A MANAN FF. LOVE THE PUREST EMOTION IN THIS WORLD.link th 2 pg 146 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing sweetheart..i liked CaVya today...and Manik...he wanna meet HER..and am sure..in this path..he is gonna meet HIS SOLACE...really loved it..especially that dream sequence...wow!..very well written...continue soon..am waiting eagerly..
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Posted: 10 years ago
U left me spellbound and left me waiting for more
A superb update ... Emotions intact words describing it intact story line intact just awesome
It's magic hahaha
p.s. Wishing you all the best for ur exams...let them finish and then see how I'm planning to blackmail you for more and more updates hehehe
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww good update
my cabira always upto no good
please make nendu entry awesome n soon
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all parts in one go...It is really interesting
Pls PM me whenever you update 😊
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Also read my FF MANAN:Anything For You
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing
loveddd ittt
cavya was really cute
cant wait 4 manan's meeting
cntinue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice concept...plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a nice update...
i really liked cabir and navya bonding...
our cabira as usual naughty...😉
but then he was taking all his worries in front of her..awww... so cute...
the suspense is killing me...
i wanna know what happened in the past..
also waiting to see what is waiting for manik in future...
nice story...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter:5

There's an Arab proverb that states that you should write the bad things that happen to you in the sand, so that they can be easily erased from your memory. However, most of us engrave the bad things that happen to us in marble; therefore, our painful memories remain immortalized in our minds.We walk around with our failures, our mistakes, our disappointments, and our hurts from the past shackled around our ankles, weighing us down.In order to live fully in the present, and adequately plan for the future, we need to learn what we can from the painful memories of the past, and then let those memories go. Release the past, stand firmly in the present, and prepare to step confidently into the future. And destiny wanted to teach this lesson to Manik that's why it was taking him towards his worst phase of life so that he can let go his past and leave in future.

Location: Chandighur hotel; Time:11:00 am

A new day a new beginning in the morning Navya knocked on everyone's door to wake them up and when she knocked on Manik's door it get open in first knock itself and Manik was standing all ready in black Armani's suit his hairs perfectly gelled up and his eyes were red it was evident that he didn't slept last night.

Navya:Manik u woke up early.

Manik:yeah actully I have to check on Aman about a important deal so I wake up early.

Navya:ahmm I have called everyone they r getting ready plz can u go and order the breakfast in the restaurant till the time I call hotel manager and tell him to keep our luggage in the car so we can leave as early as possible bcz in August there r lot of chances of unexpected rains and snow over there.

Manik(smilingly):yeah u r right u know when there is snow the whole surrounding become so beautiful especially the mountains the clouds covers all the area over mountain and do u know once I try to climb mountain to touch the clouds but I fell down and then("Manik become silent at ones and Navya was shocked bcz for the first time she was seeing The Manik Malhothra smilingly blabbering about something she was seeing the glimpse of real Manik in him") ahh Navya I will g go and order the meal by.(and he left immediately)

Navya(had tears in her eyes): God for the first time I saw him smilling he is really a pure soul God plz send someone who can never let his smile vanish again.

Navya went to the manager and after giving instruction to manager about luggage she went to resort and saw fab5 siting and having there meal she also joined them and after breakfast they left for manali.

On the way to Manali

Manik was driving the jeep and Cabir was sitting next to him and rest were sitting back.

Cabir: yar I am hungry

Mukti:what! its not been a hour u had your breakfast and u r saying u r hungry that's insane Cabir.

Cabir:oh hello I am not mad and by the way u r so thin that even the little food u eat na that also couldn't find proper place to settle in your tummy but I am normal human being and I need food to stay alive unlike u.

(rest of all just chuckled hearing this and mukti was fuming in anger)

Mukti(in anger) : Cabir what kind of logic is this and for your information I eat a lot more then u get that.

Cabir (faking innocence and dramatically): what u eat more then me oh stupid mistake is yours and you r scolding me for asking food humm.

Mukti(cofused): what do you mean Cabir say it properly na.

Cabir: idiot if u will eat our whole food like a hungry wolf then how can u expect us to have our breakfast properly so we will eventually feel hungry na so whats our mistake in it its your mistake o god I really cant get were all this food go in your tummy.

(everyone just laughed there heart out and mukti start hitting Cabir an Navya jumped in to stop there fight)

Navya:ok guys stop it Cabir here take tese chips ok.

Cabir:ohh Navya u r savior thank you give it here or else this hungry wolf will snatch and finish it.(saying this he just grab the chips packet and start eating it the whole journey passes in lots of leg pulling and teases and of course cabirs lame jokes)

Location: Manali; Time:3:pm

Fab5 reach manali and sight infront of them just bewitched them it was so beautiful the roads were cover with trees and snow it was looking like heaven.

Location:hotel manali inn

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fab5 reach the hotel and they were greated warmly by hotel staff. And media and all were strictly banned. They were going towards the hotel Manik excuse himself and called hotel manager and said something to him which he nodded. Then he went towards his friends and sit with them and they order their lunch.

After a while

Navya: so guys lets retire back to our rooms we had a long journey.

Aliya:yeah lets go I am really tired

Just then hotel manager arrived and gave some keys to Manik.

Dhruv: buddy what happen what r these keys for.

Manik:yeah guys wo actually I am going some where I'll catch up with u later.

Cabir: Manik where r u going we have just reached I think u should rest.

Manik: no I have to go.

Cabir: but where r u going.

Manik didn't answer anything and start walking away but Cabir held his hand.

Cabir: Manik u cant go without answering.

Manik:just let me go Cabir leave my hand(trying to pull away his hand but Cabir held his hand with ful force)

Cabir(shouted):but where r u going.

Manik (shouted): to meet her god damn it.

Every one get startled Cabir slowly losened his grip on his hand.

Cabir(after coming back from shock) : u r not going anywhere.

Manik: Cabir why cant u understand I have to meet her or else she will be angry on me.

Dhruv: Manik plz understand don't go. It will only hurt u don't go plz.

Manik(annoyed): why cant u understand if I wont go she will get angry with me I can tolerate everything but not her anger.

Cabir: fine if u want to go then go we will also come with u to meet her.

Manik: I know u haven't meet her till know but today I will go alone she will be really angry after so many years I am going to meet her so first let me calm her down then I will make u meet her.

Manik didn't waited for any ones reply he just rush to hotel gate and drove away in his car rest of all were just looking him with teary eyes.

Precap: Manik(tighten his grip):who the hell r u what r u doing here stop crying and answer my question god damn it.

Girl:g g g gghost m m mm my ddd doll

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Edited by CROCKOMICHI - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesucks_78

when will nandu come😭😭😭

want manik to be happy
update soon

she is just on the way sweaty dont worry she will come soon😊😛😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel2015

amazing sweetheart..i liked CaVya today...and Manik...he wanna meet HER..and am sure..in this path..he is gonna meet HIS SOLACE...really loved it..especially that dream sequence...wow!..very well written...continue soon..am waiting eagerly..

thanks for pm

loads of love
mahi

thanks sweaty and the dream sequence i just wanto show something beautifull so this idea stuck in my mind

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