A MANAN FF. LOVE THE PUREST EMOTION IN THIS WORLD.link th 2 pg 146 - Page 10

Originally posted by: maryambibi

Fantastic update loved it this was long and hey I understand about your exams don't worry take your time after all that's more important but anyway loved your update especially manik's dream.😊👏 Update soon!!!

thanks alot sweaty for understanding i will try my best to update soon.

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Awesome update

Loved it

Update the next part soon

thanks i will try to update soon.

Hey very nice update. .

hehhe sweety i totally understand u.. i am working still i am getting scolded by my mom on my birthday which was on SUNDAY for not doing anything and wasting time.
just relax and focus on ur studies.
we will wait
by the way lovely update
hehe manik already seen glimpse of nandu in dream
please do continue
bye sumi

Wow!...who said its boring...no not all...it wasn't boring...it was flawless...you just nailed it...I really like that dream sequence... So much is waiting ahead for manik..I just can't wait ..it was an outstanding update...do continue soon..and all the best for your exams...
Thanks for pm

Loads of love
Mahi

Chapter:4

Fear knocks the door, but faith opens the door, oh, no one was there. Y bcz faith was there with us so our worst has to run away. But what about a person who has lost his faith in everyone even God. Manik has lost his faith in God at the very moment when he lost the person who taught him to love God. The boy whose morning starts praying to God, who slept only after discussing his full day with all mighty today hates him the most. But sometimes, perhaps, we are allowed to get lost that we may find the right person to ask directions of. God knew that Manik shows his monster side to everyone but deep inside his heart he craved for love he wants someone who held him and gather the shattered pieces of his heart. And God has planned something weird but beautiful for him.

Location: Chandhighar Airport, Time: 11:00pm

Flight had landed and fab5 came out of the plane to collect their luggage and all.

Aliya: Navya don't tell me that after this tiring flight we have to travel all the way to Manali.

Navya: no there is a hotel reserved for us we will stay there and leave tomorrow for manali.

Dhruv: so we should collect our luggage and leave.

Fab5 were going towards the exit thankfully there was no crowd only few media reporters and some crazy fans who spotted them at airport but guards held them and didn't let them approach towards them. And they left for the hotel.

Location: Chandighur Airport, Time: 11:45pm

Navya: so guys here r the keys for your rooms so room's r on the third floor lets go.

On reaching the third floor:

Manik: so guys gn will see u tomorrow.

Mukti: ok

Cabir (holding his head): ahh my head.(Everyone get concerned). My head is spanning I think I have a headache.

Navya: come let's go to the doctor. (she held his hand)

Cabir (shouts): NO! (Then he sees that everyone looking at him suspiciously) I mean I think its bcz of the tiring flight I think I should take rest (he said winking at fab4 they all sighed understanding what is going in his so called "khurafati dimagh").

Mukti: Navya I think u should stay with Cabir he needs u right know.

Navya: yah lets go Cabir u need some rest (with that she took him to his room. Rest of all just chuckled and headed towards there room).

After a while in Cabir's room:

Cabir: Navya don't go na

Navya: wait na Cabir let me bring medicines for u from bag plz (with that she went to bags to fetch pain killers for him the bags where placed near the dressing table when she was taking out the tablets she saw Cabir's reflection who was smiling her mouth left open she understood that he was playing prank on her she went towards him and said cupping his cheeks) baby is it paining a lot.

He just nodded cutely.

Navya: ohh (she come close to him and the very next moment she start hitting him with pillow) u liar u cheater u know how scared I was and u were just playing prank I am gonna kill u.

Cabir (saving himself from Navya's attack) I am sorry I just wanna talk to u I really need u to strengthen myself for Manik.

Navya (stopped hitting him and saw in his eyes how much stressed and worried he was for his best friend who was always there for him but to his bad luck he can't do anything for him she just hug him ): I know u can share with me.

Cabir (crying): I know u r always there for me but there is no one for Manik to share his pain.

Navya: don't worry Cabir God will surely send someone to take his pain away there will be someone who will come as light in his darkness.

But little that Navya knew that her each word was right god had surely send someone for him who was waiting for him. Who will make him cry to pour out all his pain and who will give him his actual smile back which he has lost long ago.

Meanwhile in Manik's room:

It was a big room there was a master bad in between and in front of bad LCD was attached and its left was a big couch and dressing table and to its left was a small table with a lamp and a small fridge there was big window in the room. Manik was standing near the window.

Manik's pov:

I just wish this night not to get over, tomorrow I will be there. After ages but I have to meet her I have to go to her yes but I don't have that courage to see her like that how will I face after all, she is in that condition only bcz of me she was thinking she had saved my life but she had actually killed me. No not again I won't cry.

I just closed my eyes to get some peace but after few seconds of darkness I saw a light I saw the flashes of that girl her laughs her hands playing with water the sounds of her bangles I was smiling all the time thinking about her I think I can stand my whole life seeing her like this. After sometimes I open my eyes. O shit not again WTH is wrong with me why I am attracted to this dream or I say this girl. I should sleep. It's a long day tomorrow with that thought I literally threw myself on bad and curl on bed here and there but sleep was far away from my eyes.

Precap: Cabir: Manik where r u going we just reached I think u should rest.

Manik: no I have to go.

Cabir: but where r u going.

Manik (shouted): to meet her god damn it.

Cabir (shocked): u r not going anywhere.

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pheww that was it my exams r not over yet but as its weekend and i got one day gap so thought to update i will try to update next part on sat. i know story is going slow but what to do disadvantage of being new writer dont know how to gear up the story but dont worry mystery and nandini r coming up soon.

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Hey very nice update. .

So manik saw a glimpse of a gal that would becone his life in sometime

Wow just lovely

story is progressing nicely 😊

thanks i just wanted to try something different thats why

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

hehhe sweety i totally understand u.. i am working still i am getting scolded by my mom on my birthday which was on SUNDAY for not doing anything and wasting time.
just relax and focus on ur studies.
we will wait
by the way lovely update
hehe manik already seen glimpse of nandu in dream
please do continue
bye sumi

yeah my mom always scold me but she has point but see na i made a puppy face and ask her to let me use my lappy for some time she said yes. and thanks will update soon.

Originally posted by: angel2015

Wow!...who said its boring...no not all...it wasn't boring...it was flawless...you just nailed it...I really like that dream sequence... So much is waiting ahead for manik..I just can't wait ..it was an outstanding update...do continue soon..and all the best for your exams...
Thanks for pm

Loads of love
Mahi

thanks alot mahi, yeah lot of drama and many beaytiful moments r waiting for him.

when will nandu come😭😭😭