crept on my face. OH WTH! am I thinking ufff. When I came out of washroom I saw my breakfast and tea on table and servants were taking broken mirror out of my room. I sit down to have my meal but I didn't fell willing to eat so I just have my black coffee ,then dressed up quickly and then left for the office"

Location: MALHOTHRA INDUSTRIES, Time:12:45

I just enter inside my office in my bossy style everyone was greeting me but I as usual not paying any heed to anyone I walk inside my cabin and called my PA inside to give him some important instructions.

Aman: sir may I come in.

Me: yes come in so Aman I am going to manali today for a concert I will return probably after one week so all u have to do is keep me updating and handle the company and no mistakes get that.

Aman: yes sire I will try my best.

Me: ok so tell me anything important today?

Aman: yes sir at 1:30 you have meeting with Mehtas as we r woorking on there dream project.

Me:yeah I know its there dream(and again that girls flashes start coming in front of my eyes o hell! Y the hell am I thinking about her but she was really like a fantasy a desire I wish I could see her again uff whats wrong with me. Just then aman called breaking my lala land) .

Aman:sir sir r u listing sir.

Me:yeah yeah aman what.

Aman:sir mehtas have came they r waiting in conference room.

Me: yeah I am coming.

End of POV

Location: cabir's home, Time:4:30pm

Cabir's POV

What the hell is with manik y he wants to go over there again I cant lose my friend what if he again went into depression no but he will never listen to me what to do I cant lose my friend I was in my thoughts that my phone starts ringing seeing the callers name I just smile and mummer "perfect timing" I really need to listen her voice to calm my brain's nerves my baby my madhubhala.

Navya: hello cabir I cant sleep last night what I have done I really don't know about manik if was knowing na I wouldn't say yes but we can say no to them na we will say no yes we wont go there I will say sorry to manik also what blunder I cause I was so so stupid what cabir r u listning hello.

Me: if you will let me talk then I will answer na listen calm down it was not your mistake u didn't did that intentionally so its OK and know we cant back off manik wont let us back off. So just let it be. And u had promise u wont talk to manik about that so u cant break it get that.

Navya:but cabir.

Cabir: navya baby at the time when that inccident had happened we were not there for manik but now we r we wont let him go weak we will be his strength FAB 5 will b there for him don't worry ok everything will be fine. Ok by

Navya:by .

Yes this always help whenever I talk to her I get my answers how can I forget we fab 5 r each other's strength we will be there for him unlike last time.

End of POV.

Location:Malhothra Mantion Time:6:10

Manik's POV

I retire back to my house at late afternoon I went to my room and pack my bags for manali. After that I just throw myself on bad I was really feeling dizzy and tired.

AFTER 1HR

My slumber was disturb by continuous buzzing of my phone. My phone will never let me sleep.

Me: hello

Voice: ahh m manik itss s 7:45

Me: so

Voice:f f flight

Me:oh shit I am late navya don't worry I will b there on time.

I quickly called ramesh to tell driver to bring the car and keep my bags in the car. I dressed up quickly and left for airport.

END OF POV

Location: Mumbai Airport Time:8:30

Manik car's reach at airport and there was a buzz of people as fab 5 were going and guards were controlling them.

Manik just walk inside without paying any head he reach there where his friends were waiting and then they all board there flight to chandigur.

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so very long update scroll down there is a important note.

Edited by CROCKOMICHI - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
IMPORTANT NOTE
guys my exams r going to start and my physics cum class teacher has told my mom that i am not paying attention to my studies and she is really angry on me. i don't understand whats her problem she knows i never fail down to bring more then 96 perc ufff leave it so i cant update regularly but i will try to update as soon as i got time plz till that time bear with me and also sorry for this boring update as my first paper is of bio so my mind has become boring like bio hehehhe.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Fantastic update loved it this was long and hey I understand about your exams don't worry take your time after all that's more important but anyway loved your update especially manik's dream.😊👏 Update soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

dont worry manik nandu is coming for u...
please do continue
bye sumi

actually manik is goin to nandini heheheheh updated😉 and thanks alot sweaty.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: suv-kriyaansh

Awesome...
Read all the parts in one go
Loveddd ittt... interesting concept
Wanna knw manik's past...
Continue sooonnnishhh

thanks for liking it will try to update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Emotional update...

curious to know about his past...
the way manik poured his emotions was amazing...
lets see what is stored for us in the next updates...👏

thanks alot i will try not to make u wait longer.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: arshuaar

read all the parts in one go...
amazing...
beautifully penned...
too emotional
waiting for manik's past...


thanks i will try to revel the mystry soon.

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