A MANAN FF. LOVE THE PUREST EMOTION IN THIS WORLD.link th 2 pg 146 - Page 7

Originally posted by: kk.4

Nyc story.. Liked it.. Continue soon...😊

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Originally posted by: angel2015

Wow...it was amazing again...you are very very good ...hats off..u really showed everything very beautifully... I just loved it..plz continue soon...I guess ..someone whom manik love the most died...I guess..she died in front of him..and he wasn't able to save her..or else...I have a feeling...that girl is may be nandini only..hehehehe...and after that accident..she lost her mental balance...hehhehe...I know. .I guessed a lot...waiting for the truth to reveal

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Mahi

thanks sweatheart u r comments always encourage me and thanks for liking nd to know the truth u have to wait i am not going to open the secret soon. Nope this is my revenge from you hahahahahaha😛😉 and will update soon.

ok waiting for the next part
why is niyonika only there to make manik suffer
please do continue
bye sumi

CHAPTER 3 B.

As soon as she finishes her line a vase fell down on the ground and broke into pieces. Nyonika was startled she then look towards Manik whose eyes were blood shot red it was quite visible to her that lava inside Manik is going to explode any moment so it's better for her to leave that place in ASAPS.

Nyonika: Ramesh clean this mess right now (she then took a glimpse of Manik who was just staring the scattered pieces of vase and left from there shaking her head in disbelief).

Manik was standing there looking towards the broken pieces of vase without blinking may be he was imagining his existence which was similar to these broken and shattered pieces. Manik was standing there for hours his eyes were watery tears were threatened to flow at any moment just then a servant came there breaking his trance.

Servant: Manik sir can I clean this mess.

Manik (after composing himself): yeah clean it. (And he intent to go upstairs)

Servant: sir your dinner?

Manik (walking upstairs): I am not hungry.

Manik walk in his room which was dark he just throw his blazer on bed and came towards the mirror he saw his reflection his eyes were red and suddenly Nyonika's words start echoing in his ears "what's the need to go there. Only her grave is there. She will not get up and hug you only her grave is there only her grave is there" these voices were becoming louder he covered his ears with his hand but those were in no mood to stop "she won't get up and hug u. her grave is there. She won't hug you".

Manik just took a lamp from side table and broke the mirror and screamed loudly: shuttt uuuppp

Only this voice was echoing in the whole room for some time and Manik was breathing heavily. He was completely exhausted so he went in balcony which was attached to his room to calm himself. He stood there gazing the stars and after some time finally he spoke: God u know some stupid people think that u r there u listen to our prayers answer them u al always there for us ahh an and I was also, once one of them haa but u know what the person who once trust u more than anything today hates u the most u doesn't even exist if u were present na u wouldn't have take her away from me she died and I, I co couldn't d do an any anything b b but u u ca ca can s s save saved her nd u. (he was in tears he fell on his knees and after sometime he screamed loudly): ahhh ( pouring all his pain which was in his chest he covered his face with his hands but after some time he then compose himself and again walk inside his room and went inside the washroom he stood inside the cold shower like a lifeless soul to calm his exhausted body after more than 30 min he came out in his black vest and tracks he took his guitar and sit down leaning on balcony door and start playing his guitar with closed eyes).

Main jahaan rahoon
Main kahin bhi hoon
Teri yaad saaath hai... (2)

Kisi se kahoon
Ke nahi kahoon
Yeh jo dil ki baat hai
Kehne ko saath apane ek duniya chalti hai
Per chhupke is dil mein tanhaayi palti hai
Bas yaad saath hai
Teri yaad saaath hai... (3)
Main jahaan rahoon
Main kahin bhi hoon
Teri yaad saaath hai

Kahin to dil mein yaadon ki
Ek suli gad jaati hai
Kahin har ek tasveer bhahut hi dhondhali pad jati hai
Koi nayi duniya ke naye rango mein khush rehta hai
Koi sab kuch paake bhi yeh mann hi mann kehta hai
Kehne ko saath apane ek duniya chalti hai
Per chhupke is dil mein tanhaayi palti hai
Bas yaad saath hai
Teri yaad saaath hai... (3)

Kahin to beete kal ki jadein
Dil mein hi utar jaati hai
Kahin jo dhage tute to malaayen bhikar jaati
Koi dil mein jagah nayi, baaton ke liye rakhta hai
Koi apni palko par yaadon ke diye rakhta hai
Kehne ko saath apane ek duniya chalti hai
Per chhupke is dil mein tanhaayi palti hai
Bas yaad saath hai
Teri yaad saaath hai... (3)

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Ok I know I know its short but plz bear with it I promise I will make it up in next part. And again I am requesting to the ppl who r liking my story plz comment guys and I really need your feed backs u really don't know how much your comment means to a writer its like a payment for his or her hard work but rest is up to u.

Yayy u updated short but good felt bad for manik update the next chapter soon

U know wat
Dis song is my fav most fav...
Mujhe ye nai samjh aa rha
That is nandini died or
Leave him
Or something else
Wat happened in d past...

Superb update dear u have written manik pain beautifully and suspense is killing who as died is it nandu ya is she alive and manik don't know update soon

nice concept

hey girl! ..you again rocked..manik is badly shattered from inside..yes he needs his solace..and the song was indeed very beautiful...one of my favorites...thanks for adding in it...you are doing a fab job..please update a long one...please...am proud of you..manik's pain was really unbearable...great work..all the best..update soon..thanks for the pm..keep up the good work..

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

ok waiting for the next part
why is niyonika only there to make manik suffer
please do continue
bye sumi

thanks and updated.